Let Me Be Her
Chapter 1- Chased away
Lil'Miss Cookie (Author)
Hi!
Lil'Miss Cookie (Author)
I'm back with another chat story😄
Lil'Miss Cookie (Author)
First, Let me introduce the characters
💞 Our Cute and Outgoing FL💞
Age: 18 yrs. old
Personality: Friendly, Outgoing, Lively,
Hardworking and Courageous
Addiction: Anything that's cute 🐰
- Maxine come from the orphanage and wants to start her own life.
💞 Our Shameless Male Lead 💞
Age: 19 yrs. old
Personality: Lazy, Shameless, Loves to
drink, and Troublemaker
Addiction: Vodka and Lauryn
- Can't forget that Lauren is already dead for him no can change Lauren in his life.
💞 Our Happy Go Lucky 2nd ML💞
Age: 18 yrs. old
Personality: Lively, Kind, Cheerful,
and Outgoing
Addiction: Gaming 🎮 and Sweets 🥯
- Lyra's bestfriend that's mistaken to be Luaren's other boyfriend by Yeal.
Lil'Miss Cookie (Author)
That's our important characters 😉
Lil'Miss Cookie (Author)
You'll meet more new characters along the whole story.
Lil'Miss Cookie (Author)
Now! Let's start the story 💕
💞 Outside the orphanage 💞
Maxine's journey is going to start because she's being chased out of the orphanage since she is already 18.
Maxine ( FL )
I can do this!😄 *high fighting spirit*
Maxine ( FL )
*Packing her luggage*
Maxine gets out of the orphanage with knowing where to stay.
Maxine ( FL )
*Walking* I'm starting to get tired 😩
She asked few people if there's any apartments or dorms nearby.
Maxine ( FL )
Hi! excuse me. 😄 *wave*
Maxine ( FL )
Can I ask you a question?
It happened that a guy playing basketball at the street is a local.
Bailey (2nd ML)
*Stops playing basketball* What is it?😕
Maxine ( FL )
Can asked you if there is apartments nearby?
Bailey (2nd ML)
Yeah, there is but it is a little bit expensive.... because you seems like to be a student.
Maxine ( FL )
It's fine although it's a expensive.
He looked at me up and down scanning if I can pay the rent.
Maxine ( FL )
Where is it?
Bailey (2nd ML)
I can go with you if you trust me.
Maxine ( FL )
Okay, I'll trust you because you seems nice.
Bailey (2nd ML)
Come I'll get you there. *starts walking*
He walks through a small street and at the corner there is a apartments for rent sign.
He knocked at a door in the middle.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Wait! coming... *shouting from the inside*
As we hear foot steps walking to the door.
Bailey (2nd ML)
Sister Gianna!
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Wait!
And the door flies wide open.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
What is it?
Maxine ( FL )
I am planning to rent a apartment.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Do you have the down payment it will cost 10000RMB and it's good for 3 months rent.
Maxine ( FL )
I am sorry but I don't have that much money. Can I just pay one month rent?
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Then you can just rent a room in my house.
Maxine ( FL )
How much would it cost?
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
3000RMB can you pay for that?
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
That's just the down payment.
Maxine ( FL )
Can I pay it later?
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
No!😕
The door slams right on my face.
Maxine ( FL )
Thank you for your help.😄
Bailey (2nd ML)
Your welcome... But where are you going to stay now?*worried voice*
Maxine ( FL )
I'll just live where I can pay the rent.
Bailey (2nd ML)
I can talk to her or maybe I can lend you some money.
Maxine ( FL )
But aren't you afraid that I will run with your money?
Bailey (2nd ML)
Nah... you seems like a good girl.
Maxine ( FL )
Thank you, but I don't have a money to pay you back.
Maxine ( FL )
I still have to find a job.
Bailey (2nd ML)
It's alright I can get you an apartment at sister Gianna's.
Maxine ( FL )
But it's 10,000RMB.
Bailey (2nd ML)
It's just a small amount of money.
Maxine's curious where would he get some money. He seems like we are just at the same age.
Bailey (2nd ML)
If you need anything I live there.
He points into a huge house just across the street.
Maxine ( FL )
Now I get it... you have lots of money.
Bailey (2nd ML)
It's my parents money actually and I believe that you well pay me back.
Maxine ( FL )
I promise I will you back as soon as possible.
Bailey (2nd ML)
No, need to hurry about the payment.
Bailey (2nd ML)
Yeah... btw, I'm Bailey Dasovich.
Maxine ( FL )
I'm Maxine Hope Del Fuego
Bailey (2nd ML)
Del Fuego??🧐
Maxine ( FL )
Yeah that's my last name.
Bailey (2nd ML)
I'll just talk to Sister Gianna. You wait here.
Maxine ( FL )
*Sits on the sidewalk*
He entered Gianna's house as if it is his.
After a while he gets out with Gianna.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
I'm sorry about earlier. *Mood change *
Maxine ( FL )
No, problem.
Maxine smiled now finally she have a place where she can stay.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
About the down payment Bailey and I already settled it.
Maxine ( FL )
Thank you, but Bailey I would really pay you back next month.
Bailey (2nd ML)
Okay, just take your time.
Bailey (2nd ML)
I need to go home my dad's looking for me. *runs towards his home*
Maxine ( FL )
Byee... *waved at Bailey*
Bailey (2nd ML)
*Wave back*
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
You know Bailey don't just help anyone, like that.
Maxine ( FL )
So I am the first person he helped?
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
No, but he doesn't let anyone lend some money.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
I am not here to talk about that.
Maxine ( FL )
Yeah I know even anyone well not help me just like that.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
You must be tired this is your apartment key... please don't lose it. *gives the keys*
Maxine ( FL )
I promise I won't.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Come I'll send you straight to your apartment.
Chapter 2 - New Apartment
They reached the door of Maxine's apartment and open it.
Maxine ( FL )
Sister Gianna are you sure this is just 10,000RMB for 3 months? *curious what secret is there*
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Yup...
Maxine ( FL )
Is there something that happened in here?
As Maxine's eyes wonder around it's really nice and the things is very luxurious.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
You want me to honest?😕
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
No one wants to live here because someone died in here.
Maxine ( FL )
Are you sure?😳 *shocked*
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Yup... it's a girl about your age dead in here because of cancer.
Maxine ( FL )
How sad. *feeling sad*
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Don't you worry it's safe to live here because this apartment is already blessed by the priest.*making Maxine conformable*
Maxine ( FL )
Okay... Any ways I'm not afraid of ghost because the orphanage has a grave yard at the back of it.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
I still have things to be settled... I'll get going first. *gets out of the apartment*
Maxine ( FL )
She's definitely scared in this apartment.
Maxine ( FL )
How would I pay this apartment? *wondering*
Maxine ( FL )
And How would I pay the bills?
Maxine ( FL )
Ahhh...😩 I forget about those.
Maxine's head hurts from thinking where should I get the money.
She take a bath at the bathroom since she bring my own necessities.
After taking a bath she change my clothes so she can sleep.
But someone knock at the door.
Yeal ( ML )
Knock!!! Knock!!!
He knock and knock non-stop.
Maxine ( FL )
Wait!! *shouts*
Maxine run to the door as I see a guy so stinks.
Maxine ( FL )
Brother! Your in the wrong apartment. *looking at the drunk man*
Yeal ( ML )
My Queen! *hugs her tight*
Maxine ( FL )
*Trys to push him away*
But he is so strong that she can't barely move him.
Yeal ( ML )
I missed you, my queen. *he cried*
Maxine ( FL )
I'm not your Queen! *shouts*
Yeal ( ML )
No, your my queen... my only love.
Maxine ( FL )
I think you got the wrong person.
Maxine ( FL )
What is my name?*trying to act calm*
Maxine ( FL )
Brother, I am not Lauren Ting... I'm Maxine Hope Del Fuego.
He is still hugging me until he passed out. Then she put him inside at the couch.
Maxine goes down stairs to Sister Gianna's house.
Maxine ( FL )
*running as fast as she could*
Maxine ( FL )
*Sigh* woohh...
Maxine ( FL )
*Knocks on the door* Sister Gianna!!! *shouts*
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
*Opening the door* What's the problem?😕
Maxine ( FL )
Sister there is a guy at my apartment calling me "My Queen".
Maxine's keep breathing so hard.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Isn't it just your boyfriend?
Maxine ( FL )
I don't have a boyfriend and he said my name is "Lauren Ting".
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
I know that guy Yale is causing another problem again.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Come we should get him out of your apartment.
She gets back inside and get the keys.
She goes upstairs with Maxine.
Maxine opened the door of my apartment and see him laying down so peacefully.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Yale!! *waking him up*
She tap his shoulder and shake him hard.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Yale!! wake up... you're not at your apartment! *yelling*
But he is still sleeping.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Maxine can he just stay at your couch tonight?
*asking permission*
Maxine ( FL )
It's fine as long as he won't hug me.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
I'm sure he won't cause any trouble. His a deep sleeper.
Maxine points the guy who is laying down at my couch.
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
His Yale he lives next door. This apartment is Lauren's apartment before you rent it out.
Maxine ( FL )
Hmmm... okay!
Gianna (FL's Landlady)
Just close your bedroom so he can't go inside.
Maxine ( FL )
Okay, Sister Gianna.
Sister Gianna walks out. Leaving me a drunk man in my couch.
Maxine ( FL )
His probably sad. *feeling pitty*
Maxine walk to my bedroom and close the door.
Chapter 3- Ramen
Maxine ( FL )
Ahhh~ *waking up*
Maxine ( FL )
*Takes a bath*
Maxine ( FL )
I need to buy some breakfast.
She looks at my wallet and there is still 300RMB left.
Maxine ( FL )
Haystt... I really need to look for a job.
She pick up my keys and lock the door.
I walk to find a store to buy some food.
When she see Bailey walking back to his house covered with sweat.
Bailey (2nd ML)
Good morning, Maxine! *greets her with a smile*
Maxine ( FL )
Good morning, Bailey.😄
Bailey (2nd ML)
Where are you going?
Maxine ( FL )
At a supermarket or any store.
Bailey (2nd ML)
Do you need some help? *offers to help*
Maxine ( FL )
No, need I already troubled you a lot. *feeling shy*
Bailey (2nd ML)
Okay, the nearest supermarket is in the second left corner. *still helps her by giving direction*
Maxine ( FL )
Okay, Thanks ... Byee!😄
He entered there house as Maxine walks to the supermarket. She get lost for a while until I see the logo of the supermarket.
Maxine ( FL )
What would I cook today? *asking herself*
She see a promotion of instant ramen buy 1 take 1 pack.
Maxine ( FL )
*Having an idea* I'll just cook instant ramen with egg.
Maxine goes towards the ramen section and grab 4 packs since it's just 50RMB each.
After she to the poultry section and see eggs.
Maxine ( FL )
Why it's so expensive?😨
I pick one dozen for just 70RMB.
Maxine ( FL )
*Paying at the counter*
She arrives back home and cook ramen.
Yeal ( ML )
Good morning, my queen!
He hugs her from the back and kiss her neck.
Maxine ( FL )
Brother, Stop! *pushing him away*
Yeal ( ML )
Your not Lauren! *shocked*
Maxine ( FL )
Yeah! I'm not Lauren because I am Maxine Hope. *shouts*
Yeal ( ML )
But this is Lauren's apartment. *wondering*
Maxine ( FL )
Yeah, she is the previous owner but I am living her know.
Maxine ( FL )
Since yesterday if I where you I won't just hug anybody.
Yeal ( ML )
Hug? It's just a mistake!!
Maxine ( FL )
Do you need me to help you recall it?
Yeal ( ML )
No, need I think I remember.
Base in his face his doesn't remember anything.
Maxine ( FL )
Here ramen will help you remove hangovers.
She pass him a bowl of instant ramen.
Yeal ( ML )
Thank you and sorry about yesterday if I did any wrong. *saying with a low voice"
Maxine ( FL )
Hmmm...You should be punish.
Yeal ( ML )
What kind of punishment?
Maxine ( FL )
Buy me a one week food supply and please don't do it anymore.
Yeal ( ML )
One week food supply? 😕
Maxine ( FL )
Yeah, or I should report you to the police barging in someone's house.
Yeal ( ML )
Okay... Okay... just one week food supply.
Maxine ( FL )
But if you would do it again it would be one month food supply.
Yeal ( ML )
Don't you worry it happened again.
Maxine ( FL )
Okay... just make sure or you'll need me to buy one month food supply.
Maxine gets a bowl of ramen for herself and eat. He's eyes suddenly sparkle when he eats her instant ramen.
Yeal ( ML )
You cook really well. *surprised*
Maxine ( FL )
It's just instant ramen.
Yeal ( ML )
But it doesn't taste like that.
Maxine ( FL )
Okay... Thank you for praising my instant ramen. 🤭*chuckles*
They both eat peacefully because she shouldn't make it so dramatically she know he just miss her.
Maxine also know the feeling of lossing the you love it really hurts deep down.
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