Destiny Goddess [ Could Villainess Survive?]
1. Broken promise
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Inside side a big and beautiful room
A lady was laying down on the the bed lifelessly like her soul is good to leave her body at any time
But suddenly a soft and cute voice of a 5 years old girl gab her soul back.
Sophia (fl)
Mom- mom 🙁 (enters the room with a worried face)
Sophia's mother
What happened to my cherry😊 (said sweetly while getting up)
Sophia (fl)
I have a very important question to ask you (she said with a cute and worried tone.)
Sophia's mother
Yeh I'm hearing you 😊 (while making her sit in her lap.)
Sophia's mother
* Looks like she again having dought in the fairy tale I told her yesterday, so cute. 🥰* (smiling internally)
Sophia (fl)
(Without looking towards her mom) Ar- are you going to leave Sophia mom? ( said in a sad tone while tears come to her eyes.)
Sophia's mother
(Shocked hearing here question) Wh- what, who said that to you? (she turned Sophia's face towards her.)
Sophia (fl)
Hic_ hic Eve- everyone is saying that you- you will leave me soon.(hug her tightly) Plea- please mom don't leave alone me I- I will be a good girl. 😭
Sophia's mother
* How dare those Fu**er to made me angel cry* 😡
Sophia's mother
(She some how drinks her anger and, then said sweetly while cleaning her tears.) How can I even dare to leave my cherry alone. 😊
Sophia (fl)
(Stops crying) That means you will never leave me alone.😁
Sophia's mother
Yeh I won't.😊
Sophia (fl)
Promise me, promise you won't leave me.🥺
Sophia's mother
(With a sad smile) Yes I won't leave you alone. I will stay with you even if whole world is against you, and mark my words even if someday when you aren't able to see with your naked eye, I will be still there for you, only need to close your eyes and feel me.🙂
Sophia (fl)
😑. To be honest mom I can't able to understand what you were saying, I only understand you aren't going to leave me now.😁
Sophia's mother
You will get to know when the right time comes.☺️ But now you also have to promise me something.
Sophia (fl)
What is it mom (innocently)
Sophia's mother
Promise me that you won't let anyone to use you and you'll also try to live a happy and fearless life.😊
Sophia (fl)
(While pouting) Mom aren't you being too greedy to as so many things in one promise. 😤 (cross her hands)
Sophia's mother
(with fake anger) Ok then I am also not going to keep my promise to you. (looks away)
Sophia (fl)
No- no I promise 😖
Sophia's mother starts laughing
Sophia's mother
Why are you so sweet, you feel like cure to my all problems. 😂
With this a big smile came both the faces and then Sophia falls a sleep while hugging her mom.
Sophia was crying her lungs out
Sophia (fl)
Why! Whhhyy! Mom WHY! ( crying and screaming)
Sophia (fl)
Why did you leave me alone mom why? 😭
Sophia (fl)
Hic_ hic_ why didn't take me wit- with you up there.
Sophia (fl)
That bi**hy man,😡 ( eyes filled with hate and anger) he didn't even come here to attend your funeral. Instead he announced his own wedding today with that fu**ing friend of your.
Sophia (fl)
Now I have no one left in this hella world hold me.😭
Sophia (fl)
I- I wish you to join you there mom but I am bounded with our promise and I dare not to break it.
She kept crying whole day and slept on the cold ground of the funeral hall, and on the other hand her dad was enjoying his new marriage.
After that day Sophia's life becomes worse than hell, her step mother and sister treats her like animals.
Her own father never cared about her. She gets eat something leftover in 2-4 days and supposed to sleep on the cold floor even in last winter.
Her family only send her to school and college due to the fear of society. After coming back to home she needs to do all household work.
They used to beat her every day, but still she remained quiet, she tolerated everything without saying a word. She kept thinking that one day GOD will hear to her and this all will end.
But that day never came, instead his own dad decides to sell her to an old rich man.
Sophia was totally against this idea so, she decided to put this all mess on end, as their torture has already exceeded her toleration leave.
On Sophia's 25th birthday and her mother's 10th funeral.
Sophia's step mother
(Face filled with terror of death) Yo- you u can't ki- kill me like this Sophia. I - I am like your mo - mom.😰
Sophia (fl)
You don't know what I can do my dear stepmother (while putting the knife on her neck and smiling like psycho.)
Sophia's step mother
See Sophia Plea-please leave me I will give you whatever you want.😨
Sophia (fl)
Oh really you will give me anything I want.😏(downs the knife a little.)
Sophia's step mother
Yeh, yes I will. (smiles) Just say what you want.
Sophia (fl)
So what I want now is.. your soul (smiles while putting the knife on its previous place.)
Sophia (fl)
Cause I don't think I am going to forgive you for what you did to me and my mother. As well as aren't you missing your husband and daughter. (said while looking on the soul- less bodies of her father and step sister.)
Sophia's step mother
I- I ...
Before she can say anything else Sophia's knife moved on her neck and laid her death.
After this Sophia put fire on whole mantion and walked away.
She was crying and walking bare feets continuously in rain while apologizing from her mom.
Sophia (fl)
I'm sorry mom, I am sorry for not being able to complete my promise.
Sophia (fl)
You always kept your promise, still when ever I close my eyes and think about you I am able to feel your presence.
Sophia (fl)
You never left me, and this was reason that I was able to tolerate them till now but..
Sophia (fl)
But today your daughter became a killer. 😭( finally reached to the cliff)
Sophia (fl)
I wish you forgive me for all this, and if possible please mom please give me an another chance to be your daughter and I promise I will complete this promise of mine in that chance of mine.(smiles bitterly)
And what this word of her she jumped down from the cliff into to the river with a smile on her face.
As soon as she falls in the river she closed her eyes and everything turns black.
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2. In the Novel
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So now enjoy the story. 😁
As Sophia close her eyes everything, buts black and dark.
She thought everything is ending here but then she heard the strange voice.
???
Let's grant your wishes
???
I'll give you an another chance.
Everything turns silent again.
???
No! (a girl wakes up from bed with scared face.) (looks here and there.)
She tries to figure out what going on .
And found her self in a strange but beautiful room which is not even 1% familiar to her
???
Is this hell?🤨 But then why there is such a beautiful room with this bed, is this some new kind of treatment in hell.😑 ( still trying to recognise the room.)
???
Or did God send me the wrong section. ( ̄ヘ ̄;)
She was getting confused second by second as she wasn't able to how she came there.
The last thing she remained was the moment she jumped down the cliff.
When she was struggling with her thoughts a voice disturbed her.
Lily (Inari's maid)
You are finally awake Lady Inari! (shocked+ happy) 😄
???
Huh- Who are you? (Wasn't able to notice here entering as she was busy was busy in her own thoughts.)
Lily (Inari's maid)
It's me My Lady, your maid.☺️ (She was a little shocked by her question)
???
Oh! My maid, Yeh! Now I remember. (grabs the hair pin from the side table)
She suddenly attacked on Lily and pin her to the wall strongly by putting the hair pin on her neck.
???
My maid huh! But what if I tell you that, I never had one. Then will you still dare to say that again.😠 (push the hair pin more near to her neck.)
Lily (Inari's maid)
My- my la- lady (shocked and scared)
???
Now tell me the truth or I will...😠 (smirked)
Lily (Inari's maid)
I'm sa- saying..
Before Lily could say anything else the other girls eyes fell on her long black hairs and she got super shocked and hair pin fell from her hands.
???
*How can this be possible! 😳 how can my hairs grow so long and turn black in just one day* (steps away from Lily)
???
Mirror! Where is the mirror. ( asked from Lily in a screaming way.) (Panicked a little.)
Lily (Inari's maid)
Th.. there 😰 (points in the direction where mirror was placed.) (shocked and terrified a lot due to her actions.)
She runs towards the mirror and when she saw her reflection, a volcano erupted for her.
It was not her even though the voice was still same but the face for sure don't belong to her.
???
It's not me! It can't be me! Whose reflection is this. ( feel down on keens and covers her face with both hands) (shocked)
Lily (Inari's maid)
What are you saying my lady it's you the youngest daughter of Sasoki family Miss Inari Sasoki.(shouts in a shocked and caring way)
The reflection she saw ☝🏻
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*What! How can this be possible. It is not my body. It's not me. Whose body is this is this the new way of God to punish me.* (tears automatically started falling down.)
She wasn't able to understand anything as suddenly Inari start crying. When Lily saw her crying she got super panicked and didn't know what to do so, she went out to report any one who can help.
Inari didn't noticed her leaving. She kept thinking about what is happening to her.
She was struggling a lot with her thoughts, when suddenly she remembered what that maid told her "My Lady it's you the youngest daughter of Sasoki family Miss Inari Sasoki" and Her face went pale.
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
Inari Sasoki! Isn't it the name of the villainess from my mom's favourite Novel "Melody of My Love".😨
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*How can this be possible*(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ
Inari was still trying to figure out things when she suddenly heard a sweet familiar voice.
???
My darling (a caring and worried tone)
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
Huh (turn behind and got a new shock.)
Without even thinking for a second she runs towards the owner of the voice and hugs her
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
Mo- mom ( smiles while tears come in her eyes) I missed you a lot. I missed you. 🥺
Asami Sasoki ( Inari's mom)
I also missed you a lot. (hugs her tightly)
Asami Sasoki ( Inari's mom)
Now stop crying. ( clean her tears.)
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
(Still hugging her) *Please don't leave me this time please*
suddenly a man enters the room in hurry with worried and happy face. Lily also entered behind him.
Tadashi Sasoki (Inari's father)
How is My Sweetheart feeling now? 😊 (smiles brightly)
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
Who are you? 🤨 (Shocked)
Tadashi Sasoki (Inari's father)
What aren't you recognising me sweetheart? 😱
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
(Move her head left and right) No, and why are you calling me sweetheart? 🙄
Lily (Inari's maid)
See Your highness I told you she didn't even recognised me also.😔 (worried tone.)
Asami Sasoki ( Inari's mom)
What you aren't recognising your own dad Inari. 😧
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
My.. My dad 😵 *When in the hell this happened.*
Suddenly she remembered that is in Inari's body
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*Oh he must be Inari's dad*😯
Before she can even react at this she lost her consciousness and was about to fall down when her father gab her.
Tadashi Sasoki (Inari's father)
Call the Royal Doctor immediately. (Panicked)
Lily (Inari's maid)
Yes Your highness (bows and left immediately)
Asami Sasoki ( Inari's mom)
What happened to her Honey (worried and tears come to her eyes)
Tadashi Sasoki (Inari's father)
Don't worry she will be okay (sad smile) (made Inari lay down on the bed)
After some time the doctor arrived and after some check up she came out.
Tadashi Sasoki (Inari's father)
How is she (Panicked but didn't show)
Asami Sasoki ( Inari's mom)
Yeh how is she, Elise?😟
Elise Park (Royal Doctor)
It's nothing serious she has been unconscious due to the weakness, after all she has been in coma for 2 weeks.
Tadashi Sasoki (Inari's father)
But she didn't even recognised me.🥺
Elise Park (Royal Doctor)
It must be because of that terrible incident.
But didn't worry she remembered everything and everyone in some time for example 2-3 weeks or a month. 😊
Asami Sasoki ( Inari's mom)
Oh I see. (Smiles a little)
Elise Park (Royal Doctor)
Cheer up Your highness, you should be happy that she is now out of Coma, as according to our test it was impossible her to came out of it before 2 months. So It's like a miracle that she is awake now. (smiles bright)
Tadashi Sasoki (Inari's father)
Yeh! She is right Honey.😊 (Pat her shoulder.) (Little sad inside)
Asami Sasoki ( Inari's mom)
Huh! Fine! 😊
Tadashi Sasoki (Inari's father)
Good 😊
Elise Park (Royal Doctor)
Your Highness there are some things that you need to keep in mind or it will be harmful for her.
After this Elise told them some important thing that they should keep in mind while Inari is recovering. Like - She should not take any stree, not talking to her about that incident and extra.
After this everyone to there respected work and Lady Asami was sitting near Inari while waiting for her to get up.
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I hope you guys enjoyed the Chapter.🥺
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Meet you guys in next chapter.😊
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Till then
Merry Christmas ⛄ 🎁
And see you soon Cuties (✿^‿^)
3. Change my destiny
Inari is laying on her bed and starring the ceiling, while her mother had already fallen asleep.
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*It's not a dream right.( ̄ヘ ̄;) So that means I have really entered it this NOVEL.* щ(゜ロ゜щ)
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*So this also means that in last I have to die from Main villain's hands.*(╥﹏╥)
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*Wow! God you gave me another chance to die again.*😑
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*But I can die like this again and especially not when I have met my mom and in this new life.*
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*Even though she is not my real mom but her care is real. * (smiles while looking at her mother)
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*And for that I need to remember what exactly happened in the novel.*
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*Only then I can find a way to escape my destiny.*
So from what I remember the name of this novel is Melody of my love and it was my mom's favourite novel, she used to read many times.
The setting of this novel is in a world where everyone who ever belongs to noble family can use some kind of magic, or you can say using magic means you are a part of the nobles. In this world there are 6 main kingdom which holds a lot of power and there names are like:
• Sun Empire which is ruled by Sato family (ML of novel belongs to this family.),
• Lunaus Empire which rules by Tsukumo Family (Villan of the novel belongs to this family.),
• Holic Empire which is ruled by Katomi Family(FL of novel belongs to this family.),
• Smithsum Empire which is ruled by Sasoki family (Family from which Villainess of novel belongs I mean I belong.),
• Mythic Empire which is ruled by Myoga family (you will come to know later. 😝),
and the last one is
• Dark lands which is ruled by Demons.
So according to the the story Sato family can use the power of light, Tsukumo family posses the power of darkness, Katomi family have the power of healing and they're said to be more connected to the God among all. After Ml's and Villain's family my or you can say Sasoki family is the strongest, it's not because of we have very special magic. Our family can control the power of any one element, but what makes us special is the skills of creating weapons and fighting. No one can defeat Sasoki family in weapons skills. Then comes Myoga family which is blessed to use the power of any one mythical beast, and about demons I don't know much about them cause they are not shown much in the story. What I know is they want to occupy all the land and set their empire all over the world. All the 5 Empire are opposing them for their evil doings.
Now let's come to the story
It started from the power ceremony of Fl(it's an event which comes in every nobles life after he/she reaches 18 and in this they get their respective power from God). There both ML and Villain show her and fall for her 😑. Then after 1 years real Inari's power ceremony held, even though Inari was older than Fl her ceremony held last as she was in coma for 1 whole year. I don't know the exact reason but in the story it was shown she was attacked by demons while she was coming back from her bestie 's power ceremony.
Unlucky Inari didn't get any power and the priest told that her core is every weak to hold any power so, now she was not less then a common person and she has nothing to identify her as a noble instead of her surname. She wasn't able to digest this truth and left all broken and at that time our ML comes to comfort her to she fells for her.
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*Seriously.😒 Why every one is falling for each other in just one site like they're wet soap which can slip any time.*😑
Leave it let us continue further
So, now ML and villan have fallen for Fl and Villainess have fallen for ML. Inari did everything to gain ML but he can't look anyone else then Fl and then finally she tries to kill the Fl. But to her bad luck she can't and get caught. After this her family some how save her by sacrificing a lot of things like there name and much more things.
They promised both ML and FL that they will send her away somewhere else so she don't do such things. But before they can do so she already got killed by the villain for trying to harm his beloved and everyone thought it was a suicide.
After this villan tried to get Fl in every possible way but he can't and at last on Fl's birthday she proposed ML in front of everyone and it hits the villain's heart like hell. After this incident villain went to lead the war against the dark lands as he found no other reasons to survive in this world. Finally after 10 years of continuous battle villain died the war and on the other hand male in female lead got a beautiful and happy ending.
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*What the f*** is this story and who the hell wrote this.*🤬
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*And do you call him a villain, like seriously. 😑 Even though he was shown very cruel and also going to kill me in future but he
give up on his love so easily.*😒
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*When I read this story for first time I felt very bad for him but after knowing that he is going to kill me in the end I don't feel much said for him.😤 Is this what people call change in point of view. 🤨
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*I wonder why my mom loves this story.*😑😒
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*To be very honest I always hated Inari's not because she was the villain or she tried to kill Fl. It was because she have a very beautiful and caring family for which she didn't care, and on the other side it was me* (tea comes eyes while thinking this)
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
*I always want a family like her in which I can also feel the love of my father but unlucky that son of bi*** .😡 But it looks like God took it way too seriously that he also passed her faith of death to me.*😑
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
But don't worry I will do every possible thing to change my destiny as I think I am too greedy to leave this lovely life of Inari so soon.
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
And for this the only thing I need to do is to stay away from all the major characters specially the villain but still I will try my best to not be there enemy or it won't be good for me. As well as I will try to become more and more stronger so that no one can look down on me even if I don't have any power.(smile in a little evil way)
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
Inari Sasoki (Fl)/(Villainess of novel)
I promise mom I won't disappoint you this time. (said determination in eyes while looking her mom) (smile)
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