This ain’t coming off as hate or anything, but you really need to get your gramma on the right place, I literally needed to read half of the chapter over and over again to understand, as a author, your grammar needs to be in a form of version, where your readers can understand you, there can be mistakes and such in it, but not to the point, that all the chapters so far have been difficult to read, and some of the sentences are missing some few words, it’s confusing and hard to understand
I’m saying it as an advice, so you know that you have a lot of grammatical errors and mistakes.
Because like this, some readers don’t want to read stories, which are really hard to understand.
2021-09-21
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Taeyung is not dead ?
2021-08-21
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Zade xavier
feel gossibumps seeing devil 😈 character of taehyung
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This ain’t coming off as hate or anything, but you really need to get your gramma on the right place, I literally needed to read half of the chapter over and over again to understand, as a author, your grammar needs to be in a form of version, where your readers can understand you, there can be mistakes and such in it, but not to the point, that all the chapters so far have been difficult to read, and some of the sentences are missing some few words, it’s confusing and hard to understand
I’m saying it as an advice, so you know that you have a lot of grammatical errors and mistakes.
Because like this, some readers don’t want to read stories, which are really hard to understand.
2021-09-21
1
Taeyung is not dead ?
2021-08-21
0
Zade xavier
feel gossibumps seeing devil 😈 character of taehyung
2021-07-30
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