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DEVOURING DESIRES: His Queen's Surrender

Author's Note to My Dear Readers

Welcome to Devouring Desires: His Queen’s Surrender. This is my very first time writing a dark romance — a world of fire, surrender, and intoxicating passion between Zed and Maya, a King and Queen bound by lust, devotion, and eternal love. Every chapter is my original creation, not copied from anywhere.

⚠️ A gentle reminder: This story explores mature, intense, and dark themes. If you feel uncomfortable, please do not continue reading — and kindly, don’t report it. Read only at your own will.

For those who stay, I hope you lose yourself in every heartbeat, every whisper, and every devouring desire. Thank you for stepping into this storm with me — I promise, you’ll be claimed by it. 🔥👑

Ep 1: Red Room of Surrender

The room was drenched in red.

Not the garish red of danger, but the seductive glow of temptation — soft, warm, pulsing like a heartbeat. Shadows danced against the walls, stretching long and liquid as the candles flickered in their holders. The air itself felt heavy, charged with heat, with lust, with anticipation.

And then there was the mirror.

It covered the ceiling entirely, gleaming in the dim light. Every angle of me reflected back — the vulnerable arch of my back, the delicate tremor of my thighs, the way the silk ropes cut into my wrists as I lay restrained on the velvet bed. I could see myself surrendering before I had even truly begun.

And he knew it.

Zed — my King, my devourer, my tormentor.

He stood at the edge of the bed, cloaked in shadow, a predator savoring his prey. The faint rustle of his black jacket as he slipped it off made my stomach tighten. My chest rose and fell faster. I could not move. Could not resist. And God help me, I didn’t want to.

“Look at yourself,” his voice came low, a growl that curled down my spine.

My eyes shifted to the ceiling, catching sight of my own trembling body. Bound. Helpless. Already wet. My lips parted as if confessing without words.

“You’re mine now. Every breath, every moan, every ounce of your surrender belongs to me.”

I swallowed hard. “Yes… my King.”

The words felt like shackles locking into place — beautiful, intoxicating shackles that I never wanted to escape.

He moved closer, the bed dipping under his weight. One hand brushed down the length of my thigh, so light I almost thought I imagined it. I gasped, arching against the ropes. The mirror caught the desperate movement, reflecting my helpless need, and shame and desire crashed together inside me.

His chuckle was dark. “Already begging with your body. But I’m not merciful tonight.”

A silk blindfold slid over my eyes. Darkness swallowed me, though the mirror above still existed — I could picture it, even if I couldn’t see. Every sound sharpened. The scrape of chocolate being unwrapped. The faint clink of ice in a glass. My breath hitching louder than I meant it to.

Then — the cold kiss of ice on my lips.

I gasped, trying to turn away, but his hand locked firm at my jaw, forcing me to part. He traced the cube along my lower lip, then pressed it inside. The shock of cold melted into heat as his tongue followed, chasing the drip, kissing me hard. My muffled moan filled the silence.

“Sweet,” he murmured against my mouth. “But not nearly sweet enough.”

His lips dragged lower, across my throat, down to the swell of my breasts. A tug — the silk robe slipped open, baring me fully. My nipples hardened instantly in the chilled air. His hand cupped one, squeezing just enough to make me whimper. Then his mouth closed around it, sucking hard.

I writhed, tugging the restraints. “Please—”

A sharp slap across my thigh silenced me. Not brutal. Just enough sting to remind me: I was his.

“No begging yet,” he warned. “You’ll take what I give.”

And then he gave everything.

His tongue circled, teased, bit, devoured my breasts until I could hardly breathe. His free hand slid lower, between my thighs, parting me with an authority that made me shudder. His fingers found me dripping, and he groaned in satisfaction.

“You’re ready to be devoured,” he whispered.

He pushed one finger inside — slow, deliberate. My back arched, my voice cracked into a moan. He added another, stretching me, curling against that aching spot deep inside. The mirror above would be showing my body trembling violently, the ropes straining against my wrists, the sheen of sweat on my skin.

And he knew it. He wanted me to see myself undone.

“Watch yourself,” he commanded, yanking the blindfold away.

My eyes flew up. The reflection hit me like fire. My mouth open in a silent cry, my breasts rising and falling, his hand moving relentlessly between my legs. The sight alone nearly tipped me over the edge.

I begged without words, tears pricking the corners of my eyes.

“Not yet,” he hissed, curling his fingers harder, faster. His thumb pressed cruelly against my clit. My body screamed with pleasure-denial. My thighs shook, my hips bucked helplessly.

“Say it,” he demanded.

“I… I’m yours,” I cried. “Only yours.”

His smile was wicked triumph. “Now you may break.”

He thrust deep, hard, curling his fingers inside me at the same time his thumb rubbed merciless circles over my clit. My entire body convulsed, a scream tearing from my throat as the climax shattered through me. Hot waves of release pulsed out, soaking his hand, soaking the sheets, while my reflection above captured every raw second of my surrender.

I collapsed against the ropes, trembling, sobbing, gasping.

He kissed me then — slow, claiming, a seal to his victory. “That was only the beginning, my Queen,” he whispered against my lips.

And as I stared up at the mirror, still shaking, still broken, I knew he was right.

This was only Episode One.

Ep 2: Mirror of Obedience

The red glow of the room still hummed against my skin. I could hear my own heartbeat echoing in my ears, faster than it should be, trembling from what Zed had already done to me. I thought the worst was over… or maybe the best. But no—he wasn’t nearly finished.

Zed stood in front of me, his tall frame casting long shadows that stretched across the mirrored ceiling above. From the reflection, I saw myself—hair loose, lips swollen, wrists bound above my head with silk restraints. My robe had slipped halfway down my body, leaving my breasts bare, nipples tight under the cool air, my chest rising and falling with uneven breaths.

And Zed? He was calm. Too calm. A predator circling his prey.

“Look at you,” he murmured, his voice low, dangerous, commanding. He tilted my chin up so I was forced to meet my own reflection in the mirror. “Do you see that helpless little Queen staring back at you? She belongs to me.”

My body shivered at his words. Every time he said mine, it was like my skin remembered who it belonged to.

“Yes, Zed,” I whispered.

But he smirked, eyes gleaming. “*No, Maya. Tonight you don’t get to say yes. Tonight, you only obey.*”

His words slid down my spine like a whip. My thighs squeezed together instinctively, already aching with need.

He reached for something on the side table—black, sleek, humming faintly. A vibrator. My eyes widened, my lips parting, but he pressed a single finger against them before I could speak.

“No words. Only sounds.”

The toy came alive in his hand, and he held it just an inch from where my body burned. The vibrations were so close I could feel them without contact, my core tightening with anticipation. My hips moved forward, desperate, but he immediately gripped my waist hard, holding me still.

“Ah, ah,” he whispered in my ear, his breath hot. “You don’t get to beg. You don’t get to move. You’ll take what I give, and nothing more.”

My breath hitched. His rules were chains heavier than any restraints.

When he finally pressed the toy against me, I cried out, the sound bouncing in the room, magnified by the mirror above. My reflection looked wild—eyes closed, head thrown back, lips parted.

Zed growled, “Open your eyes. Watch yourself. Watch how weak you are for me.”

I forced them open, biting my lip, and the sight wrecked me—me, trembling, thighs shaking, nipples pointed high, bound and powerless. And Zed, towering over me, in control of every sound, every gasp, every moan I made.

He traced the toy in slow, torturous circles, never giving me exactly what I needed, dragging me to the edge but never letting me fall. My body screamed for release, every nerve begging, but Zed’s eyes warned me—don’t you dare.

“Do you want to come, Maya?” His voice was velvet wrapped around steel.

“Yes,” I breathed, broken already.

“Then hold it.”

His hand slid lower, pressing the toy against me harder, sending shockwaves through my body. My back arched, I cried out, tears pricking my eyes. I wanted to let go, to fall into the pleasure, but his command chained me tighter than the silk ropes.

“You’ll come only when I say. Not before. Disobey me, and I’ll make you regret it.”

He pulled the toy away completely, and I sobbed from the loss. My body ached, my muscles spasming from denial.

Zed leaned down, his lips brushing my ear, his tone cruel but intoxicating. “You’re not in control here, Queen. I am. And the sooner you accept that, the sweeter your surrender will taste.”

He pressed the vibrator back against me suddenly, without warning, at the highest setting. My scream filled the red room. My hips bucked wildly, my body trying to chase the release, but Zed’s hand was firm, pinning me down.

“You’re shaking already. Pathetic,” he teased, biting down on my neck hard enough to leave a mark. “Do you know what happens if you come without permission?”

“I—I’ll be punished,” I gasped.

“That’s right. And I’ll make sure you beg for mercy you’ll never get.”

The toy moved faster, crueler, yet Zed’s voice held me prisoner. He denied me again and again, ripping me from the brink until my body was trembling uncontrollably, sweat slicking my skin. My reflection showed me undone—hair sticking, lips swollen, body writhing.

Finally, his voice cut through the haze, low and commanding. “Now. Come for me, Maya.”

The release tore through me like fire. I screamed his name, every nerve exploding as waves of ecstasy consumed me. My body shook violently, bound and helpless, my cries filling the mirrored room. I saw myself break in the reflection—eyes rolling back, mouth open, surrender painted across my face.

Zed kissed my trembling lips, devouring my moans. “Good girl,” he whispered against my mouth. “That’s what obedience looks like.”

And I realized, shuddering in his arms, that the mirror hadn’t just shown me my reflection. It had shown me the truth—Maya, the Queen, belonged entirely to Zed.

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