The band members are really childish and chaotic but cute... Everything is going smooth and fine but I feel like the Male Lead is kinda (ignored?). He didn't really have any major scenes and the progression of their love story is a bit (slow?). It's quite understandable, since these chapters mainly focused on describing the character of the FL, but the ML should also be involved more. Try to shape his character as well, author, and make readers more curious about how they're related or were related in the past.
2021-09-05
6
Hale💤MTN
woah Even I'm scared of fl now. But it's good that she knows how to protect herself. Please put Elijah's character more and make him appear more. Also The sweet relationship between Medeline and grandma it's so cute.
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🌠ꜱʜᴏᴏᴛɪɴɢ ꜱᴛᴀʀ🌠 🅜🅣🅝🅟
The band members are really childish and chaotic but cute... Everything is going smooth and fine but I feel like the Male Lead is kinda (ignored?). He didn't really have any major scenes and the progression of their love story is a bit (slow?). It's quite understandable, since these chapters mainly focused on describing the character of the FL, but the ML should also be involved more. Try to shape his character as well, author, and make readers more curious about how they're related or were related in the past.
2021-09-05
6
Hale💤MTN
woah Even I'm scared of fl now. But it's good that she knows how to protect herself. Please put Elijah's character more and make him appear more. Also The sweet relationship between Medeline and grandma it's so cute.
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2021-09-03
1
Ava💕<MTN>
such a good fight! I wish to see it in real😂😂❤️
2021-08-23
1