REVENGE: THE ULTIMATE PLANNING
prologue and warnings
These could be emotionally triggering
Read it at your own risks
horrifying shit could be seen
If you want cutsy romance it's not for you
Mc may or may not have any male lead
You may see alpha superiority
This is a world where only it is said that omega and alpha have equal opportunities and rights but is it
Omegas are treated low and high depends on place and situation
pls do understand this is pure fiction photos used are not mine
let's start first this is the prologue
police
I am sorry he is dead (saying sadly)
police
We have confirmed that it was sucide
Bridget sulvian (mom of mc)(O)
I am sorry sir are you sure (teary eyed)
Bridget sulvian (mom of mc)(O)
Our son was the most cheerful person you could ever see (crying)
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
Oh you are gonna regret it so bad (gritting his teeth)
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
you'll regret it
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
I'll make them pay hyung
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
they'll pay with there blood
caelan sulvian(mc's brother(O)
I am sorry baby 😭
caelan sulvian(mc's brother(O)
I hope you know how much I love you
caelan sulvian(mc's brother(O)
but I can't do this anymore 😭
Bridget sulvian (mom of mc)(O)
Wht about his husband (teary eyed)
police
But he is not here
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
I'll see you and I'll make sure 😁 you get what you deserve ( psychopathic giggles)
ch 1
Scene: A crowded graduation hall, evening. Lights dimmed. Cheers echo around. Aeryn stands alone near the exit, holding his diploma in one hand and checking his buzzing phone with the other.
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
*Graduation day.
Top of the class.
Yet… I feel cold.*
any male
Nico!You did it! Valedictorian!
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
Yeah… thanks.
His phone vibrates. A notification pops up
Bridget sulvian (mom of mc)(O)
Call me. Urgent.
Bridget sulvian (mom of mc)(O)
He’s gone.
Bridget sulvian (mom of mc)(O)
Aeryn
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
*What? What does she mean gone?*
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
Hold on. I need to take this
He steps away from the crowd, the noise fading behind him
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
Mom? What’s going on? What happened to Caelan?
Bridget sulvian (mom of mc)(O)
Aeryn… come home.
Your brother… Caelan…
He’s dead.(voice trembling)
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
…What? No.
What do you mean?
Bridget sulvian (mom of mc)(O)
They said… he ended his life.
It was… sudden
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
What?
That doesn’t make sense! I talked to him a week ago! He said he was fine!
Bridget sulvian (mom of mc)(O)
Come home. Please.
Aeryn goes quiet. The sounds of clapping and cheers fade into nothing. Just a ringing in his ears.
Aeryn drops his phone. The background fades. A cut to black follows.
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
He was my brother.
He raised me.
He never said he was hurting.
Why didn’t I know?
Scene changes : we see him at the airport of his country
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
I am home! Cael!
Scene Shift: Family Mansion – Entry Hall]
> Heavy oak doors creak open. The air inside is cold, sterile. Photos of Caelan smile from every wall—but no one else in the house does.
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
*No bruises.
No scars.
Not a single sign.
But his smile in that photo...
...it wasn’t real.*
Bridget sulvian (mom of mc)(O)
You need to be strong.
It’s what Caelan would want.
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
You spoke to him last… didn’t you?
Bridget sulvian (mom of mc)(O)
(quietly)
The night it happened.
He said he was fine.
He was… lying, wasn’t he?
[Scene Shift: Upstairs Hallway –night]
> Aeryn walks slowly toward Caelan’s room. The door is locked. Dust gathers at the edges.
Servant:We were never allowed in, sir.
He kept it… private.
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
Ok leave
He sees a journal peeking out from under the bed
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
What’s this?
He pulls it out. Opens it. The first page reads:
Caelan’s Journal:
“If someone finds this... I’m sorry. But please know... I tried.”
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
AEryn (internal):
He didn’t kill himself.
He was crying for help.
And I wasn’t there.
You think you know someone until you read their silence
Draft
[Scene opens — dim living room, rain tapping on the windows softly]
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
(quietly, holding an old photo frame)
"You always smiled like nothing was wrong… even when everything was."
[Flashback fades in — Caelan smiling at the camera, bruises faintly hidden beneath his collar.]
Diary Entry (Caelan’s handwriting):
“Some bruises don’t heal.
Some lies grow roots.
But I smile… because even the broken must survive.”
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
(clutching the book):
"What the hell happened to you?"
[Cut to Aeryn pacing in the kitchen, notebook on the table, a web of names and connections drawn out.]
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
Aeryn (thinking):
Caelan never once spoke of his husband’s cruelty.
But his silence says enough.
And Lucien...
Lucien was there.
[Scene shift — Aeryn calls someone. Ringing. Someone picks up.]
any male
Unknown Voice (deep, calm):
“Detective Aeryn. I was wondering when you’d start digging.”
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
You were at the party the night Caelan died, weren’t you?"
any male
And yet… I wasn’t invited to the funeral. Curious."
[Call ends abruptly. Aeryn slams the phone down.]
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
(growling):
"Who the hell were you protecting, hyung?"
[Final scene — Aeryn staring out the window, holding the diary close. The storm outside grows louder.]
aeryn sulvian (mc)(RO)
(voiceover):
I came back for a funeral.
But I stayed for the truth.
And I won't stop until I find it.
Even if it kills me.
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