In Love With My Uncle
Death The New Beginning
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This is my first chat story in this platform
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if I make mistake please kindly tell me
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before reporting my work
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because I was writing novels in my other account
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so basically this is not my first work but first chat story
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so let's start a our first story
The city lights flicker beyond the glass window.
Elaine Carter:- A 22 years old business woman intelligent but betrayed by those close to her.
Selena Carter:- A 20 years old young lady Elaine's sister a seemingly innocent but cunning woman.
Damien Hale:- Elaine's fiancée, a charmingly but ambitious man.
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So let go back to our story
[ ] this means action (what our characters are doing)
(__) This means Inner thoughts (whatever our characters are thinking)
✉️ this means message what our characters type on their phone
📞 this means our characters are talking in phone
So let's go back to our story.
Elaine Carter
[ typing at 10:00 p.m.]
Selena where are You. I need to talk to you.
Selena Carter
[read at 11:32 p.m.]
ho? sister dear what the rush.
Elaine Carter
✉️ Damien is missing his phone is off. you are with him earlier weren't you
Selena Carter
✉️ Oh, sis... you are really slow aren't you.
Elaine Carter
✉️ what do you mean.
Elaine Carter
✉️ call me right now.
Selena Carter
📞 I am saying you should stop looking for him. He is right here with me.
Selena Carter
📞 you heard me. Your dearest fiancée is mine now.
Elaine Carter
[Heart pounding. Fingers tremble over the phone.]
Selena, this is not funny. Where are you.
Selena Carter
[Send Photo]
... Image loads.Damien and Selena in hotel bed,tangled together, smiling at camera 📸...
Elaine Carter
[Breathing shakily.]... This has to be joke.
Selena Carter
📞 oh poor sister. You always thought you were smarter. Don't you? That you were above me. But look where are you now.
Elaine Carter
[ Hands clench on phone.Teeth grit.]📞
..Why
Damien Hale
[take phone from Selena.] 📞 because darling, power is everything. and your family's inheritance? your shares? they belong to us now.
Elaine Carter
[cold realisation sets in.]📞 ...You to planned this.
Elaine Carter
I trusted you. I LOVED you both!
Damien Hale
that’s the problem, sweetheart. You trusted too easily.
Selena Carter
and now, dear sister… you’re no longer needed.
[A loud crash from the penthouse door.]
Elaine Carter
[Turns sharply.]📞 What the—
Elaine Carter
Selena?! What’s going on?!
Selena Carter
oh, sister. Did you really think I’d let you live after knowing all this?
Elaine Carter
[Backing away. Fear creeping in.]📞 … You wouldn’t
Damien Hale
[Chuckles darkly.]📞 We already have everything we want. Your death? Just a loose end to tie up.
Elaine Carter
[Heart races.] you won’t get away with this!
Selena Carter
oh but we already have.
Elaine Carter
[Struggling] 📞STOP! YOU CAN’T DO THIS!
[The men grab Elaine. She thrashes, screams. The city lights blur as they drag her to the rooftop.]
Elaine Carter
[Struggling] STOP! YOU CAN’T DO THIS!
Selena Carter
[Smirks, stepping forward] Goodbye, sister
Elaine Carter
[A sudden shove. Weightlessness. The wind roars in her ears. The city rushes up to meet her.]
Elaine Carter
(thoughts): I won’t forgive you… I won’t…
Rebirth of the Beauty of the Era
[Scene: An abyss of darkness. A faint voice echoes in the void.]
Goddess of Life
(soft whisper): Open your eyes…
Goddess of Life
(whispering again): Wake up… Your story isn’t over yet…
???
(thoughts): Am I… dead?
[A sharp gasp. Light floods in. The scent of jasmine and old parchment fills the air.]
Elaine Carter ~Now~ Celestia Vaelmont (FL): The infamous "Beauty of the Era," known for her breathtaking looks and cruel reputation. original novel villainess.
Unknown Attendant: A maid serving the Vaelmont household.
So let's go back to Story
???
[Blinking rapidly] … What the hell?
Maid
[Gasping] Y-Your Highness! You’re awake!
Maid
[Tears welling up] Oh, thank the heavens! We thought we lost you!
???
(thoughts): Wait… this isn’t my penthouse. Where am I?
Maid
[Panicked] Your Grace, do you feel unwell? Should I call the royal physician?
???
[Slowly sitting up] … Start talking. Where am I?
Maid
[Blinking in confusion] Y-You are in the Vermont estate, of course! In your chambers, my lady.
???
Vermont…? No way. That name…
???
[Whispering] … This is a joke, right?
Maid
[Fidgeting nervously] My lady… did the fall affect your mind?
Maid
[Nods vigorously] Y-Yes! You fell into the palace lake last night. They feared you wouldn’t wake up!
???
(thoughts): A fall? No, I was— Wait. Palace?
???
[Voice shaking] … Mirror. Give me a mirror.
Maid
[Quickly hands over an ornate golden mirror]
???
No way… This isn’t my face. This is…
???
[Whispers] I’m Celestia Vaelmont.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
Maid
[Tearful smile] Yes, my lady! You’re the daughter of the Archduke, the most beautiful woman in the kingdom!
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): … I’m inside my favorite novel
[A sudden knock on the door. A deep, cold voice speaks.]
???
(low and commanding): I heard she has awakened
Maid
(startled): Y-Your Majesty!
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): … Wait. That voice.
[The door creaks open, revealing a tall figure. A man with piercing crimson eyes and an air of absolute dominance enters.]
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
No… it can’t be.
Maid
[Bowing deeply] Your Majesty… the King.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): The villain of this novel. The man feared by all. My uncle.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
[Heart pounding] …King Lucien.
A Dangerous Man
[Scene: Celestia’s chambers. The air is thick with tension as King Lucien stands at the doorway, his purple 💜 eyes locked onto her.]
King Lucien Vaelmont (ML): The tyrant ruler of the empire, feared for his ruthlessness. Known for his obsessive and psychotic tendencies.
in original novel villain
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Steps forward, his presence overwhelming] You… finally woke up.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): Holy hell. He’s even more intimidating in real life.
Maid
[Fidgeting nervously] Y-Your Majesty, the doctor said Lady Celestia needs rest—
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Sharp glance] Leave us.
Maid
[Paling] O-Of course, Your Majesty! [Quickly bows and scurries out]
[The door closes. Silence fills the room.]
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
[Carefully] …Your Majesty.
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Eyes narrowing] You should be dead.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): …Excuse me?!
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
[Feigning innocence] …Pardon?
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Steps closer, his voice like silk hiding a knife] Last night, you fell into the palace lake. You were unconscious for hours.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): So that’s how the original villainess died in the novel…
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Leaning in slightly] And yet, here you are. Awake.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): Why does he sound… disappointed?
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
[Trying to act normal] I suppose the heavens aren’t done
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Watching her closely] …You’re different.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(Thoughts):Crap. Too soon!
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
[Forces a smile] I did just wake up from a near-death experience, Your Majesty.
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Low chuckle, but there’s no warmth] Is that so?
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): Why does it feel like he doesn’t believe me?
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Reaching out, his fingers brush against a loose strand of her hair] Tell me, little niece…
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): WHY IS HE TOUCHING ME—
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Softly] …Are you still in love with me?
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
[Brain malfunctions] …WHAT?!
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Smirks] Hm. That reaction is new.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): WAIT, HOLD UP. THE ORIGINAL VILLAINESS WAS IN LOVE WITH HIM?!
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[Flashback Memory (Novel Knowledge):]
The original Celestia was infamous for being obsessed with King Lucien. She shamelessly chased after him, declaring her love, even though he never saw her as anything but a nuisance.
And in the original story… she drowned on the same night the original female lead arrived at the palace.
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Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): Oh god. This isn’t just a villainess’s body… this is a woman who SIMPED for a man who never wanted her.
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Watching her with interest] You look horrified.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
[Forces a smile] N-No! Just… still processing things!
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Lifting her chin slightly] Do you still love me, Celestia?
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): I am about to vomit.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
[Quickly] Nope! Not at all! Not even a little!
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Pauses] …Interesting.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): Oh, thank god, he believes me—
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Smirks] That’s a shame. I was starting to enjoy your devotion.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
[Internal screaming]
Maid
(nervously): Y-Your Majesty, the council meeting awaits…
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Glances at the door, then back at Celestia] I’ll return soon, little niece.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): No, thank you. Please don’t.
King Lucian Vaelmolt (Ml)
[Chuckles as if reading her mind] Try not to die again.
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
[Stiffly] …I’ll do my best.
[Lucien exits. Celestia slumps against the bed, mentally exhausted.]
Celestia Vaelmolt (Archduke's daughter)
(thoughts): I am so, so screwed.
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