Fate's Second Promise
episode 1
Kritika (previous life)
*lying lifeless,looking at someone*
Kritika (previous life)
you betrayed me.... BOTH OF YOU ...BETRAYED ME
*shouts *
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*hugging Sonali*
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
ohoo didi you know na once a woman goes to jail her life becomes useless
*in a sweet poison tone*
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
and after your mother passed away no one is there to care for you anymore *dirty smirk*
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
now what will you do being alive also
*scoff*
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
Kritika (previous life)
I kn...know..I know everything i went to jail because of you😡😢
Kritika (previous life)
you both planned everything 😡😢
Kritika (previous life)
you both killed my mom as well and now you want to finish me too😡😡😡
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
whatever is happening to you.... you deserve it.... if you won’t die you'll tell everyone and we can't afford that
*devilish smirks*
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
My dearest sister don't worry even dad knows all this and in fact he is preparing for your funeral after all how can he ignore your sacrifice for our family right
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
*telling her as if she cares a lot for her*
Kritika (previous life)
*laughing*
she was laughing and it was like a sudden rage had rushed into her eyes....
the father who gave birth to her her biological father wants to kill her for Sonali.... for Kritika there were only two men in her life one her father second her childhood love aniket
but here her father only takes sonali as his daughter and not only that even Aniket loved sonali and never cared for Kritika... and today both the important people of her life wanted to kill her
Kritika (previous life)
*pressed her hands on the broken glasses*
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Kritika (previous life)
*blood flowing*
at that moment she jump onto sonali and bit her ear to the point it started to bleed
Kritika (previous life)
you wanted to kill me right 😡😂😂
Kritika (previous life)
then come die with me
*holding her*
Kritika (previous life)
😂😂😂😂😡
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
no..no..no leave me please Aniket
*yelping for help*
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
aniket help me 😭😭😭
but it was too late by the time aniket helped her the fire was already engulfing everything
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*stepped forward to help sonali*
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*a wooden cupboard fell down him*
Kritika (previous life)
*looking at Aniket crying in pain*
Kritika (previous life)
this is how you both deserve to die
*cursing both of them*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*wakes up with a jolt*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*breathing heavily*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*head aching*
she was trying to understand where she was....the moment she understood that she was in a hotel room she started looking here and there then she saw a man lying lifeless with blood all over...
Kritika Rathod (FL)
💭💭what is all this
Kritika felt that all this has happened before too but when .... maybe in her last life ... yes.... this is happening the second time to her....
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*trying to remember everything*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
wasn't i suppose to die on that fire
*mumbles to herself*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
but here I am safe and sound
Kritika Rathod (FL)
does that mean god has given me another chance to live my life
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*mumbles to herself*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*about to raise both her hands and got startled seeing a bloody lamp on her hands*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*threw it*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
my hands are safe then from where did this blood come from
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*stood up and went to see the man lying lifeless*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*understood*
this is the same day where her whole life change and she had to go away from her mother
when she was 22 years old
she remembered that in her last life she was sonali's assistant.... sonali had started modelling at the young age of 16 and by 20 she became a top model
and today the universe has brought her in the same day before she was separated from her mother and darkness took over her life
Kritika was never interested in modelling she always wanted to become a famous fashion designer but Sonali wanted to become an actress and Kritika's father to complete his younger daughter sonali's dream he invest a huge amount in a film production house
since he feared that his daughter will get hurt in the dirty politics of the entertainment world that's why to protect sonali he forced Kritika to stop her fashion designing and made her sonali's assistant
the world knows only sonali as the Rathods daughter but in reality it was Kritika who was Rathods biological daughter and sonali became a rathod after her mother married Kritika's dad
the world took sonali as the heir of the Rathods but Kritika never minded all these things.... Kritika's mother was sick and her father divorced her had it been she didn’t care about her mother's health she would have left the rathod family
the man lying on the ground was a director whom sonali came to meet for a role
but we all know what happen in this kind of meetings
sonali wanted to bring Kritika and ask her to sleep with the director so she can get a role
when Kritika denied she hit her head with the lamp making her faint but what sonali didn’t realise was that when she hit Kritika the lamp broke and a part of the lamp stab the directors neck leading to bleeding
Kritika Rathod (FL)
I need to go away from here
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*took her hanky and wipe her fingerprints and searching for evidences*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
💭💭 in my past life i didn’t wake up this early and because of the fingerprints all the evidence pointed me as the suspect
Kritika Rathod (FL)
but today it won't happen again😤
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*went to the balcony and looks here and there*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*saw a window open and jump towards the other balcony*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*looks behind and shock*
cindy
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episode 2
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you know I've seen many girls who forcefully tries to get close to me but
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I have never met a girl who jump into my room that too from the window *jokingly*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
💭💭💭wait wait wait..... isn’t he NIKHIL OBEROI
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*looking at him who is only in his towel*
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
the one who came out of the bathroom 👈
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
*came forward and touch her face*
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
you know we are in the 25th floor right now....don't you think you you've work too hard just to meet me
*smirks*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*about to say something but heard someone's voice*
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how is that possible... did she run out from the balcony
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*surprised hearing his voice*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
💭💭 Aniket😡😈
even though its her second life but she'll never forget the voice of her cheater ex- boyfriend Aniket Arya
she remembers clearly that in her last life the director did not die but the wound was deep as the glass went deep into his neck
and for hurting the director she was jailed for 8 long years and when she got into trouble Aniket spread the news in the media that he broke all his relationship with Kritika
but had it been just breaking the relationship maybe just maybe Kritika would have forgive him but the moment she came out of the jail she got to know that Aniket has engaged her younger sister sonali and the world called them the golden couple and it was so clear that they were in a relationship even before the break up that was why when sonali wounded the director she went directly to Aniket and infact it was his plan to put all the blame on Kritika and left her unconscious making her the culprit in that room....
after her release she met Aniket and he told her
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
Go and see yourself in the mirror once... you were always unworthy of me and now i can't even tolerate you😡😡
* in disgust*
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*took out 10rs and give to Kritika as if she's a beggar*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
💭💭Aniket Arya ....Arya corporations CEO's son one of the famous actor in the entertainment industry and a talented producer..... it must be so tough for a person like him to find a 10 rs note in his wallet *scoff in sarcasm*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*lost in thoughts*
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
*went towards the door*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*came out of her thoughts and ran towards the bathroom*
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
*looking in surprised towards the bathroom*
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
👈 bechara who was already in shock when Kritika came from the window and hearing all the voices from the room next to his
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
*opens the door*
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
*saw two police officers hotel manager and one girl and boy*
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manager: sir Oberoi i am so sorry to disturb you someone has wounded the person who stayed next to your room and ran away
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manager: and he is badly wounded can you tell us if you've seen someone suspicious around
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
*smiles thinking about Kritika*
💭💭 so you ran away after hurting someone
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
*about to say something but stops hearing a sweet voice from the room*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
Nikhil why are you taking so long I'm waiting for you for so long and you
*in a seductress voice*
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*looking behind Nikhil hearing the sweet voice*
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
*looking behind Nikhil hearing the sweet voice*
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
💭💭this heartouching voice is Kritika's
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*came to the front door with a towel on her body*
her fair skin was glowing in a white towel which was making her look more beautiful
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*surprised looking at her beauty*
Kritika has never let Aniket touch her it was against her principles but today she was just in a towel in Nikhil oberoi's room
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
*raise his eyebrow*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*nervous but did not let it show on her face*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*went to Nikhil and kiss him*
ignore what you have to ignore 👆
Kritika Rathod (FL)
💭💭💭hai bhagwan... did i just kiss The Nikhil Oberoi ☺️😭
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*blushing looks at Nikhil*
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
*the one who is already staring at her and still trying to process what happened just now and what is Kritika trying to do*
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
KRITIKA 😡😡😡
*SHOUTS*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*looks towards him and about to go*
Nikhil Oberoi (Ml)
*pulled her closer by her waist*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*surprised with his action and stop moving*
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
Kritika what are you doing here and what is all this
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*in anger*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
ohhh Aniket you haven't understood till now why am I here
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*looking at the both of them only in towel and understood*
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
you cheated on me... since when is this going on
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*shouts*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*smiles*
since the day you have started cheating on me with sonali
the manager stared at sonali in shock... sonali was at her prime and ws always in medias eyes and for a model like her to be in a relationship is really a big breaking news
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
what nonsense is this... why are you spreading fake rumors 😡😡
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
*tense*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*tried to come out of Nikhil's grip but couldn't*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*bend her head on his shoulder*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
why isn't it true the necklace my dear sister is wearing right now is bought and gifted by you... if you've forgotten then you can check😏😏
Kritika Rathod (FL)
a date is carved in the pendent... its the same day when both of you met for the first time😏
*in sarcastic tone*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
💭💭 I was so stupid in my last life that I couldn't see the living proofs in front of me *scoff*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
💭💭 In my stupidness everyone keep on using me and i let them to but not this time
*determine*
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*looking at her with guilt*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*glaring at him*
he was her childhood sweetheart aniket's mother was a good friend of Kritika's mother and often brought aniket to play with Kritika and how friendship turn into love they didn't know and even after her parents divorce he always stayed beside her and because of these good traits she never doubted that he could ever cheat her
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*feeling ashame at his actions*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
the moment I got to know about you both i have decided that we broke up that day itself❄️
Kritika Rathod (FL)
but you are so shameless that even now you are blaming me of cheating 😒
*scoff*
cindy
okay guys I'll stop here for today
cindy
I was writing in the flow i didn't even realise its already 1023 words
cindy
guys my half yearly exams starts on 15th September so be patient
cindy
I'll definitely update after my exams or even if I get some free time while studying
cindy
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episode 3
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
stop making this false allegations 😡😡
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
you have been caught with an unknown man in a hotel room and you are defaming us ....how do you even dare to
had it been they were alone sonali wouldn’t have miss the opportunity to instigate aniket against Kritika but right now if she had done something like that everyone will think that she is the villain of their story
Kritika Rathod (FL)
💭💭 first her mother broke my mom's family and now her daughter broke mine but well I am so happy that I got to know his real face... thanks sonali...congratulations for having this bastard in your life i don't need this thrash *scoff*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
I am defaming you *scoff and push Nikhil's hands away and move towards sonali*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*pulled the pendent from sonali's neck*
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
*shocked by her action*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
do you remember this aniket you gave a special order for this
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*turns the pendent*
their names were beautifully engraved in the pendent... now even if they try to lie there's no point because no one is that dumb that after seeing all these things also they will not understand what's going on between them
this kind of pendent will not be given to someone jokingly until you have a special relationship with him or her
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police officer: this is your personal matter so kindly solve all this yourself.... btw miss Kritika were you here from a long time??
Kritika Rathod (FL)
yes officer
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*nods*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*went and hold Nikhil's hands*
Kritika was confused that why Nikhil didn’t tell them the truth but she was grateful to him that he was helping her
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*looks at the officer*
did something happen officer??
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police: yes someone wounded the man who was staying in the next room
Kritika Rathod (FL)
ohhh okay but I have no idea about this incident *acts innocent*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
I was here only but if you dont trust me you can check the cctv cameras
Kritika Rathod (FL)
👉the one who knew cctv is not working
in her last life when this happened sonali went to Aniket and since the hotel was under aniket's company one sign was enough for the cctv to vanish
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
👈🏻the one who cleaned the evidences before calling the police
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
👈🏻the one who cleaned the evidences before calling the police
Kritika Rathod (FL)
the one who knows everything else 😌👉
Kritika Rathod (FL)
but I still don't understand even if someone was hurt in the next room to us then why did you come looking for me
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*raised her eyebrow*
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police: *about to say something but stopped*
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
because you are the one who asked me to look for the director
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*smiles sarcastically*
💭💭 this dumb girl has come with full determination to send me to jail
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*smiles*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
I didn’t get you.... I'm just an assistant what will I have something to do with a director
Kritika Rathod (FL)
do you want to say that I came to ask for a role from the director for myself
Kritika Rathod (FL)
officer check these messages sent by sonali to me * shows her phone*
MESSAGES
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Sonali: I am going to meet the director in a hotel room you will also have to go with me
Kritika: will it be fine to go and meet a director at this hour
Sonali: thats why I am taking you so that if anything happen you will be there to help me
Kritika: I have some work today i can't come today and I think should also not go
Sonali : when ive already told you then you will go and stop with your nonsense
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after this message Kritika didn’t reply anymore... but in reality she was forced to come with Sonali later in the evening but when she was in the bathroom she check the messages and looking that she didn’t reply she knew that this could help her so she use that as a weapon against sonali and tried to win.... it looks like even the universe is helping Kritika
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police: miss Sonali we have to take your phone for investigation
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
*got worried because she knew that all the evidence is pointing at her*
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police: *seeing her hesitation their suspicion on her was getting deeper*
miss sonali we hope you will help us with the investigation
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
*gives her phone*
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police: *saw the same messages*
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police: miss sonali you have to go to the police station for the questioning
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
Kritika you lying you also went with me inside to meet the director *shouts in anger*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*raised her eyebrow and small smirk*
just now you were saying I went to meet the director alone... why are manipulating your words again and again
because of her stupidity the police was more suspicious of sonali now
Sonali Rathod ( FL stepsister)
*looks at aniket*
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*helpless*
Kritika Rathod (FL)
you are saying again and again that I went to meet the director but where is the evidence of it
Kritika Rathod (FL)
I have already shown them the evidence where its clear that I didn’t go to meet the director you did
Kritika Rathod (FL)
but if you still want to blame me then bring the evidences first
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police: *agreeing with Kritika*
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police: when the director wakes up....you might have to come for questioning and I hope you will help the police with their investigation
Kritika Rathod (FL)
of course officer *nods calmly*
and anyways its not that she hit the director
here where Kritika is carefree there sonali is looking pale and which is leading to the police suspecting her and when she was asking for the questioning she didn’t agree
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*trying to make sonali understand*
don't be scared you haven't done anything wrong lets go I'll go along with you to the police station
Aniket Arya( Kritika's ex)
*before leaving turns to Kritika*
Kritika don't you have shame to do all these things to your sister whatever done is done by you thats why you won't get away with this
Kritika Rathod (FL)
*laughs internally*
wahhh the man who is himself a pot of sins is telling me about karma... can't believe this is the man who promise me to always stay and protect me😒😒
cindy
there you go i took 1 hour to write this now I am going to study tata
cindy
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