I wake up I scream I am dead I look up I see my best friend are we in heaven i ask yes she said in a long voice let me help you up she said with a cold stare at me i grab her hand and stand up i look in shock its so beautiful here yes it is she says in a cute voice what's on the other side of that wall i said oh that don't go over there that's were the demons are she said sadly oh ok i said back let me show you around bing said ok I say 1 hour later I walk I to a room and I cant see bing qing. ten mins earlier. this is your room this is my room and do go into that room ever! oh and over here is where we eat she says she walked around the corner and I can't see her anymore so look around for her. right now ugh where is she I say then I hear her yelling my name Jia!? I call back bing! she runs to me hugging me I hug back here you are I found you she said happily. on the other side in hell li Wei! he yells out yes devil li Wei says back I there am a new angle on the other side I want you to make her come to are side so she can e a demon got it he said happily yes sir li Wei says back. back to the other side. hey, jia bing says yes bing I say can you stop hugging me now pls let me go 10 mins bing says angrily ok I say I let go let's go to bed I say ok bing says. good night I say good night she says back. the next morning good morning bing I say good morning to you to her says tiredly let's eat I say. after eating we go play basketball and football and make friends and play more games. ugh, I am so tired k says trying to breathe let's go back and see what the people on earth are doing bing ays ok let's go I say. we fly to the mirror and go into it. look I see my dead body I say me to bing says look over there it is, parent, they are so sad but look at my step sister shes not sad she so happy that she's going to a night club I hate her lets put something in her drink she says happily ok I say. we turn in to people and walk over to her and sit down. hey, girl, you bored let play a game who can drink the most I say ok let's do it waiter 40 cups of alcohol she says lets split 40 cups of alcohol and see who wins I say but if you win you go home untouched but if you lose you have to sleep with that old man he looks like he wants a girl to sleep step sister: ok but if I win you need to sleep with all the people her ok let's do it so they start gulping down the drinks but the evil step-sister didn't know that the two girls she was drinking with was here for revenge Jia and bing win and the stepsister was so drunk so they called an old man to "take care of her" bing: yay that's done but be for that lets go shopping and eat some desserts and go to the movies jia: ok (note from me this the first novel I hope you like it and I made this for you guys)

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jia: ok let's go oh look it's that guy from yesterday bing: yep that guy him wait look at what he's has in his hand this some red stuff leaking out of it wow it so red eh what ever but oh he's running come on jia let's go after him "pulls jia" jia: ah my food not again we just got food come on bing: oh we lost him dammit i was going to teach him a lesson eh what ever

on li Weis side li Wei: omg they almost got me so close better go back to hell back to jia and bings side jia: sense we did not get him and you ruined my food let's go back home bing: no let's go shopping jia: ok fine but only because I would like that ok at the mall bing: look at this it's so pretty and look at this it's so cool wow so much clothes let's check out now they pay for stuff and so they go back to heaven at the other side

Li Wei: God I hate it here in hell let's see what that new girl in heaven is doing wall show me the new girl in heaven. wall: yes sir. in heaven

bing: Jia let's go wash up me: yeah sure

we head to the bathroom and take off are close

and start showing. in hell li Wei: omg they are showing oh my nose is bleeding wall shut off.

wall: yes sir in 20 mins later on earth: bing! ahhh there's blood on the wall ahhhhh!!!! bing:

it's ok I will see what it is omg it's it's it's ahhhhh!!!previously: bing there's blood on the wall!!

ahhhhh!!!! bing: it's ok I will go ahhhhh!!!! it's!! it's! it's! a dead!! body!!! ahhhhh! ahhhhh!!!!

Jia: what should we do bing: we should call the police Jia: ok bring hello this is 911 how can I help you bing: we found a dead body in the showroom at Raven hotel pls bring an ambulance just in case pls they might be a live

ok I will send help now

TO BE CONTINUED

911:ok there is a team coming right your way stay right there OK they will take you to the police station bing: OK thank you (hangs up) OK his there coming we have to go now they will ask us questions and for are age name and why where here so let's go back up their to heaven OK jia: OK let's go (they disappear) 20 minutes earlier in hell devil: go and kill these guys on this list start top to bottom OK like wei: got it sir (like wei disappears) at the same place the girls were at like wei: why would he be in the girls bathroom he what ever let's kill you die "stab stab stab" like we stop screaming I hear someone else coming OMG it's the girl got to hide and the body (hides) jia: ahhh!!! there's blood leaking through the wall ahhh!! bing: let me see what it is ahhh!!! its it's it's a dead body ah!!!? jia: call 911 after 2 minutes in life weis mind: I can't hear them I think their gone "looks" OK their gone a sigh of relief OK be for we go back to hell got to kill the other guys next is a waiter at a restaurant OK here now we're is he waiter: you looking for me demon li wei: god you scared me how can you see me I am invisible waiter: I can't see you but an angel told me you would be here to kill me. right now so kill me I don't need this life anymore li wei: who told You waiter: can't say li wei: OK die "stab stab stab" waiter: erghhhh by.... li wei: good bye to you to now who's next hmm ah this guy a traiter of my gang heh you will die today hahahhaha! hell old friend guy: li wei!!? is that you li wei: yes it is me you traiter! guy: li we pls for give me plz I know you hate m. erghhhh "stab stab"

li wei: next is j a and k I hate all of you ugh hi j did you miss me after my death were you watch me die haha such good memories am I right j: li wei you you came back you must die I hate you so much die! b#tch li wei: god your still the same bye bye "stab stab" hahahhaha li wei: next you a hi a wants up u look shocked I am here you poor thing you still live in your moms house haha now die a: no wai...t...erghhh "stab stab" now K my ex girlfriend hey k you look so happy sleeping with old men for money you went bank rupt so fast after selling my gangs company hahahhaha I am not sad for you but you will die today bye-bye my ex lover K: let me explain I love... "stab stab" erghhhh li wei: you love? me you got to be kidding me I hate you sl#t haha now let's go back unknown guy: yes master

to be continued