Backyard
Jean's acting weird...
Jamaica woke up in the middle of the night, she became thirsty so she went to the kitchen
Jean Quin ( brother )
Boo!
Jamaica Quin
what are you doing here in the middle of the night?!
Jean Quin ( brother )
I can't sleep...
Jean Quin ( brother )
Why are you also here?
Jamaica Quin
I just randomly woke up and I became thirty
Erica Quin ( sister )
Ugh, you guys are so loud...
Jean Quin ( brother )
it's your fault Jamaica
Erica Quin ( sister )
Sissy, I'm hungry...
Erica said as she begged Jamaica to make her food
Jean Quin ( brother )
Make me some too!
Jamaica Quin
*glared at Jean*
While Jamaica was cooking, Jean felt like someone was watching them from afar...
Jean Quin ( brother )
hey.... I feel like somebody is watching us...
Jamaica Quin
Must be your imagination...
Erica Quin ( sister )
brother stop scaring me!
Jean Quin ( brother )
No I'm not!
Jean Quin ( brother )
I'm serious
Jamaica looked at Jean with a serious expression...
Jamaica Quin
{ Jean always makes jokes... So it's rare for him to be serious... }
As Jamaica thought hard Jean kept staring out the window
The window is a big rectangular window with black curtains
Jamaica felt shivers down her spine then someone interrupted them
Lisa Quin ( mother )
Hey, why are you guys awake at this hour?
Jamaica Quin
Sorry mom, we got hungry
Erica Quin ( sister )
Mom Jean is trying to scare me and Sissy!
Lisa Quin ( mother )
Jean what did you tell her?!
Jean Quin ( brother )
I'm not lying I swear!
Jean told Lisa everything but she was not convinced
Lisa Quin ( mother )
don't worry darling, see?
there's no one
Erica looked at the window and saw no one
Erica Quin ( sister )
Brother you liar!
Jean Quin ( brother )
you know what, I don't care if you don't believe me
Arthur Quin ( father )
*yawns* good morning everyone
Lisa Quin ( mother )
Good morning hon!
Jamaica Quin
Breakfast's ready!
They all ate the food...
But Jean still has a feeling that someone is watching them...
Jamaica Quin
Girl, my brother said something weird last night...
Bianca Mari
oh my god what?
Jamaica Quin
He said he felt like someone was watching us...
Bianca Mari
hmm... I think u should trust your brother..
Bianca Mari
I just have a gut feeling...
Bianca is good at stuff like this, so Jamaica always trusted her
Jamaica Quin
Oh shit were gonna be late!
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The old house
Bianca Mari
*quietly* pst! Jamaica!
Bianca handed Jamaica a note:
" Trust your brother, he might not be lying... "
- Bianca 🤍
Jamaica thought for a while...
her gut feeling is telling her to trust him, so she did...
Jamaica Quin
Bi, help me find my brother
They both found him at the school garden alone..
Jamaica Quin
What are you doing here alone?
Jean Quin ( brother )
Nothing
Bianca Mari
Got no friends?
Jamaica slapped Bianca gently on her shoulder
Jamaica Quin
*whispers* stop, your making it worse...
Bianca Mari
*whispers back* sorry!
They talked about the incident that happened in the morning
Jamaica Quin
I trust you...
Jean Quin ( brother )
Thanks...
Bianca Mari
wanna investigate....?
Jamaica Quin
Meet at the gate after class
Jean Quin ( brother )
Okay
Jean Quin ( brother )
{ what's taking them so long... }
Jamaica Quin
Sorry we were late!
Jean Quin ( brother )
it's fine..
They all went to the Quins house
Jamaica Quin
Bianca's with me!
Jamaica Quin
No response means there's no one here
Bianca Mari
that's a good thing to be honest
Jamaica Quin
let's prepare
They all prepared what they are bringing:
Flashlights (3)
Emergency food (20)
Batteries (10)
Phone (2)
Extra clothes ( 3 clothes for each )
Power bank (2 fully charged)
Bianca Mari
Now we're ready!
Jean Quin ( brother )
let's go ...
Jamaica Quin
*cough* there's so much dust here...
Bianca Mari
I didn't bring masks..
Jean Quin ( brother )
Just cover your nose!
Jean Quin ( brother )
Yeah
Jamaica Quin
Hmmm... It does have a creepy atmosphere...
Jean Quin ( brother )
Dang it, I didn't bring a jacket!
Jean Quin ( brother )
Do u not feel the the cold?
Jean Quin ( brother )
I feel like I'm freezing to death!
Jamaica and Bianca stared at each other before looking back at Jean
Bianca Mari
Good thing I bought a jacket
while Bianca gave Jean her jacket, Jamaica looked around the neighborhood
it was an old run down house, it was pretty dusty, the windows is as tall as the wall is, and the red roof has a hole in it...
Jamaica Quin
let's go, it's getting dark so we should hurry
Jean Quin ( brother )
Okay
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Mysterious man
the three went inside the house
Jean Quin ( brother )
it's so dark in here...
Bianca Mari
Is that a spider web?!
Bianca Mari
God I hate spiders!
Jamaica Quin
don't worry it's not a spider
They explored the house for hours
Jean Quin ( brother )
Hey look!
Jean Quin ( brother )
let's go inside that door
Bianca Mari
We haven't checked it yet right?
Jamaica Quin
no... But I have a bad feeling
Jamaica was hesitant for awhile but agreed
They went inside the door one by one
Jean Quin ( brother )
it looks like someone was tortured here....
Jamaica Quin
Is that a furnace...
They found a torture room that looks like someone got tortured here
Bianca Mari
Ewww.... Is that blood?!
Bianca saw a brown stain in the wall
Suddenly, they heard a loud thud coming from outside
Jamaica covered Bianca's mouth while Jean stepped closer to them
The three hid inside the torture room
Jean Quin ( brother )
*whispers* someone's out there!
Jamaica Quin
*whispers back* I know!
The three fell silent when they heard loud breathing
？？？
Please, please don't kill me!
Bianca was holding back her tears
Bianca Mari
*whispers* what did he do to her?
Jamaica hugged Jean and Bianca, hoping they'll come home safe and sound
Jamaica Quin
*whispers* don't worry Bianca, it's okay...
Jamaica Quin
Looks like the killer was gone
Jean Quin ( brother )
I'll go check
Jean checked outside, and no one was there
Jean Quin ( brother )
it's safe!
Jamaica and Bianca ran outside while Jean followed
？？？
... those little brats, they won't get away with this...
Bianca Mari
The house was so far from your house Jean, how did you see him?
Jean Quin ( brother )
He was standing near the big oak tree I planted when I was a kid
Erica Quin ( sister )
Where were you guys!
Jean Quin ( brother )
Out hunting
Erica Quin ( sister )
you should've bought me with you!
Jamaica Quin
It was too dangerous
Erica Quin ( sister )
Sissy Bianca, why are you crying..?
Bianca Mari
Nothing, do you wanna play dolls?
Erica Quin ( sister )
Yay!
Erica and Bianca went to play dolls at the living room
Jamaica Quin
Are you okay?
Jean Quin ( brother )
Yeah...
Jean Quin ( brother )
The voice seems familiar though...
Lisa Quin ( mother )
children!
Lisa Quin ( mother )
we're back!
Arthur Quin ( father )
We bought McDonald's
Erica Quin ( sister )
Yay McDonald's!!
While they ate McDonald's, Jamaica's sensitive nose smelled a bad odor
Jamaica Quin
*murmured* what's that smell...
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