Uncontrolled
character introduction
Name - Rishi Kang
Age - 18 years old
gentle - male Omega
height - 5'2
He is more beautiful than a angel you can say that, but he thinks he is ugly and weak, but he have supernatural powers that can make him King of the world, but he hides it, he thinks himself as a curse, because his own grandmother doesn't support him, staying with his grandmother,
Name - jay yang
age - 14-year-old
gender - male Alpha
height - 5'1 for now because he is still a growing kid (😏)
he is show everyone that he is a obedient kid but inside him, he is mature by mind because he have supernatural powers well he is richer than Ambani🗿,
love his parents he likes to play well he is normal like other kids, but at the same time mature like grandpa, but he got obsessed over beautiful things and her mother give him whatever he wants,
nia keng (grandmother of MC)
name- nia Keng
age - 62 year old
she hate her grandson so much but still let him stay with her because of her son
dev Yang(father of ML)
name - Dev yang
age - 38 year old
his father of Jay,
love his wife and son, he have supernatural powers
Mira Yang(mother of ML)
name - Mira Yang
age - 36 year old
mother of Jay, he loves her son so much give whatever her son want she have supernatural powers
Seng Yang(sister of ML)
name - seng Yang
Age 16 years old
gender - male Alpha
Love her family
Have supernatural powers
Hey guys it's my new story so let's see what is it and it's based on my dream yes so I through to write it, so please support me a like and comment bye bye see you soon, ❤️
Jack Yang (brother of ML)
name - jack Yang
Age - 17 year old
Gender male Omega
Love his family so much
He have supernatural powers
i just saw an angel
So let's start the new story
It was a fresh morning, but there was a boy who was with his grandmother,
Rishi Kang(MC)
grandma are we staying here for now on ?😣
nia keng (grandmother of MC)
don't ask too much question,
Rishi Kang(MC)
but I just want to say why did we shift in here? 😣
nia keng (grandmother of MC)
because the people from where we used to stay was so powerful, and I don't want to stay there with a feminine powerless hag, 😡
Rishi Kang(MC)
I'm sorry grandma 😟
nia keng (grandmother of MC)
TSK, now I can't carry this all boxes inside, go and carry them inside I am going to take my medicine,
Rishi Kang(MC)
yes grandma you should, 😟
nia keng (grandmother of MC)
don't teach me what to do,
Rishi's grandmother went inside
Rishi Kang(MC)
(Show the boxes)
Rishi Kang(MC)
they all look heavy but no worries I can carry them, 🙂
rishi's eyes went on a mansion that was just 1 km away from the apartment yes the mansion was so big, and it's evening time, so the mansion's light was glowing
Rishi Kang(MC)
Oh my god that mansion is so beautiful it's so big it's bigger than Ambani's house, 😲😲
Rishi Kang(MC)
But this kind of thing aren't in my life, 🙂
Rishi Kang(MC)
Ohh I should do it hurry it's going to be night soon or grandmother will scold me again, 🙂
landlord
oh I forget to tell you that I am your land lord it's nice meeting you,(eyeing Rishi from up to down)
Rishi Kang(MC)
Hi I am Rishi, 🙂
landlord
You are beautiful, 😏
Rishi Kang(MC)
T..t..thanks , 😣
landlord
If you don't mind can you give me your n-
landlord
Oops sorry I have to go I will meet you next time, 😏
Rishi Kang(MC)
Thare is a park in there I should finish this hurriedly, so I can go there, ☺️
Rishi Start to carry these boxes inside even if it was heavy,
On the other side in the park
There were a lot of children playing cricket in their well it was only 5pm so why not,
jay Yang(ML)
What do you mean you can clearly see the that I am the one who win, 😡
sam
no you are lying you cheated, 😡
jay Yang(ML)
shut up, or I will-
sam
you will what, huh? You will use your power that's right a BAS***d like you can't fight with power, 😡😡
jay Yang(ML)
Ohhh really than let me show you, 😡
Jay was about to punch SAM, but Ming hold him
Ming
jay stop what are you doing? 😟
jay Yang(ML)
He is the one who triggers me, I said Na I win then why is he arguing, 😡
Ming
Okay you win now calm down okay, he is just kidding, 😟
kim Cheng
Shut up SAM, we saw it by our own eyes jay is winner so Shut up,
driver
Young master it's getting late, so we should go home,
jay Yang(ML)
I will see you next time, 😡
Jay sit inside his car and drive start to drive but when he comes out of the park then he show someone
jay Yang(ML)
driver uncle Stop the car,
driver
(Stopped) what happened young master?
jay Yang(ML)
I just saw an angel, 😍😍
driver
what do you mean young master?
Jay come out from the car and start to walk towards the angel
driver
master where are you going?
jay Yang(ML)
Nowhere uncle you wait here I will be back in a minute,😃
jay Yang(ML)
don't worry uncle you know I have supernatural powers, so I can save myself don't worry, 😃
driver
okay young master, (sigh)
Well yeah jay was too powerful no one can compete him and the whole city know about it him
Bye bye guys please tell me how is the story so I will try to write more, 😁😁❤️❤️
beautiful angel
Reminder 🛑
This story is based on my dream so sorry it doesn't make sense, 😐
Jay come out from the car and start to walk toward the angel
jay Yang(ML)
He is so beautiful 😍
jay Yang(ML)
He is an angel, 😍
jay Yang(ML)
I think I love him, 😍
jay Yang(ML)
I want that angel, 😍
jay Yang(ML)
But why my angel is carrying these boxes, no angel should not carry heavy things I should help him, 😚😚
Rishi Kang(MC)
This Box seems too much heavy, 😣
Rishi Kang(MC)
Anyway it's the last box I should do it hurriedly, 😣
Rishi carry the Box, but he felt it was too heavy, so he was about to fall, and he close his eyes by accepting the fact that it's going hurt very bad maybe his head start to bleed, but he opened his eyes when he didn't fall but felt two hand on his waist that save him,
Rishi Kang(MC)
Ohh my god, 😟
jay Yang(ML)
Hey angel are you okay? You should be careful an angel should not get hurt, 😟😟
well jay use his teleportation power and hold Rishi
Rishi Kang(MC)
(adjust himself)
Rishi Kang(MC)
H…hey k…kid, where did you come from and hold me as I remember you were not here before? 😟
jay Yang(ML)
[I shouldn't tell him that I have power because it might scared him, because I think he didn't have power or else he wasn't picking these box instead he would have used his power, so he will felt insulted and think I am insulting him, because mom told me no to show off]
jay Yang(ML)
Well I was here for long time you didn't see me, 😅
jay Yang(ML)
well my name is Jay what's your name beautiful angel?😁😁
Rishi Kang(MC)
beautiful angel? 😕
jay Yang(ML)
yes, you are a beautiful angel, 😍
Rishi Kang(MC)
okay please it's not April fool, so don't joke around, 🙂
jay Yang(ML)
but I am not joking you really are beautiful so much beautiful that I want to marry you angel, 😍
Rishi Kang(MC)
oh my kid you are so funny please don't joke it's hurting me, and I am not beautiful, 🙂
jay Yang(ML)
no you are beautiful you are beautiful angel accept, or I will cry, 😢
Rishi Kang(MC)
hey, hey okay okay my name is Rishi, 😟
jay Yang(ML)
Rishi, your name is so beautiful just like you beautiful angel, 😁
Rishi Kang(MC)
(sigh)[why this kid is calling me beautiful when I am not, 🙂🙂]
driver
Young master it's getting late you should go home mistress is calling you,
jay Yang(ML)
beautiful angel what's your number tell me 😁
jay Yang(ML)
I am saying your number, 😁
jay Yang(ML)
Well I know beautiful angel that I want to stay with you, but my mother must be waiting for me at home I have to go, but I promise I will call you please give me your number, 😚😚😚
jay Yang(ML)
beautiful angel pretty please, 🥺
driver
Hey who are you omega, please if you don't mind give him your number, or he will stay here and will not go home, 😥😥
Rishi Kang(MC)
But how can I give my number to a kid who doesn't have phone?😥
jay Yang(ML)
Well I have one, 😁
driver
please it's getting late Omega please give him your number because he is now obsessed with you, 😥
Rishi Kang(MC)
well you don't need to have my number you can meet me here again kid, 🙂
Rishi Kang(MC)
Sorry kid, but it's the last option I can't give my number to anyone, 🙂
jay Yang(ML)
But I am not anyone, 😔
jay Yang(ML)
Promise me you will meet me tomorrow here, 🥺
Rishi Kang(MC)
Okay now go, 🙂
jay Yang(ML)
You promised, 🥺
Rishi Kang(MC)
Yeah yeah, 🙂
jay Yang(ML)
Bye bye my beautiful angel I will meet you here tomorrow morning, 😁
Rishi Kang(MC)
In morning?
Jay left while saying bye bye to Rishi, and Rishi went inside to but his grandmother was there angrily sitting on couch
nia keng (grandmother of MC)
What took you so much time?
Rishi Kang(MC)
Grandma that I am sorry, 😢
nia keng (grandmother of MC)
just f****** go to your room, 😠
Rishi went inside his room while crying
Bye bye guys see you soon, 😁❤️
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