.....?:nao-kun!!! Nao-kun faster we're gonna miss the train

Naoshi:ok ok riko-chan

Riko yoshina:

15 years old

159 cm> height

hobbies>eating, drawing and singing,flowering flowers

family members>mom dad younger brother

Naoshi hashibe

15 years old

175 cm>height

hobbies>playing video games,sleeping,

family members>mom,dad

Nao's home

Nao:see you tomorrow riko-chan

Riko:ok!!!"waving at nao"bye bye

Nao:that girl never run out of energy weren't she"smiles then goes inside the house,looks ahead"what is it?

Rei:nao it's already 7pm why are you late I thought your and riko-chan will be home by 5:30

Nao:what can't I enjoy my life with riko"take out his shoe then change into slippers then goes in their house" I'm Hungry what's dinner?"walks pass rei

Rei:"shock"

Gouh:nao it's disrespecting to walk pass your Mather like that

Rei:it's ok dear

Gouh:"looks at rei then looks back at nao"your know we're only worried about you right your situation is getting worse

Nao:then I'll go to hospital

Gouh:nao

Nao:ok ok I'm sorry but I can just go to hospital can't i,it sounds like your restricting me to see riko"getting his rice"

Gouh:it's not like that you know that we completely like the two of you together but if riko know about this then I'm sure she will be the one that will advocate you to stay home

Nao:that's why she can't know about this ok mom,dad cause if she know this she will starts worrying about me the whole summer break and I don't want that

Gouh:then you should learn to obey your corfue it's important for your health

Nao:ok ok so can I eat now?

Gouh:he totally get that attitude to you rei

Rei:ok ok I'm just glad you talk to him thank you dear

10:00 pm

Nao:"looking at the celling"[in his mind]god why do I have to have this disease?:"sigh"I'm just gonna sleep now"sleeps"

The next day: 6:30 am

Nao: I'm going!!!

Rei: be careful!!

Nao:yes!!!

Rei:then you can go

Nao: in leaving now byee..."runs"

7:38 am

....?:gooooooddddd mooorrrrrnnniiiiiiinnnnnngggg nao-kun~~~

Nao:good morning just

Juso:oh shin and twaku is here

Shin:morning nao

Nao: good morning twaku

Twaku:"yawns"morning nao

Nao:[in his mind]they probably just drag him out right:so where are going today

Juso: everyone got their money right?

Everyone:yes?

Juso:then our plan for today is to eat at every known store here at Shibuya!!!!!!

shin:Nuh uh"leaves"

Nao:nope"leaves"

Twaku:"yawns,looks aroundthen leaves"

Juso:eh?eh?ehhhhhhhhhh? wait why are you guys leaving me??

7:42 am

Juso:ok I get it it was a bad idea

Nao:will there even an open shop this early huh juso?

Juso:naur there isn't

Shin:"sigh"what should we do then?

Twaku:hey everyone"points at something"

Everyone:ohhhh twaku talk!!!

Twaku:look at what I'm pointing you morons

Everyone:"looks at what twaku is pointing"hmmm YES!!!!

Twaku:[in his mind]they're so loud

Juso:let's go everyone!!!!

Everyone:"follows juso"

shin:umm Sir are you open now?

Ramen shop owner:hmmm of course"smiles"

Everyone:YES!!!!!

7:51 am

Juso:hmmm so delish"just finish his ramen,looks at everyone,shock"you guys are already done why didn't you tell me

everyone:"starts laughing"HAHAHAH LOL!!

8:29 am

Juso:now to Shibuya!!!!!!

Shibuya: 8:45

Shin: hey everyone let's watch a movie

Everyone: sure thing!!!

10:10am

After the movie:

Nao:what happen to you guys

Juso:"trembling"you must have set this up right shin

Shin:"trembling"I didn't think it was that scary sorry

Nao:oh where's twaku

Twaku:"comes out of the cinema"in here you goddamn idiots you guys didn't wake me up I was so embarrasse when the janitor wake me up

Everyone:HHAHAH THAT WHAT UOU GET FOR ALWAYS SLEEPING!!!!

Juso:so let's go eating some real thing!!!!

Twaku:no you guys are gonna accompany me buy some manga and novels before we eat

Juso:have you guys hear something?

Nao and shin:[in their mind]he's dead

Twaku:and who said you get to decide huh? Juso

10:30 am

book store:

Twaku:"looking for manga to buy"

Juso:let's just leave him guys he can find us "whisper"

Shin:do you really wanna die?

Nao:"nodes as shin said that"

twaku:guys I'm done let's go eating

Juso:yes!!!

11:01 am

At a restaurant:

Juso:hmmm, the food here is so good"eating"

Everyone:[in their mind]what a glutton

Juso:hmm? Why didn't you guys order many?

Twaku:just enjoy it

Juso:no problemo!!!

11:45 am

then going to rest room:

Juso:hey nao your next where do you like to go?

Nao:hmm? Wherever you guys like too I'm ok with it too

Juso:really?!!

Nao:yes you can even take me turn just not food

Juso:aw but I'll accept it gladly

Shin:what are you guys talking about?

Juso:I aks nao where he want to go but he said I could take his turn

shin:are you sure?

Juso:yes yes it's true ask him

Nao:yes it's true

Twaku:"looks at nao"

4:50 pm

then walking to station:

Shin and juso chatting:

Twaku:hey nao do you plan to tell them and her about your situation

Nao:no I don't if they know this it will only trouble them I don't want that especially riko

Twaku:riko is so lucky to find a guy like you unlike me I'm just a average failure

6:45 pm

They arrived at nao house

Nao: I'll be going now thank you guys

Juso:see you next week nao

Shin:yeah see you!!

Nao:yeah!!!""sigh then goes in the house"I'm back

Rei:how was your day with them and how are you?

Nao:the day with them is something I'll never get to use and surprisingly nothing happen

Rei:oh really then that good,let's already before the food gets cold

Nao:ok,thank for the food

to be continued:

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9:30 am

Riko younger brother:nee-san where are you going?

Riko: what it is to you roske?

Roske:ma nee-san is being mean!!!

Riko:ok ok I'm just joking,I'm going with nao Kun we have a date now

Rose:oh I see bring me home some souvenir's

Riko:were just going to Shinjuku where will I get a suveneir?

Roske:just get anything

Riko:"going out"ok,ma I'm leaving!!!

Rika:ok!!

9:55 am

Front of a station

Riko: sorry to make you wait nao Kun my brother is so annoying

Nao:it's o-

Riko:what is it? Is there something in my face?"Starts touching her face"

Nao:no there nothing I'm just mesmerize by how beautiful you are riko-chan"smiles"

Riko:"blush"thank you

Nao:let's go

Riko:ok!!

*Both gets in the train*

Shinjuku 10:11 am

Riko:where should we go now nao?

Nao:let's watch some movies I heards there's new out

Riko:"looks suspiciously at nao"

Nao:what is it?"looks at riko"

Riko:nothing I thought you were planning on getting me watch some horror movie again

Nao:"giggles a bit"

Riko: what's so funny"looks at nao"

Nao:nothing nothing let's just go and watch one

After the movie:11:20 am

Riko:"crying"wahhhh we didn't watch horror but instead we watch a drama movie what's with you

Nao:sorry"smiles"

Riko:I'm going looks forward to the next time

Nao:"shock,smiles"ok ok

Riko:now let's eat!!!

Nao:nope!!

Riko:huh?why?

Nao:let's go shopping first,it's on me!!

Riko:really thank you nao!!!

in the girls clothes area:11:30 am

Riko:"in fitting room fitting the clothes she buys,goes out"how's this !!!

Nao:hmm it's looks good"smiles then thumbs up"

Riko: "immediately close the curtain"[in her mind]ahh I know we are going out but he too handsome and cute,well I'm gonna make him flustered!!!"goes out"how about this!!

Nao:looks good

Riko:this!!

Nao:cute

Riko:[in her mind]your going down:how about this one!!!

Nao:hmmm"cover his mouth"your so beautiful*intensely blushing*

Riko:*severely blushing*"immediately close the curtain" idiot

"then walking to the restaurant"11:50

Riko:[in her mind]I totally lost...

Nao:why do you looks so down riko

Riko:hmm"looks at him"nothing

At the restaurant:12:12

Riko:hmmm so delish"happy noises"

Nao:"just staring at her"

Riko: aren't you gonna eat?

Nao:after you finish"smiles"

Riko:your food gonna be cold then..."takes his food then feeds him"say ahhh

Nao:hmm*blushing*"leans forward opens his mouth then eats the food"thank you for the food

Riko:there now you can eat go feed yourself"give him his food"

"Them just walking through the mall"

Nao:hey riko-chan let's go there"pointing at the rides"

Riko:hmm"looks at what he's pointing at then smiles big"ahh of course let's go

"Both goes running"

Nao:riko let's ride that one"points at the roller coaster"

Riko:eh? Hehe i-"gets drag"

Nao:let's just go"running while dragging riko"

Rikk:wait let me decide first!!!!

At the roller coaster:

"Roller coaster going up"

Nao:let's go riko put your hand in the air

Riko:noo!! I'm scared!!!

Nao:just put it up"takes riko hands then put it up with his hands"here we go!!!!

Riko:"opens her eyes then smiles"

"Roller coaster goes down"

After the roller coaster

Riko:*almost pukse mid time of the ride*

Nao:are you ok riko?"looks at her"

Riko:yes"smiles then cover her mouth"

Nao:liar let's go buy an ice cream then let's just take easy rides

Riko:are you sure?

Nao:yes

"them seating at a bench"

Nao:do you feel better?

Riko:yes thank you

Nao:now let's go take that boat ride"points it"

Riko:"looks at it then smiles"ok

6:00 pm

At the trian:

Nao:[in his mind]she really fell asleep is she,so cute

"Train stops"

Riko:"woke up"hmm were here!!

Nao:yes let's get off

then leaving the station:

Riko:so just like the usual you first then me right?

Nao:no you first then me "smiles"

then walking to riko house:

Rikk:neh nao are you enjoying this summer break ?

Nao:hmm?yes of course how can I not when almost every other day I got a invitation from you and my friends to hang out

Riko:happy to know!! Oh we're here thank you nao bye bye!!"waves at him"

Nao:"smiles then waves at her" now then" calls someone"{on phone} twaku help please

Twaku:{on phone} where are you?

Nao:{on phone} around riko house your close to riko house right?

Twaku:{on phone}yes in going already

Nao:{on phone}faster"holds his chest and put his hands in his mouth"

to be continued:

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...?:strap the patient!!!

....?:doc the patient is gaining his consciousness

doc: continue giving him the air

Rei:nao hold on don't close your eyes again!!

Gouh:nao hol-

Nao:"closing his eyes:

Gouh:nao!!!

Nao:"eyes close"

3 hour's later:

Nao:"eyes opens"where am I?

Nurse:"goes to the phone"{on phone}doc the patient regain his consciousness!!

Doc:{on phone}ok I'm coming!!

Few mins later:

Doc: your son's condition has gotten worse he cannot come out of this hospital for at least ten months his condition is so severe that 70% of his body is already at death hands

Rei and Gouh:"shock"

Rei:"falls down"no NO!!!!"cries"

Gouh:"goes to comfort rei"does that mean he might be at this room for the rest of his life?

Doc:I'll be honest with his situation right nowis so bad that we might just waiting for his death

Gough:"tears starts running down his face"

Rei:"cry more intense once hearing what the doc said"

Nao:ma, pa I'm ok look

Rei and Gough:"looks at nao"

Nao:"flexing his arm muscle while smiling"

Rei:"goes to nao while crying"

Gough:"goes to nao"you idiot you don't have to do that"smiles while crying"

Nao:"smiles"

10:27 pm

Gough:nao were just going get clothes and food we'll be back ok

Nao:ok"gets his phone then dial a number"{on phone}yo twaku!!

Twaku:{on phone}why are you calling me? You should be resting

Nao:{on phone}what can't I call my savior

Twaku:{on phone}what's your plan now still gonna hide it from her and the gang?

Nao:{on phone}I honestly don't know the doctor said that my situation is so worse that it's like I'm just waiting to die...

Twaku:{on phone}....... I see

Nao:{on phone} common twaku don't hold it anymore{on phone}twaku crying"smiles

Twaku:{on phone}I bet your smiling once you hear me crying

Nao:{on phone}you really know me well

Twaku:{on phone}hey tell the doc that hes wrong that your not just waiting to die tell him that you won't fuvking die ok"crying"

Nao:{on phone}ok,ok no need to curse ik hanging up twaku

Twaku:{on phone}no let's talk so you won't fall asleep

Nao:{on phone}HAHAH you sound like my girlfriend lol

Twaku:{on phone}YOUR GIRL SHOULD BE THE ONE DOING THis NOT ME MORON!!!

Nao:{on phone}gehehehe

5 hours later:

Nao: "coughing blood" {on phone}twaku are you there? *silence* hmmm he must have fell asleep "continue coughing blood" it's my time huh?I got to write down what twaku what's to say to the doc "gets a paper then writes what's twaku said" there that should be good "lay down in his bed" thank you mom thank you dad thank you twaku thank you juso thank you shin and I'm sorry riko "tear comes out of his eyes as he close it"

Time of death:3:37 pm......

To be continued :(