RESULTS!!
shizuka
i am back with the results..
shizuka
but before the result..
let's welcome our one only judge misty💖
shizuka
misty welcome to my event and I am very happy to have u as my judge.
misty
thanks shizu and it's my pleasure to be here.
shizuka
I have told you all in the previous chap that not only the result but the reviews on where the person went wrong matters, becoz if we can't pick the mistakes what's the use then!
shizuka
let's start then...
The first prize goes to emotionless devil.
shizuka
misty ur review...
misty
yes...
This writing was simple but heart touching. I could feel each and every line. In simple language and within a very short amount of words everything was explained.
shizuka
yes..
I was happy how she interlinked freedom and depression.
like it went out so well
misty
It was good. I'm speechless. It's because the writer has written a very simple yet deep meaning writing. While others, to be honest have used quite complicated words which might be difficult to understand.
The second prize goes to crystal.
shizuka
ur reviews on this misty.
misty
yess..
The idea of writing a story and then describing about depression was a good one. I must appreciate it.
shizuka
Yes,I was quite into the story, it was jst like reading a story book which contain lots of treasure and moral that one can find at the end.
misty
yahh u are so true.
But it would've been good if the writer could've written about how to overcome depression, by writing a good end to the story.
The 3rd prize goes to two winners-junior critic and Snigdha
shizuka
misty ur reviews..
misty
yes about junior-
I liked the thought. Those two lines had a deep meaning. It would've been more ear-catching if rhyming words were used at the end of both the lines.
misty
and about Sg-
Think positive and live positive!! It was a good line. The whole writing was short, simple yet good. The writer has overally focused on how depression affects our life and how we can overcome it.
shizuka
yah i was impressed with jr,when she wrote about strong willed and determination to overcome it.
shizuka
yah Sg words was like simple word with deep meanings, right?
misty
yahh in sg case-
The Writer has written his or her own life experience which makes it even more real to read this. Overally, the writing was good and well-balanced.
misty
and in Jr case-
The writer has focused more on how people get depressed and their causes. But she hasn't described more about how we can overcome it and instead of “depression" she should have used “it".
shizuka
And thanks to the other participants ur writing were also good.
shizuka
misty thank u so much for ths perfect reviews.
you reviews are really on points.
misty
ur welcome shizuka and I am happy to be a judge here.
misty
And congratulations to all the participants here , I don't know who all are they as names were unknown to me.
But those writings are flawless 💖
shizuka
I am so much impressed with all those writings,
like literally their every word make me feel like yes this happens, this also..
shizuka
last but not the least gonna thank Bianca for managing it perfectly.
Bianca
your welcome shizuka.
shizuka
The winners gonna tell me if they need points or rose and vote on which chatstory.
shizuka
but lastly I am vry busy nowadays I don't know if I can conduct anymore competation but if you are gonna tell me I should conduct another competation soon or not.
shizuka
and if yes then Bianca has to manage it, I can come here much less and more often... so let's hope for the best.
Bianca
yah I am there to help u when u need me!!
Comments
Smexy Sg~✧💜✿Hyunjin✿
congratulations to all and thanks for the review I really didn't thought the line I keep in my heart to overcome any obstacles "think positive live positive" will actually amaze the judge 😂
anyways thank you so much. and again Congo to all the winners and participants.
♡(ӦｖӦ｡)
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🐣✨Crispy Creamy Popcorn🍿💛
mubarka👁👄👁👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻😂😂😂🍿
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_Emotionless_devil_😈
thanks for ur review I enjoyed writing my heart out though I really can't believe I got first but thank u and congratulations to all participants 💕💕😇
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