Feng's P.O.V

  My name is Feng luo yes and I'm the first female general to rule a military camp ,actually to put it at set I'm the first and last for the dragon kingdom. My father disowned me after finding out I disguised as a man to go to war , I and my best friend long who only knew my secret of being a woman are about to ..........(thinking cut out by long's reading a book aloud).

       In the mist of war between Kings for empire a man would...

        "Shh shut up long and knock before entering my camp"I said with firm voice.

  "Chill general, I'm just trying to ease up before going for our 778th war"he teased

      "Longie ,you know that we are    fighting against the mermaid clan and I think it's unfair"

    "Blame the king,tsk"he said clicking his tongue

   "So luo I .......(interrupted by a twice knock at the door)

      " Come in " we said I unison .

"General Feng , lieutenant long " greeted the soldier.

  "What's your report" I said in cold voice

    "W,we are r,ready to move out" he stuttered and I responded with a hum for him to go.i looked at longie and gave him a slight nod before i grabbed my sword and

headed to my Night Wolf (horse)

     I went to the front line to give an announcement but before I could start one of the king's men arrived

        "Wait" he shouted

"To what honor do I own this unannounced visit" I asked

  "I am sorry general but the king would like u to call off the war" he said and my men started to voice their protest

  "Quite down everyone"I shouted in my commanding voice and every one of my men stopped talking

      "To what has hishighness decided to stop this war from going forward"I inquired from the man

    "I'm sorry general but this is not what I am to know, u would have to meet his highness" he replied

   I sighed and told him we would be moving in two days time to see the king and he left .I looked back at my men an announced that the war would be called off.

               Two days after

        It has been two days since I arrived at chu capital after waiting for 9 years to come back home

    The shu kingdom is the largest in the history of all the kingdom in existence and the chu capital is where the heart of the kingdom is , the Royalty live in the chu capital and so do I

    "General Feng I'm afraid you will have to stay in the capital for more days" A messenger for the his majesty reported back at me

  Why? I questioned him

"His ma....

      Feng !!!    Feng  !!! I heard my name being shouted from the back

*As I turned to look I got jumped on *

"who is it "*asking with an angered voice*

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Who is it?" *I asked with an angered voice*

        "Huh,Feng u don't remember who I am " *the petite figure on my arms asked with a teary voice*

    "If u don't answer u should forget about having a head" *I said throwing her on the ground*

        "Aww, fengie don't be so harsh on princess xie it's not like it's your first time being hugged by someone ha ha ha " *long teased before busting to a laugh*

     "Now u are arriving long , I did forget to give you a heads up right" *I said like a predator looking at my new prey*

    *gulp* "I'm just joking,u are no fun" *suddenly felt like he was forgetting something*

  *giving no heed to what I did I looked at the crying girl on the ground*

      "So you are princess xie huh? *I asked not feeling any guilt*

     "BULLY" *the girl busted out while getting up*

   "Yes it's me Feng ,don't you remember me * she answered in one breath while tearing up again*

      "Noisy" *I said turning and giving no heed to princess xie or whatever her name is again,I walked straight to a guard*

    " good morning general Feng may I be of help"*said the guard looking nervous at my approach*

    "Hmm, I would like you to......" *Before i said anything I was distracted by the approach of an eunuch *

   "Greetings general Feng , lieutenant long his majesty would like to meet you now"

    " Finally ,Tsk" *I clicked my tongue before following the eunuch with long by my side towards the palace *

     " GENERAL FENG AND LIEUTENANT LONG ARRIVES" * announced a door man before I was given an audience with his majesty or whoever the puppet sitting on that throne*

       "Greetings your majesty" *with a little bow*

   "No need to be so formal general  raise "

   "Thank you your majesty"

  "So to what do I owe your visit general"

    *I glared at him before answering* " I believe you know about the unexpected calling off of war your majesty".

   "Yes I very much remember the order, I have things to discuss with you"

     "Your majesty if you may allow me , your order brought panic amist the soldiers and .......*interrupted by a sudden arrival*

   " THE CHIEF ADVISOR ARRIVES" *announced from outside the palace*

"Why's my dad here " * I muttered to myself as he entered*

    "Greetings your majesty"

"Greetings advisor Feng and to what brought upon your unexpected visit today"

    "Your majesty,i heard that general Feng is back so I have come to give a advice"

   "And what's it u must say"

"Your majesty, general Feng has been in the battlefield for decades now and I think it's about time for a young prodigy to surface"

     "That's my thinking too, but who is worthy"

    "My son of course and not another fake" *he said and sneered while looking at me*

" U....." *Long tried to bust at him but I gave him a cold face*

    "I'm sorry your majesty but it seems I'm a third wheel here so I would like to take my leave" * I stood up to leave but*

   "SUCH AUDACITY"

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SUCH AUDACITY !!

      "huh" * I raised my eyebrow at my father*

     " Your majesty, I think u should put my advice to work  for young people these days are so worthless"

    "General Feng"

" Yes your majesty"

   " I wish to discuss about marriage between you and princess xie"

     "I'm sorry your majesty, but I do not wish to get married to princess xie and that all "

     "You......"

     "If nothing else I am leaving"

" Get back here Feng bla , bla , bla

.......

*or whatever is coming out of the advisor mouth , anyway I'm out of here*

   *After seeing long off *

         General Feng quarters

                 In bathhouse

       *Flash back*

  Feng's mom :"Come back here you bastard"

    Little Feng:" momma please forgive me I won't.....*slap ,slap*

       Feng's mom: "you are a mistake apologize to your brother now" *slap, slap*

    Feng's dad:*slap , slap* "If you can't discipline such a waste don't call yourself the mistress of Feng family"

  Feng's mom: *holding her swollen cheeks* I ,i~m sorry master ,I will surely teach her well , guards bring the ruler * grabs little Feng and start to flog her*

      Waah~waah~~

       Back to present

* Knock,knock*

      " Who is it"

  " Sire it's me"

       " humm , show yourself Jiu" *A dark cloacked messenger ninja appeared before me*

  "What is it" * I said with a cold voice*

   *With a little bow* " sire, his majesty requests to meet you in the maze"

    "That's all " *standing up and grabbing a sword while approaching him slowly*

     "Ye~ yes sire "

*Cutting off his throat*

   "It's a very big pity you saw my gender Jiu" *standing above his lifeless body and cleaning the sword*

*Grabbing a coat and wearing it*

     " Rue "

   "Yes sire " *from outside*

"Clean up this mess"

"Sure thing the puppet has some moves on his sleeves" * with a light chuckle*

       "Let's have some food first what do you say"

...       *Hidden figure* " humm"...

...Maze...

Feng: " Your majesty you requests for me "

    Majesty: " Yes yes general "

Feng: " then it must be important, what do you say little pup majesty"

Majesty:" I'm sorry your majesty but it's very important "

          ( Feng's hidden identity is also the king)

     Feng: " so pup what's so important that you have to disturb my slaghter"

    Majesty: I ,I have other things to discuss with you that you might like your majesty

          "And what's it little one"

      " Your majesty I wish to tell you about the mermaid tail"

      "Huh, you called to tell about some fantasy unbelievable" *with an angered voice and grabbed his throat*

    *Struggling* "Nono yo~ur  majesty  Feng it's true the chosen has been egged"

    *Releasing him* "huh"

      * Gasping for air* " your majesty the chosen one has been laid "

      (Eggs are for fishes and mermaids are basically fishes in my understanding)

                 *Back to story*

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    "You mean the legendary prophecy"

      " Yes your majesty Feng"

   " Hummm , interesting tell me more"

      "So your majesty Feng, before this war I sent some spys to the mermaid kingdom to discover more ,and I discovered that the egg is in need of thunder and lightning elements which are rare for someone to get"

     "You're saying I should help , how convincing"

         "Yes , we need to....

   "We what " * I said looking at him like a predator*

     " Sorry your majesty ,you have to get to the tails before anyone else "

          "Interesting indeed isn't it shadows"

     *Hidden figures* "indeed"

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