Brutal Mafia Girl
About the Story/Introduction
Hello, everyone. If there even is anyone.
Please read everything, so you know a little about the story and see if it's your cup of tea.
This is my first and probably the last story I'll post.
I started writing this story a few years ago out of boredom, never planning to post it anywhere, but I decided to do it and see how it goes. Kinda like an experiment of some kind, if you will. I still didn't finish writing the story, tho. I was taking months to start writing again and when I did start again, I wrote several chapters then again stopped for months after losing the will to write and running out of ideas. That's why I can't promise regular updates, but I'll do my best.
I re-read this story dozens of times and there was always something I changed or corrected in almost every chapter, so if you notice any mistakes, feel free to correct me. I would really appreciate it. 😊
Now, before I start: I have to mention, this story is slow burn. It will take a long time for couples to get together so if that's not your thing, you don't have to read it. I'll also be focusing on ML and FL, not so much on other couples. There are not a lot of time skips or flashbacks, so that's why it might seem like slow burn.
Also, warning: this story contains violence, torture and murder, so if you are easily disturbed and can't stomach this type of things, you can skip the chapters or not read the story and go take care of yourselves. I'll give warnings before these scenes start. Now that I've warned you, please don't report. I would really appreciate it.
Also also, I wasn't 100% satisfied with ML and FL's pictures, but these were the closest I could find on how I kind of imagined them. Just ignore the tattoos and ML's light hair. I wanted him to have dark hair, but I was never satisfied with any of them. I might change them in the future if I manage to find the ones that I 100% like and if you guys don't like them.
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
AGE: 20
College student, has 2 BFFs since childhood and a younger sister, kind to her loved ones, but cold towards every, loves her friends and family, not interested in relationships (until ML comes around), knows how to fight, brutal towards her enemies, nobody knows she's the leader of the most powerful mafia called Dark Phoenix, other details will be revealed later as the story goes on
Liam Smith/King (ML)
AGE: 21
College student, has 2 BFFs since childhood and a younger brother, same as FL (kind, but cold) loves his friends and family, not interested in relationships (until FL comes around), knows how to fight, brutal, but not even close as our FL, leader of the second most powerful mafia called Black Dragon, other details will be revealed later
Nina Myers (FL's sister)
AGE: 18
Student, kind, cute, loves her friends and family, has a secret crush on John
John Smith (ML's brother)
AGE: 18
Student, cool, cheerful, loves his friends and family, has a secret crush on Nina
Amanda Brown (FL's BFF)
AGE: 20
College student, kind, sweet, easily annoyed, knows how to fight, but doesn't know about FL's secret
Sasha Black (FL's BFF)
AGE: 20
Same as Amanda
Louis Miller/Shadow (ML's BFF)
AGE: 21
College student, cool, funny, knows how to fight, ML's right-hand
Jack Johnson/Werewolf (ML's BFF)
AGE: 21
Same as Louis, ML's left-hand
Parents are not included in this story. I'll just mention them when necessary.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask in the comments or you can DM me if you feel more comfortable that way. Hope you'll like it. Happy reading, everyone. 😊
Chapter 1
Sasha Black (FL's bff)
Girl, come on! We're gonna be late! Are you ready?
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
Yeah, yeah. I'm ready. We can go so stop shouting. ❄
Sasha Black (FL's bff)
Look how she's talking to me, Amanda. *fake crying*
Amanda Brown (FL's bff)
You know she's like that with everyone. Including us.
Sasha Black (FL's bff)
I know. *pout*
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
Will you two stop your drama? We gotta go. ❄
Amanda, and Sasha took Amanda's car and Sarah got on her bike and they drove off to college.
Our boys arrived and immediately noise (people) was heard.
Liam Smith/King (ML)
Tsk. So noisy. ❄
Louis Miller/Shadow (ML's bff)
Chill, dude. Oh sorry, you already are chill.
Jack Johnson/Werewolf (ML's bff)
Oh, burn. *laughs*
Liam Smith/King (ML)
*glare* You done? ❄
Jack Johnson/Werewolf (ML's bff)
*gulp* Yeah. And about those people, just ignore them. Leave...
He was cut off by a sound of a motorbike.
Everyone turned and again gossips started, but girls ignored them.
Sasha Black (FL's bff)
Not fair! You always win.
Amanda Brown (FL's bff)
What did you expect? You know she's the best at racing. And a bike vs a car? Chances are higher for a bike to win, you know.
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
Enough. Less talking, more moving. ❄
Every guy that saw them, was mesmerized by them.
Guys
Did you see them? They were so beautiful. Especially that girl on the bike. She was so cool.
Girls
New bitches in college. Great!
Liam Smith/King (ML)
*not interested*
Louis and Jack: So cool. And they were beautiful, too.
Liam Smith/King (ML)
We have to go. Hurry up! ❄
Professor
Class, we have 3 new students joining us. Please, introduce yourselves.
Amanda Brown (FL's bff)
Hi. My name is Amanda. Hope we will get along. *smile*
Sasha Black (FL's bff)
*same as Amanda*
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
Sarah. ❄
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
*gives him a death glare*
Professor
*gulp* Ok, go and sit down. Sarah, you will be sitting with Liam, Amanda with Jack and Sasha with Louis. Guys, I hope you can help them get used to everything.
They found their desk mates, sat down and class started.
Chapter 2
Professor
Today, we will be talking about hdubdke ldvufkaba fuforgdos...
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
So boring. When will it end? *thinking*
Liam Smith/King (ML)
*not listening to the prof*
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
*thinking for some time what to do and then gets a message on one of her phones*
She took her phone and started reading.
Sky/Queen's right hand
We caught the man who betrayed the Dark Phoenix.
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
Keep him in the base. I'll come as soon as possible.
Sky/Queen's right hand
Yes, Queen.
Liam Smith/King (ML)
You know you're not supposed to be on your phone during class. ❄
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
Mind your own business. ❄ *not looking at him*
Liam Smith/King (ML)
Just trying to help, so you won't get punished, especially on your first day. ❄
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
*looks at him* Whether I get punished or not, it's nobe of your goddamn business so stop digging your nose in things that are not your concern. *scary and way colder than before*
Liam Smith/King (ML)
*scared and shocked* She's scary. *thinking*
Meanwhile, Sasha and Amanda got along with their desk mates.
Sasha Black (FL's bff)
This boring class is finally over. Let's go to canteen. I'm hungry.
Amanda Brown (FL's bff)
I agree. I'm starving.
Louis Miller/Shadow (ML's bff)
Guys, let's go, too. We can all sit together.
Sasha Black (FL's bff)
That's a great idea. Let's go... *gets interrupted*
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
No. ❄
Amanda Brown (FL's bff)
Oh, come on. Why not?
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
Because. ❄
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
I said no. ❄
Sarah Myers/Queen (FL)
*sigh* Fine. ❄
Girls: Yes! Guys, come on. Let's go.
Liam and Sarah: *sigh* Jesus. These guys/girls...❄
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