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Everyone wanted to get into Raven
She walked through the hallways like a shadow. No one dared to follow. No one did.
(at her house)
Stepmom
How much time do you need to get out of that bed?
She wakes up and cooks for them
Stepdad
Girls don’t need that education just marry some rich
Dane
I’m paying my own fee(with firm voice) just need a roof
Stepmom
Drop the act do you want us to feel guilty? Stupid get out.
She leaves without answer
Everyone knows her shadow going in the hallway, but they cannot see it
In the classroom
Teacher
Good morning class so quick how many of you did your homework?
Class gets noisy
Teacher
Now quiet so any of you area of a parallelogram
Bell rings
Teacher leaves
Art class
Art teacher
Let your heart tell what to paint not hands
Danes painting, stunts the class
The painting is abour
A girl stands in front of a towering tsunami.
Her body shows no fear
Her face?
Tears in her eyes. A soft smile.
A face that doesn’t scream — but still says: I’m broken
Something didn’t sit right about Dane
She could still feel the eyes
At lunch
Shara
Look, the artist is here
Dane avoids eye contact
Sarah
Do you think you’re an artist just cause you wrote a poet?
Dane continue eating
Sarah
Hey I’m talking to you dick
Lunch interrupted with silence
Sarah brings up juice and was about to throw it in her lunch
PE teacher enters
Hey kids, what happening?
Sarah leaves without answering
After the lunch
The class got emptied and Dane is there just sitting and holding her painting in her hands
She can still feel the eyes but she was so into her painting that she didn’t care but she felt it was more over bad so she turned back
But the eyes already turned its back
She reaches home
Step mom
Why did your art teacher call me
Dane
She said she liked my painting and called you
Stepmom
Next time don’t paint
Dane
Why can’t I
Stepdad
Of you want to live under this roof then u can
At dinner
Dane goes up for the curry
Step mom
I told u to eat curry’s only Sundays now hands off and don’t forget to clean the gardens before you sleep
She nods
She cleans it and goes to bed
She couldn’t sleep some thing in her just wouldn’t let her sleep the eyes the lunch everything was so new to her today
Something about out it did feelll off people talking no to out of nowhere here
Why is this happening to me I wanna be invisible Forever
And dame why don I feel like someone me is watching me
The end of chapter one
To be continued
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Raventon High – Chapter 2: Dead
That day, the school felt different.
Quiet. Muffled. Off.
I didn’t know why, until I heard the whispers.
“Taylor died.”
They said it was suicide.
But something about it didn’t sit right.
I didn’t react. Didn’t say a word.
Even the homeroom teacher brushed past it.
“We’ll just pray for him,” she said.
And then moved on, like nothing happened.
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(Damian’s POV)
Wait—Taylor? Dead?
Suicide?
He wasn’t loud, but he was kind. Quiet. Sweet.
None of this makes sense.
The teacher’s face didn’t sit right either.
There’s something off here.
At break
Damian
Do you think there’s something suspicious with Taylor
S case
Class mate
Nahh bro everything’s okay I mean his death was sudden but it does makes sense
Diamian
Do you think so okayy
Damian thinking
So I am the one’ll person who’s thinking it’s weird how lame
But no matter what I’ll do the investigation and find out
Dane thinking
So no one has a second word I am the only one how perfect I can find out
But kinda hard every one will get sus if I act around but he was so silent and stress free
Damian thinking
He was and fine and stuff yesterday and today something’s really off and some one is trying to hide it
Danes thinking
Soemthings off really I’ll need to catch time
Teacher
Dane …..Dane ……Dane ……..
Dane stands up in shock
Teacher
Looks like someone is in there dream world Hugh
Shooks her head
Teacher so what’s this equation
Walks up to the black board
And writes the equation
Class surprised 😯
Teacher
Quite class okay Dane next time don’t dream
Damian totally unaware and thinking deeply
Ho my gif I totally have to catch up some time
Teacher
Damian ,…….damian,……Damian
Damian
YES TEACHER
Teacher
Wow very attentive huh come here we’ve got two daydreamers today
Class laughs in fun
Damian walks up and writes
I don’t know on the board
Teacher
WhTtt is this Dami I thought your a bright student huh
Damian
Sorry teacher
Teacher
Write 100 times homework
Damian
Butt
Teacher
No butts go
Damian thinking
Whatever I am investigating the tough test
After school
Dane goes to the basement secretly and starts searching
And finds nothing but still works
Suddenly footsteps starts coming and she quickly try’s to find a spot to hide but couldn’t
And steps are getting closer and closer
And Damian walked up to the basement Ho my god what is that
Spots Dane I the corner
Hey are the come out come out
Dane slowly comes out
Damian
So you the invisible girl
Danes eyes wides with anger
Damian
Never mind and why are you here
Rolls her eyes
Damian
Okay I won’t ask but are here for the last year question paper HO MY GOD cHEATER
Dane
Can u shut uppp
Damian
Ho my god invisable girl just talked I thought you’d never
Dane
Why are you her wait……….. (coldly) are the eyes
Damian
Eyes what
Dane
Nothing
Damian
(Asks slightly with hesitation ) are you about Taylor
Dane
Huh
Damian
Nerve mind
Dane
(Coldly) yes
Damian
I can’t believe my eyes like your here for Taylor
Dane
Are you in
Damian
Before then you
Dane
Yeah right
Damian
Really come on
Dane
P
Okay from first onwards I don’t think this is a good mixer so I thought something was off
Damian
So are you reallly that close with him
Dane
None of you business
Damian
Come on we’re partner in crime
Dane
Coldly …… count me out we just have the same thinking so we’re in that’s it
Damian
Okayyyy
The end of chapter 2
R
To be continued,…..
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