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Ben's Note

Forgive and forget

Pastor Augustine
Pastor Augustine
Pastor Augustine: Forgive one another, just as Jesus forgave those who persecuted Him. Forgive… and do it seventy-seven times!
Church claps
Sisi
Sisi
[thinking] Hmm… everyone’s nodding like they’re saints. I just want food.
Anna
Anna
Hey, Sisi!
Sisi
Sisi
Hey!
Anna
Anna
Come, let’s go to the restroom.
Sisi
Sisi
Yes, please. [smiling] I needed a break from this.
..........
[Restroom]
Anna
Anna
🎵 Happy birthday to me… 🎵
Sisi
Sisi
Anna! Lower your voice. We’re still in church.
Anna
Anna
Sorry… but did you see Mrs. Daniel nodding her head when Pastor said, “Forgive one another”?
Sisi
Sisi
Yeah....
Anna
Anna
That’s the same woman who fought in the salon because someone called her son ugly
Sisi
Sisi
[bursts out laughing]
Anna
Anna
Sisi… I’m eighteen today. Next week, I’ll be in college—making my own decisions. Wearing what I want. Going where I want. I wish the same for you.
Sisi
Sisi
[smiling] You know Mom and Dad… strict about everything. No dating, no certain friends…
Anna
Anna
I know. I had to keep my boyfriend a secret.
Anna
Anna
Come on, let’s get back before Mom notices we’re gone.
.........
[Later – Church Service Ending]
Pastor Augustine
Pastor Augustine
All rise as we say the Lord’s Prayer.
Sisi
Sisi
Finally, it’s almost over.
.......
[Outside – After Service]
Benedict
Benedict
Hi, Sisi.
Sisi
Sisi
[heart racing] Hi, Ben.
Benedict
Benedict
I just wanted to give you this. [hands over folded paper]
Sisi
Sisi
[takes it shyly] Thanks…
Sisi
Sisi
He walks away before I can say anything else.

Secrets and Suprise

[In the car after church]
Anna
Anna
Sisi, you look happy. Did something happen? Did I miss something funny in church?
Sisi
Sisi
(smiles, looking out the window) Oh… it’s nothing. I’m just happy to go home and celebrate your birthday with you.
Sisi
Sisi
(thinking): No way I’m telling her about Ben or the paper he gave me… not yet. I still don’t even know what’s written inside.
Anna
Anna
(grinning) Well, my boyfriend Josh is bringing me a cake and some chocolates later. You’ll have plenty to eat.
Sisi
Sisi
Really? Josh is coming over?
Anna
Anna
Yep. First time he’s visiting.
Sisi
Sisi
(raises eyebrow) Do Mom and Dad know about you and Josh?
Anna
Anna
(laughs softly) Relax. They won’t do anything harsh. Come on, let’s go change. He’ll be here by 5:00 p.m.
.......
[Later – Knock on the door]
Anna
Anna
Coming! (runs to the door)
Mom
Mom
(looking at Sisi in surprise) She never runs to answer the door. She’s really excited.
Mom
Mom
Sisi, pass me the salt.
Sisi
Sisi
(hands it over) Alright, Mom.
.........
[In the kitchen – Sisi hesitates]
Sisi
Sisi
Mom… can I get a phone? All my classmates have one.
Mom
Mom
(turns to her) We’ve talked about this.
Sisi
Sisi
I know, but I’m 16 now, and it would help with my studies.
Sisi
Sisi
(thinking): Please say yes, please say yes…
Mom
Mom
(pauses, then smiles) Alright. You start high school tomorrow anyway.
Sisi
Sisi
(face lights up, hugs Mom tightly) Thank you!
Mom
Mom
Just promise me it won’t distract you from your studies.
Sisi
Sisi
I promise
Sisi
Sisi
(thinking): That’s the sweetest thing she’s said to me in a long time.
........
Anna
Anna
Mom, are you done cooking?
Mom
Mom
Yes, darling. Why?
Anna
Anna
Um… just come with me to the living room.
Sisi follows, curious
[They walk in – Josh is sitting on the couch]
Sisi
Sisi
(thinking): Oh wow… he’s even more handsome than in the pictures. Chocolate-brown skin, neat dark hair, perfect beard…
Mom
Mom
Who is this, Anna?
Anna
Anna
Mom, meet my boyfriend, Josh. Josh, this is my mom. And this is my sister, Sisi.
Josh
Josh
Hello, Mrs. Philips.
Mom
Mom
Hello, Josh. Nice to meet you. I hope you’re hungry—I just finished cooking.
Josh
Josh
(smiles in relief) I brought you this. (hands her a wrapped gift)
Mom
Mom
Oh, thank you, darling.
[Later – cake and chocolates on the table] Sisi (thinking): Anna was right. Mom didn’t do anything harsh. Everyone’s laughing, the food smells amazing, and the cake… well, that’s just the icing on the day.

Hidden words Hidden feeling

[At Home – Living Room]
Mom
Mom
Why didn’t you tell me sooner about Josh?
Anna
Anna
(bows her head, voice soft) Sorry, Mom… I wasn’t sure if you’d approve. I was scared because you always said no dating.
Mom
Mom
(sighs, then hugs her) It’s okay, darling. Josh seems like a good guy, and he’s really well-mannered. I can see why you like him. (smiles)
Anna
Anna
(relieved, chuckles a little)
Mom
Mom
You’ll be starting college soon, Anna. I want you to always remain a good child of God. (serious tone)
Anna
Anna
Yes, mom.
[Later – Sisi’s Room]
Sisi
Sisi
(thinking): Earlier today, Ben gave me a folded paper. I held onto it all day, too nervous to open it. Tonight… I can’t wait any longer.
Sisi
Sisi
(slowly opens the note, heart racing)
“You are wonderfully and carefully made by God Himself.”
Sisi
Sisi
That’s all it said… but somehow, it meant everything. I feel so happy right now. Ben… he’s so handsome, and his voice when he sings in church—he gives me butterflies every single time. But… did he notice I have a crush on him? I’ve never told a soul. What if he already knows? What if… he actually likes me back?
Sisi
Sisi
(murmurs) I wish I had a phone. I’d call him right now.
Anna
Anna
Boo!
Sisi
Sisi
(jumps, clutching her chest) Anna! You nearly gave me a heart attack!
Anna
Anna
(laughing so hard she can barely breathe) Got you!
Sisi
Sisi
(glares) That’s not funny.
Anna
Anna
(grinning) Sorry, Sisi. But your door was wide open, and you looked so lost in your thoughts. I thought I’d bring you back to reality.
Sisi: (shakes head, trying not to smile)
Anna
Anna
(squints) What’s that you’re hiding behind your back? I saw the paper.
Sisi
Sisi
It’s nothing… just my wish list for the new month.
Anna
Anna
Our secret prayer list?
Sisi
Sisi
(nods quickly) Yeah.
Anna
Anna
Of course! Mom told me about the new phone. Congratulations, baby Sisi!
Sisi
Sisi
(laughs, trying to act normal) Thanks, Anna. And congratulations to you too… on your new boyfriend.
Anna
Anna
(grins proudly) Oh, before I forget—I brought you more chocolates. Enjoy and sleep well.
Sisi
Sisi
(forces a smile) Thanks…
Sisi
Sisi
(thinking): She can never know about Ben’s letter. Not now. Not ever.

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