Hidden Affection
Forgivable
At the beginning of the story, we are shown an abandoned building which is inhabited by a lot of men who are wearing black suits, and all of them have guns in their hands and they are standing in a dominant position like no one else can enter that building.
Then the scene shifts and goes to the building where it is seen that a girl is sitting like a king on the sofa, and she is cleaning her sword and there is a man in front of her who is sitting on his knees and begging her. He was continuously saying
Please... I... Be.. Beg you
Then the girl stood angrily
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You really think that what you do is forgivable ❄💢
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You betrayed me and my trust ❄💢
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Your sorry is not going to change anything ❄💢
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It can't return my 1,000 crore that you just destroy❄💢
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I will make sure to torture you till death ❄💢
It was like that the girl's eye was seeing through his soul making him shiver down his spine
Unknown
B... But you're so rich...
Unknown
So... It doesn't matter right.. *shuttering so much because of fear*
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But you touched my sister ❄💢
Unknown
W... What *shocked as héll*
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Do you remember the girl from last night
It was a deserted road and a girl was walking alone there.
That unknown man was roaming around, but suddenly he saw a very beautiful lady, and he approaches her
That lady chuckled and said thanks. That unknown man was confused but she also say
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What... do you mean 🥴
Then the girl winks and calls her sister and tells her everything
Suryavanshi
Unknown
Uhh... So you.. are
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Dude I mean you really don't have manners right
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I just came back from Italy to India
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And as soon as I came, I saw the face of a bitch.
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Hey bholenath *she prays while joining her hand*
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I don't want to kíll him
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Umm.. Boys you will do it
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And make sure to torture him till his death and do whatever you want
Saying this the girl leaves from there in her car
Then the girl reaches her home which is like a castle
All servants greet :- Khamma Ghani (greetings)
She smiles and straightly goes to her mom
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Maa *hug her from behind*
Aditi Suryavanshi Thakur
How are you my daughter, Ragini*smile and hug back*
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
I'm fine maa but where is bāpu
Aditi Suryavanshi Thakur
Hmph
Aditi Suryavanshi Thakur
You don't even miss me just bāpu
Aditi Suryavanshi Thakur
*sulking*
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
Okay I'm sorry
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
But please tell me where is he
Aditi Suryavanshi Thakur
In his favorite room
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
Huh
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
Is he doing a meeting or somethin—
Before she can say anything suddenly two boys come and hug her
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
*chuckles and hug back*
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
I'm fine. How are you *break the hug*
Karan Suryavanshi Thakur
Jiji, I missed you so much
Arjun Suryavanshi Thakur
No I missed you the most
Karan Suryavanshi Thakur
No me
Arjun Suryavanshi Thakur
No me
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
Okay fine please don't fight
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
You both missed me so much and I also missed you so much
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
But now I'm going to meet bāpu
Arjun Suryavanshi Thakur
Okey
Karan Suryavanshi Thakur
Okey
Then she goes to her father's secret room
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
Bāpu
Amar Suryavanshi Thakur
Ragini *he was shocked to see her because she didn't tell him before arriving*
Amar Suryavanshi Thakur
*he got up and hugged her*
Amar Suryavanshi Thakur
Beta why didn't you tell me that you were coming
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
I just want to surprise you
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
*giggles*
Amar Suryavanshi Thakur
*chuckles*
Amar Suryavanshi Thakur
You're still a kid
Ajay Suryavanshi Thakur
What's up little devil
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
I'm fine kakosa. How are you
Kakosa :- Father's younger brother
Ajay Suryavanshi Thakur
I'm also fine *smile*
Amar Suryavanshi Thakur
Well beta I want to talk to you about something
Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur
Okay
Author
Guys please tell me how this story is because I have written a Hindi story for the first time.
Author
And I don't know how it is. So please tell me.
Introduction
Guys before continuing the story I want to do a quick introduction so that you will not be confused
And also this is a rajasthani story so I will tell you some words so that it will be clear
Name:- Ragini Suryavanshi Thakur (MC)
Age:- 26
—CEO of the biggest company in Asia and a mafia
Like:- Her family, friends, guns, fighting, south-indian food and her soon-to-be wife
Hate:- People who hurt her family, slúts and bítches
—Daughter of Amar and Aditi Suryavanshi Thakur and sister of Karan, Arjun and Priya
Name:- Amar Suryavanshi Thakur
Age:- 42
—CEO of the biggest industry in Rajasthan
Like:- His wife, daughter and her family
Hate:- Whõre
—Father of Ragini and husband of Aditi
Name:- Aditi Suryavanshi Thakur
Age:- 40
Like:- Her daughter, her husband and sweet foods
Hate:- No one
—Former female general
—Mother of Ragini and wife of Amar
Name:- Karan Suryavanshi Thakur
Age:- 25
—Manager of Ragini's company
Like:- Her brother, sister, mom, dad and spicy food
Hate:- Slúts
—Son of Amar and Aditi. Brother of Ragini, Arjun and Priya
Name:- Arjun Suryavanshi Thakur
Age:- 24
—Manager of Amar's company
Like:- His family and chocolates
Hate:- People who get close to her sister
—Son of Amar and Aditi. Brother of Ragini, Karan and Priya.
Name:- Priya Suryavanshi Thakur
Age:- 22
—Currently doing MBBS
Like:- Stuff toys and chocolates
Hate:- Baddies
—Daughter of Amar and Aditi. Sister of Ragini, Karan and Arjun.
Name:- Ajay Suryavanshi Thakur
Age:- 40
—Exports and Imports
Like:- His family
Hate:- His wife and his best friend
—Ajay has a son "Rudra Suryavanshi Thakur".
—His wife cheated on him with his best friend.
Name:- Rudra Suryavanshi Thakur
Age:- 26
—The best doctor
Like:- Coffee and his family
Hate:- Bad people
—Son of Ajay Suryavanshi Thakur. And cousin of Ragini, Karan, Arjun and Priya.
Name:- Lakshita Goyal (FL)
Age:- 23
—A good cook and a doctor
Like:- Her soon-to-be wife, Kajal (her bestie),chocolate and sweets/sweet foods
Hate:- Touchy people
—Daughter of Manish and Gauri Goyal. Have a brother and a sister.
Name:- Manish Goyal
Age:- 40
—President of a hospital
Like:- His daughter, wife and his business
Hate:- No one
—Father of Lakshita Goyal and Somansh Goyal. Husband of Gauri Goyal.
Name:- Gauri Goyal
Age:- 38
Like:- Her daughter, son and husband
Hate:- Liers
—Mother of Lakshita and Somansh Goyal. Wife of Manish Goyal
Name:- Somansh Goyal
Age:- 22
—Helps his father in business
Like:- His family and roasting people
Hate:- Bítches
—Son of Manish and Gauri Goyal. Brother of Lakshita Goyal.
Name :- Aadhya Yadav
Age:- 30
—The best and the most trustworthy warrior for the Suryavanshi.
Like:- Her people
Hate:- Her enemies
—Her parents died when she was 12 years old and then Amar raised her like his own daughter, taught her and made her a warrior.
There are some more characters but they are not that important so I'll introduce them later.
And these are some basic Rajasthani words
Bāpu:- Father
Maa:- Mother
Kakosa:- Younger brother of father
Babosa:- Older brother of father
Baisa:- Baisa is a popular term used in most parts of Rajasthan state in India, to address a girl or woman respectfully. To put it simply, Baisa is a woman of respect, power and authority.
See you in the next chapter
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