The Deserted Woman
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One evening at the Hilltop Bar, Kate was invited by her sister Lina for a drink.
Lina
Hey! Look who finally decided to show up.
Kate
Uhh. Lina, how many drinks have you had? You reek of alcohol.
Lina
Oh. Who cares about that? Have a drink sizzz.
Lina
Don't sweat the small stuffs.
Lina
Tonight's the night you'll finally taste the heaven that is alcohol.
Lina looked around and waived at the waiter.
Waiter
How may I help you Maam?
Kate fidgeted as her ears feel like her eardrum's are about to pop with how loud the music is.
Kate
You know how I hate crowded places.
Lina
Yeah. Blah. Blah. Blah. Didn't you say you wanted to bond with me?
Kate
Well yeah. But I want to bond with you sober.
Lina
Honey, have you ever seen me sober?
Lina
Hmmm. I'm starting to think you don't really want to.
Kate
N-no. I just... thought we would start slowly.
Lina
Do you want to bond or not?
Lina
Look over there. Isn't that guy hot?
Lina
There. *points randomly at some guys*
Lina drops a pill at Kate's martini.
Kate
I don't see anyone there.
Lina
Oops! Must be the alcohol talking then.
Kate hesitantly took the drink.
Kate blindly drank the martini which made Lina smirk in satisfaction.
After a while, the effect of the drug's finally kicking in.
Kate
Lina... I think I!m getting dizzy.
Lina
Oh. Dear. Are you? *feigning innocence*
Kate
C-can we please g-go h-home now?
Lina
Of course. Wait. Let me pay the bill first. Can you stand?
Lina
Okay. Wait for me by the door.
Kate walked cautiously but it didn't prevent her from bumping into corners of the tables and chairs.
When she finally reached the doorway, she started feeling hot and she felt a jolt of excitement from her lower stomach.
Lina
I'm done paying Katie. Let's go?
Lina
Oh. That's just the alcohol dear.
Lina assisted her on their way out but instead of pressing the elevator going down, she pressed the button going up.
By the time they're walking at the hallway, Kate's already messed up.
Lina swiped the hotel card to open the room she booked.
She dragged Kate and dropped her on the bed.
Lina
Such a fool you are Kate.
Lina
I will never accept you as my sister.
Lina got up and looked down on Kate one last time.
Lina
This is my revenge for killing my Mom.
Kate
Lina... I... feel... so... hot...
Kate said as she started to sweat even though the Air Conditioner is on.
She started to unbutton her shirt and simultaneously remove her skirt.
Kate
What is going on with me?
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Wrong Room
Mr. Wang
Hey Man! Long time no see.
Tann
Yeah. Finally caught a break.
Mr. Wang
I heard you recently closed a big deal overseas.
Mr. Wang
Man, the Shings ought to get richer by the second.
Tann
Save the trouble of kissing up to me. Drinks on me tonight.
Mr. Wang
That’s what I’m talking about.
Their other friends cheered as they dance with the girls they picked up earlier.
Mr. Wang
So what’s new with you man?
Mr. Wang
Don’t tell me you still haven’t given your old man the peace of mind he’s been asking?
Tann
He’s been pretty persistent about getting me a wife.
Mr. Wang
So why not take a wife?
Mr. Wang
Don’t tell me you’re still hung up on your ex?
Tann
You know she was hardly on my radar.
Mr. Wang
Don’t tell me you dig boys.
Mr. Wang
*chuckles* Then why not?
Tann
Girls fall for me because of my looks and riches.
Mr. Wang
Wow. You don’t say. *in a sarcastic tone*
Mr. Wang
You’re not wrong. In fact, most girls express their desire for you because of those exact traits.
Tann
That’s why I refuse to settle down.
Mr. Wang
C’mon man, your old man’s hair is going thinner by the day. At least give him a grandchild to play with.
Tann
Then set me up with a v*rgin.
Mr. Wang
Wow. You’re asking for the moon Man.
Mr. Wang
Do you think there’s anyone in here that’ll fit in that specific category?
Tann
Now you understand my dilemma.
Mr. Wang
Tell you what, I have this girl waiting on my room upstairs.
Mr. Wang
Hear me out first.
Tann
I will hear you out but the answer’s still no.
Mr. Wang
My butler said she’s a newbie. So who knows. Maybe she’s a v*rgin.
Tann
The fact that she agreed to such arrangements makes her a girl with loose morals.
Mr. Wang
C’mon man. Just this once.
Tann
*hesitant but considers it*
Mr. Wang
If she comes out wild and disgusting, you’re free to leave her there.
Tann
Fine. But you’re investing on my new project.
The two of them cheers to their drink and Mr. Wang gave Tann the key card to his room.
Tann was a little tipsy as he searched for the room.
His eyesight was a little blurry.
As soon as he reached the room, it immediately opened without him tapping the key card.
Tann
She even left the room unlocked.
Tann
I’m so gonna be disappointed.
Tann walked inside and found a blue-haired girl semi-stripped because her cardigan’s stuck on her hair as she’s lying on the floor.
Tann observed the girl before him.
Long sleeved crew neck blouse.
Tann
She looks conservative so that’s a plus.
Kate
C-can y-you please help me?
Tann
Depends on the favor.
Tann sits down on the chair near the bed.
Kate
C-can y-you please h-help me get to the hospital?
Tann
Why? Weren’t you waiting for a man to screw around with?
Kate
I’m so dizzy and my body feels weird.
Kate
I think my sister left me cause she’s not back and I’ve been in here for a long time now.
Tann
I think I’m in the wrong room.
Kate
Please don’t leave me.
Kate
Could I please trouble you to unbutton my cardigan? I think my hair got stuck.
Tann
What would I gain if I helped you?
Kate
I had one glass of martini.
Tann
No one gets drunk with just that.
Kate
I-It’s cause its my first time drinking.
Tann
And you just tell strangers that. What if I take advantage of you?
Kate
If you really had the intention, you would have done so as soon as you entered this room.
Kate
Please? My hand’s getting numb Sir.
Tann went to her side and helped her removed the buttons out of her hair.
Her flushed face was revealed and her scent made Tann a little intoxicated.
Kate couldn’t clearly see Tann.
Tann
Damn, you are a looker. *mumbles to himself*
Kate
T-thank y-you Sir for helping me out.
Tann
Oh you don’t have to thank me. You need to pay for it.
Kate
Is thank you not enough?
Tann
I think you were drugged Miss.
Kate
M-my sister brought me here so that we c-can bond.
Kate
Actually she’s my step-sister. We don’t get along much.
Tann
I don’t really care about that.
Kate
Yes! My body feels weird!
Kate
My stomach’s got this airy thing going on.
As Kate blabbered, Tann took out his phone and called his butler.
Tann
Butler Lee, come at the Hilltop hotel room 1206. Bring my personal doctor with you. I need you to check someone for me.
I'd rather not.
Kate woke up with a throbbing pain on her head.
Kate
Oh Dear. My head hurts.
Tann
There's water and pain killers by the side table.
Kate immediately consumed it.
Tann
Now. On to the matter at hand.
Tann
You asked for my help last night.
Kate
Oh. Oh my God. I'm sorry for troubling you Sir.
Tann
And I intend to make you pay for it.
Kate
Wait. Let me get this straight.
Kate
You want me to be your girlfriend because you helped me last night?
Kate
We barely even know each other.
Kate
Then you understand how ridiculous your idea is.
Kate
Okay. I'd rather not.
Tann
You can but that doesn't mean you can get rid of me that easily.
Kate got out of bed and grabbed her cardigan on.
She immediately went for the door and stormed out of the room.
Tann
I'll see you after nine months then.
Tann let out a smirk and closed the file he's reading about Kate.
Kate
Asking some random woman to be his girlfriend.
Kate
Damn! My head doesn't hurt anymore but my body aches.
Kate
Oh no. D-d-did.... Did He and I? *covers mouth* No. No.
Kate hales a taxi and immediately went home.
As soon as she got home, she found Lina merrily eating.
Kate
Lina! How dare you leave me like that.
Lina
Ugh. What are you yapping about so early in the morning?
Kate
You left me at the Hilltop hotel after we drank!
Lina
Oh you don't remember asking to just stay?
Lina
C'mon. Do you have any recollection of what transpired last night?
Lina
Then you don't have the right to badger me. You said you wanted to stay, so I left you there.
Kate
That's nonsense. Why would I want to stay in a place where men can freely go inside the rooms!
Kate
No! I'm just glad that man isn't a pervy man or else I would have been r@ped.
Kate
You are the worst! All I wanted was for us to get along but you tricked me!
Kate walked out on Lina and headed for her room.
It pissed Lina to think that her plans didn't go well.
She took her phone out and dialled a number.
Lina
📱What the hell?! I gave one simple job-
Accomplice 1
📱Screw you! You said she's gonna be alone but a man already was in her room when I got there!
Lina
📱 What?! No! I left her alone and just in time for the drug to take effect!
Accomplice 1
📱I don't know what happened but you didn't tell me Tann Shing was gonna be there!
Lina
📱 Tann Shing?! You mean the Tann Shing?!
Accomplice 1
📱Who else would it be stupid?! I had a rough night because of you! Make sure to transfer my payment tonight or my lips won't be sealed!
The line was cut and Lina was at a state of panic as she walked back and forth.
Lina
That b*tch actually nailed one the richest man in the world. Sh*t.
Lina
Its supposed to be me.
Just then, an idea came to Lina's mind.
Lina
I still have a say on this.
Lina deviously glanced towards Kate's room as she brew her plans inside her brain.
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