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Introduction

Author Petal
Author Petal
Hiiiii little flowers, this is your author petal. I'm new on this app. This will be my first story here, I hope you all will support me in pen downing the other world in words.
Author Petal
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First we will start with Character introduction. And also, please take the notice of one thing that English is not my first language so if I make any mistake feel free to correct me.
Author Petal
Author Petal
Alright so here comes our first character Note: Some main characters will be introduced later on right time.
Kierra
Kierra
Hey flowers I'm Kierra, of course it's my English name. My real name is Lee Seoha. I'm 21 and studying criminology. Rest you'll know later.
Julie
Julie
Heyyaa beauties, I'm Julie, My real name is Choi Juyong. Ugh, I know quite old-fashioned, but my grandfather gave it to me so can't really object it. I'm also 21 and studying Business.
Calix
Calix
Sup guys? I'm Calix, I'll tell you my real name too, it's Hwang Woo-jin. I'm 23 and handle my dad's companies. Have to say, that old man left quite fortune to us and loads of work too duh.
Jay
Jay
....uh...hi guys.... I'm Hwang Jin-ho...I mean Jay...it's my English name... I'm 11 years old and live with my brother...
Calix
Calix
Sorry for that, this young man is a bit shy and introvert.
Julie
Julie
*rolls her eyes* He's autistic duh
Kierra
Kierra
*In cold tone* Just don't fIght, i won't put up with it this time.
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And for better character view, I'll drop their photographs
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That's it for this, I'll see you guys in first chapter. Pls don't forget to like and comment.
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Lots of love flowers 💗💗

Chapter-1

---At Julie's place---
Kierra
Kierra
*In usual cold voice* How long you will take, huh?
Kierra was leaning against her front door waiting for her best friend Julie. Calix invited both of them to have dinner at his place. Three of them were good friends, Calix and Julie have been dating for 2 years.
Julie
Julie
*Rolled her eyes and walked out lazily* It's just a stupid dinner, don't rush me.
Kierra
Kierra
*turned her face towards Julie* Are you being for real? It's your boyfriend's birthday, not only you forgot, but now you are being so uninterested even to show up for the dinner, that he arranged himself.
Kierra
Kierra
Is everything alright with you guys?
Julie
Julie
Gosh, you are making it sound like a big deal, I had many tests in university, i was busy. *She shrugged casually*
Julie
Julie
And nothing is wrong with us, don't overthink my honeybee. Let's leave hmm?
She linked her arm with Kierra and dragged her out with her. Kierra didn't like physical contact much, but she always put up with it because of Julie.
Kierra brought her car so they both drove to Calix's mansion in her car.
---In his mansion---
As soon as they walked in Kierra was tightly hugged and welcomed by Jay, the younger brother of Calix. Jake is a shy, introvert and timid boy. He rarely opens up to people. Despite Kierra's reserved and cold nature she was warm and polite with that young man.
As soon as Jay hugged her Kierra wrapped her arms around his little frame and ruffles his hair. Julie ignored him and walk past them further in the mansion.
Kierra
Kierra
Calm down little storm, I know you are excited after seeing me, so am I.
Jay
Jay
*He slowly pulled away from hug and looked up at her with a small smile on his face* You came after so long, I thought you forgot about me.
Kierra
Kierra
*Ruffles his hair* Nu-uh I can never forgot about little storm.
He chuckles softly
Jay
Jay
Let's go, big brother has been waiting for so long.
Both of them joined Julie and Calix on dinner table.
For some reason there was tension in atmosphere
To break the thick silence Kierra spoke first
Kierra
Kierra
Happy birthday Calix
Jay
Jay
Yes happy birthday big bro
Calix
Calix
Thanks guys
Julie
Julie
Happy birthday babe
Her tone was quite dry
Calix
Calix
....Thanks, Lilly
Note: Calix calls Julie Lilly, it's the nickname he gave her.
Julie
Julie
I dIdn't bring any gift, i mean you don't lack anything so what could I possibly get for you.
Calix
Calix
*Fake smiles* It's alright Babe, you came on dinner, it's more than a gift to me.
Kierra
Kierra
(Something is definitely going on)
Note: (Characters thoughts will be expressed in these braces)
Jay
Jay
*Silently eating his food*
Kierra
Kierra
*Continues to eat her food too*
After dinner Calix and Julie went on a walk, Julie wasn't agreeing to go, Kierra convinced her.
Kierra and Jay were alone in the mansion along workers.
Kierra
Kierra
Alright so little storm how's school going?
Jay
Jay
It's alright.
Kierra
Kierra
Alright? Why not good hmm?
Jay
Jay
Exams :/
Kierra
Kierra
*chuckles softly*
Jay
Jay
You can laugh too?
Kierra
Kierra
Are you taunting me little storm?
Jay
Jay
*Shakes his head in no while smiling mischievously*
Jay
Jay
Is Julie bored with my brother?
Kierra
Kierra
Why do you think so? Ofcourse not.
Jay
Jay
Mhm...she hasn't been treating him well lately.
Kierra
Kierra
I know... she's just stressed about exams. don't worry focus on your studies, I'll talk to her about this ok?
Jay
Jay
Ok, my brother really loves her alot...
Kierra
Kierra
I'm sure she does too... ( does she..?)
Author Petal
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Hiiiiiii flowers!!!!!
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How do you think the first episode was?
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A normal start right?
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Don't worry story will pick up it's pace when that plot will happen
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And soon it will happen ehehe
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Stay tuned for that
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I'll see you in next chapter
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Do like and comment pls
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💗💗💗loads of love

Chapter-2

Few days later
Julie
Julie
God!! I'm fed up with you Calix!!
Julie
Julie
I need personal space!!
Julie
Julie
Not only that, but I'm tired of you being stick to me all the time!!
Calix
Calix
Will you please calm down first??
Julie
Julie
Calm down!? Then leave me alone!! Atleast for few weeks!! Please!!
Calix
Calix
Have I done something to hurt you?
Calix
Calix
Please tell me, I'll amend it
Julie
Julie
Just leave!!! I need space is it hard for you to understand!!!?
Calix
Calix
Lilly-
Julie
Julie
Leave me!
Julie's voice was quite loud while calix was still being calm and was trying to make things alright between them.
After standing there for a minute he silently turned and left her house
Julie plopped on couch, holding her head.
Author Petal
Author Petal
Oops... I think couple is having hard time. Things are not working properly.
Author Petal
Author Petal
Tho, what do you guys think, Is Julie right or wrong for asking personal space? And now let's jump back in story.
--At University of criminology--
Professor John
Professor John
Well done Kierra, you have solved another case, you are learning very fast.
Kierra
Kierra
Thanks Prof
Professor John
Professor John
Haha, you will never stop calling me that right?
Kierra
Kierra
*Just smiled*
Professor John
Professor John
You'll be a great detective i can tell that, Your keen observation will pay you well
Professor John
Professor John
Just work a little more on your tone, your tone can scare witness. Sometimes you don't have to be cold without any reason.
Kierra
Kierra
My tone is not the problem Prof, if person is not guilty and is honest why would he be scared of anything? Only a guilty person would get nervous.
Professor John
Professor John
Here we go, I surrender. No one can win in any argument from you.
Kierra
Kierra
*Smirked and smiles*
Professor John
Professor John
Alright then I'll see you around you can work on your project.
Kierra
Kierra
Project?
Professor John
Professor John
Don't you know, I have assigned all the students to find one case on their own and solve it before the semester ends.
Kierra
Kierra
Semester ends in 3 months tho, isn't it bit hard?
Kierra
Kierra
Solving a case isn't easy, specially when u have to find one on your own.
Professor John
Professor John
That's the main thing, you don't always get the immense amount of time.
Professor John
Professor John
It holds 50% of your CGPA
Kierra
Kierra
*sighs* Ugh, fine.
Professor John
Professor John
Good luck, I have high expectations from you.
Kierra
Kierra
Thanks Prof
He lefts
Kierra was on her way to home in her car when her phone rings.
Kierra
Kierra
Yes little storm what is it?
Jay
Jay
Big bro and Julie had a fight again. Bro was very sad on call
Kierra
Kierra
Again? What happened this time?
Jay
Jay
Big bro said she asked him to give her space, he feels disappointed in himself that he couldn't create healthy environment for her.
Kierra
Kierra
Listen to me little storm, it's not something you should be concerned about ok? I'll handle this, just focus on playing and studying. Don't stress on something like this.
Kierra
Kierra
They are couple, things like this often happens between couples ok?
Kierra
Kierra
I'll talk to them. Don't worry.
Jay
Jay
Thanks riri
Kierra
Kierra
huh? riri? What's that?
Jay
Jay
A nickname for you *speaks fondly*
Kierra couldn't help but chuckle softly.
Kierra
Kierra
You always surprise me with weird things little storm.
Jay
Jay
Don't you like it...?
Kierra
Kierra
I won't lie it's weird but because little storm gave this to me, so I like it.
Author Petal
Author Petal
Ugh this straight forward cold bish can't even drop her attitude for a kid ┐( ̄ヘ ̄)┌
Jay
Jay
Don't worry riri that didn't hurt me, i know you very well know.
Kierra
Kierra
Good for you then, alright I'm hanging up because I'm driving. And don't stress ok? And do tell me when Calix come home.
Jay
Jay
Ok bye bye
He hangs up the call
Kierra sighed heavily, rubbing her temples.
Kierra
Kierra
What's wrong with these two suddenly? So many arguments... and what's with Julie...? Space and all?
Kierra
Kierra
Cant believe it's the same girl who wasnt able to stay away from Calix for a day.
Her thoughts kept her company as she drives back
Author Petal
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Hiiiiiii flowers!!!!
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This was today's chapter. Hope you guys liked it.
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Loads of loveeeee💗💗
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Oh BTW I forgot to give closer view of story's cover so here it is
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