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Going Back To My Creation [Bl]

~Awake(Remakes)~

*The night sky, today was much brighter than any other days*
*It seems rather strange, how it happens on this certain day*
*Today was a full moon, a noise could be heard*
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*It sounds like shackles breaking*
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
Finally, the last piece
*Yin Shen broke free from the last piece of shackle*
*Yin Shen looked around*
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Yin Shen
Yin Shen
Why was I here...
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
I don't remember being here
*Suddenly a shock flash into Yin Shen head*
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
Ugh!
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
My head
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
It hurts...
*Yin Shen mind when blank and he passed out*
*A mechanic voice started ringing in Yin Shen head*
????: Master master, wake up
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
(Huh)
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
(Is that you system?)
System error1: Yes, it's me master
System error1: Welcome back (≧▽≦)
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
(Do you know what going on?)
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
(And how I end it up here?)
System error1: My apologies, master, I don't know as well
System error1: Something happen and I was forced to shut down
System error1: The only thing I remember was calling out to you
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
I see...
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
There must have been something or someone behind this
System error1: Should I check my memories again?
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
No
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
There no point, since we may end up with the same result
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
Beside all this
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
I don't want to stay in this place any longer
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
We should get going
System error1: Master, should we return to your bedroom
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
Yes
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
I need some time to think things over and rest
*Yin Shen formed a teleportation portal and enter*
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--Bedroom--
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
System, I am going to rest now
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
We will discuss, once I wake up
System error1: Very well master, please have a good rest
--A few hours later--
*Yin Shen woke up*
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
System
System error1: Yes master?
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
While I was asleep. I found out fragments of my power are gone
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
I can sense that it out there somewhere
System error1: Let me check
--Few minutes later--
System error1: Master, your power was indeed scattered
System error1: It should be somewhere around the world you created
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
Just by knowing that, I can already tell that there has to be someone
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
who I was fighting with, and I somehow end up defeated
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
As a result, that unknown person must have locked me up and scattered my power
System error1: That horrible, how could a person do this (ᗒᗩᗕ)
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
Don't forget the fact that it can even shut you down
System error1: That means, it much powerful than us 0-0
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
That could be true, but there a possibility that the power he has borrowed or even stolen
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
There no way that person could hold this much power without finding a way to gain it
System error1: Than what should we do master ;n;
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
For now, I need to recover my power
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
And until then we will find out who done it
System error1: Great idea ^u^
*While Yin Shen was chatting with his system a paper slip out of his jacket*
*Yin Shin heard a sound and looked down*
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
A paper?
*Yin Shen begin to read it*
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Yin Shen
Yin Shen
....
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
I see, you think I won't be able to beat you
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
We will see when time comes..
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
System!
System error1: Yes master
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
Send me to the world where my power fragments is
System error1: Right now?
Yin Shen
Yin Shen
Yes
System error1: Right away master
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--Author note--
Author (Dawn)
Author (Dawn)
Hi everyone
Author (Dawn)
Author (Dawn)
I am remaking this story since I have some new ideas
Author (Dawn)
Author (Dawn)
There still be some old scene in it
Author (Dawn)
Author (Dawn)
I am posting in this one because I can't post on the other one for some reason
Author (Dawn)
Author (Dawn)
I deleted the old one and added the new one but somehow it still show the old one
Author (Dawn)
Author (Dawn)
Anyway I hope you enjoy this remake

Highschool

*A voice could be heard calling out to someone*
: Xie Hua!!
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(Ugh my head)
System error1: Master, you need to respond to someone calling to you
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(So the owner of this body is called Xie Hua)
*Xie Hua looked up and saw someone grabbing on his shoulder*
Zhan Li
Zhan Li
Xie Hua are you done now -_-
System error1: This person is the original body friend, he is called Zhan Li
System error1: He has known you since middle school
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
Ya, sorry about that
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
I just don't feel well today
Zhan Li
Zhan Li
You should have told me!
Zhan Li
Zhan Li
Is it because of that girl name Mei Zhen
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(Who that?)
System error1: She the female lead of this world
System error1: You will know more about her once you meet her
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
It not about her..
*Zhan Li was shocked, he looked at Xie Hua*
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
What?
Zhan Li
Zhan Li
I'm shocked, I mean whenever you are upset is always about that girl name Mei Zhen
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
I know, but I am going to give up on her now
*Zhan Li looked at Xie Hua in disbelief*
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
I am serious!
Zhan Li
Zhan Li
Xie Hua, you really have change
Zhan Li
Zhan Li
Back then you always fight Shen Ci over Mei Zhen
System error1: Just like the female lead you will know more about the male lead when you meet
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(It makes me don't want to meet them)
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
Anyway Zhan Li, I am going home
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
I want to rest since I don't feel well
Zhan Li
Zhan Li
Ok see you tomorrow then
Zhan Li
Zhan Li
Have a good rest
*Xie Hua said goodbye to Zhan Li then head out of school*
*While walking out he heard someone talking*
System error1: ❗Alarm Alarm❗
System error1: It the ML and the FL
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(What are the ML and the FL doing there?)
*Xie Hua walk a little closer and hide around the corner*
*He listens in on what the FL and the ML talking about*
Mei Zhan
Mei Zhan
Shen Ci, are you busy this weekend?
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
No
Mei Zhan
Mei Zhan
Then, would you go out to a movie with me?
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
Sure, anything you like
Mei Zhan
Mei Zhan
Really! ☺️
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--Mei Zhan smile--
Mei Zhan
Mei Zhan
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
Yes?
Mei Zhan
Mei Zhan
Sorry, but today you don't have to walk me home
Mei Zhan
Mei Zhan
Cause, I have something to do
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
Then, I will walk you home tomorrow
Mei Zhan
Mei Zhan
Ok
Mei Zhan
Mei Zhan
See you tomorrow at school
*When Mei Zhen left, Shen Ci walk away as well*
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(Are they already dating or something)
System error1: They are
System error1: Your task in this world is to make the ML fall in love with you
System error1: There will be a love meter to show where you are at
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(Now I have to find a way to make the ML break up with the FL)
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(What a pain ┐( ̄ヘ ̄)┌)
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(All I want to do is go home and relax)
*Xie Hua was about to walk out of the corner*
*When suddenly someone pull him from behind*
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
W...who..
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Xie Hua change?

*A voice whisper into Xie Hua ear*
: I didn't know that you like to hear in on other people conversation from behind
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
Who are you!
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
Wait
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
Shen Ci?
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
Yes, it's me
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
What are you doing here 😅
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
Well, I want to ask you the same thing, what are you doing here in the corner
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
Uh, I just happen to walk by...
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
Right
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
You were listening in on my conversation with Mei Zhen
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
How many times have I told you to give up on Mei Zhen already!
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
I already give up
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
You...what...
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
As I said, I won't chase after Mei Zhan from now on
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
So you don't have to worry about your Mei Zhen being stolen
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
You are lying!!
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
Instead, I will go after you :9
*Shen Ci stand there frozen just looking at Xie Hua in shocked*
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
Hehehe
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
You look so funny with that expression on your face
*Xie Hua pulled at Shen Ci bow tie and kiss him on the cheek*
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
See you tomorrow ❤️
*Xie Hua walked away*
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--Shen Ci blushed--
*By the time Shen Ci regain consciousness Xie Hua was already long gone*
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
XIE HUA!
Shen Ci
Shen Ci
DON'T THINK YOU CAN GET AWAY WITH THIS!!
Love meter: -20%
---Back to Xie Hua--
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(System did you see that look on his face 😆)
System error1: Yes, he was very shocked 😅
System error1: But master, aren't you going a bit too fast.
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(I know)
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(It better to complete this mission fast the faster it done the faster I can recover my power)
System error1: True
System error1: What are you going to do?
System error1: He won't let you get away with this ( ̄ヘ ̄;)
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(Well, I will just act more shameless in front of him (^-^)
System error1: Master what have become of you 😣
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(Shhhh)
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(I am going to take a nap)
--A few minutes later--
Butler
Butler
Young master you have arrive home
*Xie Hua got off the car*
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Aunt Ji
Aunt Ji
Welcome back sweetie
System error1: This is your aunt Ji, but the original owner call her mother
System error1: The original owner parent passed away, your aunt and uncle feel bad for you so they took you in
System error1: Besides they didn't have children of their own. And Aunt Ji can't give birth due to some issue
System error1: When they brought Xie Hua in, they spoil him
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(Now I get why he act the way he did)
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(The original owner fall in love with Mei Zhen, and since he spoils he thought he can get anything he wants)
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(He's too dumb to know that there many fish out in the sea that he could of caught)
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
(But he just have to look on getting that one fish)
*Xie Hua sigh*
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
I'm back mother
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--Xie Hua smiles--
Uncle Zhang
Uncle Zhang
Let go in already, I am starving
Uncle Zhang
Uncle Zhang
Your mother made me wait until you come home to eat
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
Thanks for waiting for me mother and father
Aunt Ji
Aunt Ji
(Xie Hua is being so polite today)
Aunt Ji
Aunt Ji
(Something good must have happen to him)
Aunt Ji
Aunt Ji
Mother cooked you your favorite dish today
Xie Hua
Xie Hua
I can't wait to eat it ☺️
Aunt Ji
Aunt Ji
Ok all of you let go in
*Xie Hua, Aunt Ji and Uncle Shin walked inside the house*
To be continue...

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