there are so many grammatical errors like strock - stroke vegan - verge toce - toss surly - surely junkook - jungkook etc ....
it ruins mood of reading although the story line is soo food and the plot is soo perfect but most the readers won't like it especially there are many elder readers rather than teen readers and they lose interest when they see grammatical errors...i personally dropped many novels which had a good plot line but bad english... although i wanted to read them they were not understandable by me and i lost interest to read so i hope u edit those mistakes and make it error free for more readers and don't use errors as a strategy to gain more comments because its annoying to rectify it in comments and then the comment number increases...i haven't liked any of your chapter because of grammar errors
2022-09-04
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update more
2021-08-22
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Elle
I didn't downloaded it bcz it was in the screen shot so please share the photos again in next chapter
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someoneyeetmeaway
there are so many grammatical errors like
strock - stroke
vegan - verge
toce - toss
surly - surely
junkook - jungkook
etc ....
it ruins mood of reading although the story line is soo food and the plot is soo perfect but most the readers won't like it especially there are many elder readers rather than teen readers and they lose interest when they see grammatical errors...i personally dropped many novels which had a good plot line but bad english... although i wanted to read them they were not understandable by me and i lost interest to read so i hope u edit those mistakes and make it error free for more readers and don't use errors as a strategy to gain more comments because its annoying to rectify it in comments and then the comment number increases...i haven't liked any of your chapter because of grammar errors
2022-09-04
0
update more
2021-08-22
0
Elle
I didn't downloaded it bcz it was in the screen shot so please share the photos again in next chapter
2021-08-22
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