“Thorns In Heat”
Introduction
writter
So guys hii this is my first manga story...soo...yeah it's a bl btw
Elián Vale
18.
Registered as beta.
Transferred after a “behavioral incident” involving a hospital and a broken collarbone (not his).
Suppresses his scent daily. Keeps his heat cycles hidden.
Quiet. Observant. But behind his silence is a mouth that knows exactly how to twist words into knives.
Doesn’t want to belong to anyone. Especially not an alpha.
But fate doesn’t care what he wants.
🐺 Character Intro: Lucien Rave hart
19.
Student Council President.
Cold. Brutal. Top of every class.
Descended from a noble alpha line.
Eyes like winter steel. Hands that leave bruises like art.
Feels everything—but lets no one see it.
He doesn't believe in sharing what’s his.
🔥 Character Intro: Kairo Draven
19
Former friend. Current rival.
Tattooed. Reckless. Leader of the underground fight rings.
Charisma like fire. Everyone either fears him or falls for him.
Known for skipping council meetings and ignoring authority.
But never once ignored Lucien.
Until they both scented him.
Lucien and Kairo were once inseparable—the perfect alpha duo.
Lucien, all control and perfection.
Kairo, all chaos and heat.
They ruled the academy together. Protected each other. Slept under the same roof. Trained together.
They even once shared an omega… just for fun. But it was never serious.
Until Elián.
They both scent him for the first time during a sparring match gone wrong.
His suppression patch slips. One breath of him and their instincts go berserk.
But instead of fighting over him like beasts… they pause.
Because there was a code between them:
"We don’t fall for the same person. Ever."
writter
so guys is much it😊😊😊I hope you guys enjoy the story thoo
writter
idk where I got inspiration but yeahh I'm so excited 🥹
episode 1
Wind howls across the floating plateau. The elite gates of Aurum Combat Academy open with a thunderous groan. A lone figure walks through, head low, hood up, scent masked—
Everyone stares. Betas don’t get in. Omegas? They don’t even try.
But Elián Vale? He walks like he's on a leash made of razor wire. Silent. Dangerous. Untouchable.
Everyone stares. Betas don’t get in. Omegas? They don’t even try.
But Elián Vale? He walks like he's on a leash made of razor wire. Silent. Dangerous. Untouchable.
teacher
Professor Lysander:
“We have a new student. Beta rank. Exceptional scores in strategy and neutralization.”
He smirks.
“Try not to eat him alive.”
Elián steps forward. His eyes, deep silver-blue, scan the room like they already hate everyone.
Lucien Ravehart
Who the hell walks like that in a room full of alphas? That’s not fear. That’s calculation.
Kairo Draven
“Cute. Thinks a cold face and tight pants will keep him safe.”*whispers, smirking*
[Private Chat: Elián ❄️ → Self Log]
Elián Vale
Alphas are predictable.
I just need to stay quiet. Invisible. Scent suppressed.
Nobody finds out what I really am.
[Combat Pairings — Notification]
Match: Kairo 🔥 vs Elián ❄️
[Group Chat: Combat Arena 🥊]
[Combat Commentary — Live Log Style]
Elián Vale
(steps sideways, feet silent)
(eyes on Kairo's stance, not his face)
Kairo Draven
(smirk)
Come on then, "Beta." Show me something.
Elián Vale
are you sure you want that?*smirk*
Kairo Draven
what?are you afraid...Beta?
Elián Vale
me?...afraid of what?a alpha save it
Kairo Draven
I don’t want talk. I want blood.
Kairo → charges fast. Full speed.
Elián → ducks low, sweeps leg.
Kairo Draven
*taken off balance, recovers mid-air*
You fast!*stunned*
Lucien Ravehart
*watching*
He’s reading his rhythm. Kairo’s too aggressive.
Elián Vale
* With one last move, I won the combat*
Kairo Draven
how....*chocked*
Lucien Ravehart
what?!...as something wrong with this beta.....I can feel it..*murmur*
Elián Vale
*taking a bath*
*suddenly, lucien appeared behind him*
Elián Vale
WHat THE F*CK YOU ARE DOING IN HERE...GET OU-...
before he could even finish the sentence, lucien closed Elián mouth with his hand. His other hand slid to Elián's waist, pushing him against his body
Lucien Ravehart
shh.....you think I don't kneo ur little secret huh?
Lucien Ravehart
I know you cheat to win the combat....*he whispered in his ear*....you embarrassed my friend in front of the all academy
Elián Vale
hmm...no I didn't
Lucien Ravehart
* Notice something on his side*...what the....is that a scratch Damm what happened to you...*smirk* got bite by an Alpha hm?
Elián Vale
* My eyes widen,I turn around and push him away* Don't you dare to touch me
Lucien Ravehart
*put hands up in surrender* Whoa whoa calm down little beta
Elián Vale
*I took my towel and put around my waist*
Lucien Ravehart
you know you're kinda small to be a beta....you look more like an omega...
Elián Vale
*my eyes widen*IM NOT AN OMEGA!...
Lucien Ravehart
Damm...little beast...sorry sorry...I understand be called, and Omega, it's a offense *smirk*...
Elián Vale
Yeah....it...is...*turn around and leave*
Lucien Ravehart
play with him is going to be funny...*smirk*..omega
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