The Great System
chapter 1
where am I? Why am I here?? and what is this place???
wait didn't I died then why am I still talking? Is this where people who have died come?? but why is it so dark??
wait don't tell me I am in hell 😣
????: no no you're not in hell but in a special place
wait who is that( looks around and finds no one )
????: well no need to look around even if you tried you can't see me till I want you to see me
wait then are you a ghost??
????: what how can you say that I am a ghost?? I'm not a ghost and who I am is not important here what's important is that you are lucky
wait what?? you're saying that I am lucky
then how the hell did I died so young??? do you know how much plans did I have for my future do you know that I didn't even get to confess to my crush till now
????: well you have died in your world and I can't change that but I can give you the chance to travel many different worlds so do you take this chance??
well now that I can't go back to my world but I can travel many worlds I think it's fun so yes I take this chance
????: you have taken a good choice so here we go and one more thing in the world we are going you are going to be the villian so all the best and you will go in five seconds
wait what?? am I going to be villian ????😲
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hi, guys today's chapter have been finished and in the next chapter I will introduce you to the character
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and if you like put a comment in comment section and you can also give me advices as it this my first chat story
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so be stay safe and bye
chapter 2
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so for today's episode I will introduce you guys the character of this world
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this is Liya in mary parks body ⬇️
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name: Mary park
Age:19
gender: female
mother: Lily park
father: Allen park
personality: cold , arrogant , quite ,gets what she want , likes Lin very much, straight A student
hobbies: reading, stalking Lin ,learning
she is the only daughter of park family who is the richest in A country
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this is how she used to be before she died⬆️
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And about other characters system will introduce them later as the story goes on for now all you need to know is who is Mary park was
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now I am going to continue the story
mary park(liya)
what's happening here? why am in a hospital?
????: you are now in the body of Mary park
mary park(liya)
wait who is it? (looks around)
mary park(liya)
wait are you the voice that I heard in my head?
????: well yeah and now I'll introduce myself Hi my name is system
mary park(liya)
wait what kind of name is system why don't you change it something else and where are you right now?
system
hey don't insult me by my name😡 and now I am in your mind
system
well now leave that topic now thatyou have come to this world I can take my form
mary park(liya)
kawaiii you are so cute that I want to pinch your cheek so bad
mary park(liya)
will you allow me pleaseee?
system
I know no one can resist my cuteness but I hate when they touch my cheek
system
you know how hard people pinch my cheek it hurts bad😣
mary park(liya)
but please please please
mary park(liya)
but please please please pleaseeee
system
no you insulted me so no means no
mary park(liya)
waa you're so mean
system
wait don't talk now I think they are going to come here soon
mary park(liya)
wait who ?
system
don't talk if they see you talking alone they will think that you're mental
mary park(liya)
wait am I only one who can see you
system
yes and now I will give you little detail about who Mary park was ok it's going to give a little pain ok
mary park(liya)
yes it's a little pain only right I can handle it
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yeah very little pain 😏
mary park(liya)
ahhh my head hurts so bad
Mary park's memories are rushing through her head
system
Mary park's memories complete
system
now you have every memory of Mary park
mary park(liya)
you said it hurts a little then why does it hurt so much?
suddenly someone comes in
?????
are you alright? what happened here?
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and that it for second chapter
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and tell me if you like it and stay safe
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also here's a picture that I draw if you like it say it in the comment section
Chapter 3
suddenly someone comes in
?????
Are you alright? what happened here?
mary park(liya)
ah it's nothing it's just my head hurts
mary park(liya)
but can I ask you who you are?
doctor
oh I am your personal doctor
doctor
you should rest for sometime now that you have wake up after a little while the pain will go away
doctor
I need to tell you that because of the accident some of your memories has been lose
doctor
and now that you wake up I will call your parents
mary park(liya)
system why after all the pain I have gone through I only have a little memories?
mary park(liya)
was all that pain for little memory ?
system
well no the memories that you have got is the times that you spent with the character of the story
system
and I forgot to say the worlds we are going are stories that are made by people
mary park(liya)
what so who am I in this story?
system
well didn't I say to you that you're the villian
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well then let's rewind to first episode
????: and in the world we going you are the villian so all the best
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now did you remember
mary park(liya)
ahhh now I remember
mary park(liya)
then system what's the story of this world?
system
oh that I forgot to tell you
system
wait I will show you
suddenly everything becomes dark
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so for today's chapter I will end it here
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tomorrow I will write the next chapter
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and sorry for yesterday I couldn't update cuz's of PT meeting and I was so stressed and felt uneasy
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one more thing the pictures that I am putting here are all draw by me
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isn't my drawing and picture similar😁
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