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WENT BACK IN TIME, AND CORRECTED ALL MY MISTAKES

INTRODUCTION

Delian Yun: name

17 :age

Skills: cooki byng, working, reading

Hubby: cooking , working, reading playing ga seemes, surfing, sleeping.

Lead: female lead

Birthday: August 14

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Xiao Xian: name

25: age

Skills: working day and night with no sleep

Hubby: working , skydiving, reading comics and manga.

Lead: male lead

Birthday: December 12 (but keeps it unknown and fakes his birthday date to January 19

Elizabeth Kira: name

17: age

Skills: shouting, cooking, eating, singing and playing

Hubby: shouting, cooking, eating, singing, playing, dancing and watching TV

Birthday: April 9

(Friend of Delian Yun)

Marie xiao: name

16 to 17: age

Skills: insulting

Hubby: making trouble, noise making, watching TV

Birthday: September 1

(Xiao Xian sister)

Name : Laila Yun (Ali)

Age:40

Skills: cooking

Hubby: shouting, cooking ,eating ,singing and humming

Birthday: October 1

(Delian Yun mother)

Melissa Yun: name

16: age

Skills: revenging

Hubby: getting boyfriends and dumping them

Birthday: November 3

(Delian Yun sister)

Melvyn : name

18: age

Skills: football

Hubby: football

Birthday: June 25

(Delian Yun boyfriend)

Kevin Yun: name

Age:20

Skills: working

Hubby: working and avoiding close distances

Birthday: July 21

(Delian Yun brother)

Name: Michael Yun

Age:59

Skills: golf

Hubby: ordering people around

Birthday:march 22

(Delian Yun father)

Melanie Xian : name

Age: 40

Hubby: modelling

Skills : cooking

Birthday:may 19

(Xiao Xian mother)

Gabriel Xian:name

Age: 58

Skills: business , scammng

Hobby: scamming, business

Birthday: may 29

(Xiao Xian father)

Maria san: name

29: age

Skills: cooking

Hubby: cooking, business

Birthday: march 30

(Delian Yun aunt)

Belinda san : name

Age:17

Skills: cooking, singing

Hubby: cooking, coming late to school

Birthday: may 19

(Delian Yun cousin)

Nelson san: name

Age: 33

Skills: hacking softwares and computers

Hubby : hacker

Birthday: march 31

(Delian Yun uncle)

Grandma airia : name

Age: 75

Skills: cooking, nitting

Hubby: playing with her grand children

Birthday: January 31

(Delian Yun grand mother )

Grandpa aira : name

Age:89

Skills: writing songs and books

Hubby: writing books and songs

Birthday: November 19

(Delian Yun grand father)

(Xiao Xian grand parents are dead 🥺😭)

Natasha: name

Age:24

Skills: modelling

Hubby: singing

Birthday: may 22

(Delian Yun model)

Natalie : name

Age: 16

Skills: fashion

Hubby: fashion

Birthday: July 7

(Xiao Xian cousin)

Natalia: name

19: age

Skills: painting

Hubby: painting

(Prefect of Delian Yun school)

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The story begins like this

Hi I'm ace diamond this is my fourth novel and ❤️❤️ I hope you will like it and find it interesting please don't hesitate or forget to like it, share, comment,and follow I love you all 😍🥰❤️😘❤️

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One bright morning was born a girl name Delian Yun she was born in the Yun family she had a bother and a sister

Let us go to when she started middle school at the age of 11

THE FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL 🏫

School bully:hey Delian Yun give us your snacks or else we will beat you up

Delian Yun: get away from me before I lose my temper

(They come closer and she gives one a slap and the other a kick the third one jumps on her but a boy name dashiell uses his bike to hit him he drags her at the back of the bike and drive at full speed 😍)

Delian Yun: why did you save me

Dashiell : let us not go there what is your name cutie

Delian Yun: my name is Yun Yun what of yours

Dashiell: anyway I am not in your school so I will head to my school

Delian Yun: wait!

(He leaves without looking back)

THE NEXT DAY

(Delian Yun was jogging on the school field when the bully comes and start beating her then the third one wanted to give her a slap Melvyn uses his bike to chase them she blackout immediately he rushes her to the hospital then she wakes up after few hours of sleeping she comes to pay the debt and they say''madam you have payed your debt "

Delian Yun:no I just entered the hospital

Nurse: oh I forgot a man perhaps a guy payed your bil

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Delian Yun: who could it be 🤔🤔

Nurse: he said you know him and he have saved your life second time he is saving your life

Delian Yun:hmm ! don't tell me it's that boy from yesterday (says it in her mind) well thanks nurse I will head home now before it's late 😄

(It's Saturday morning and Delian Yun is still sleeping Dashiell enters her room and put her alarm on Friday morning)

Alarm:(wake up little girl it's Friday)

(Time for school you better hurry or you'll be late for school la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la)

(Yun wakes up)

Yun: it's friday oh no need to hurry (she picks her bag and starts running she reaches the gate and sees Dashiell

waiting for her)

Dashiell: want a ride

Yun: why not

(He passes her school and takes her to a garden full of flowers then kneels will you be my girl friend)

Yun:you took me here just to tell me that 😤

Dashiell: I thought you would like it

Yun: you also changed my alarm too Friday right just too tell me this right I will say yes only to repay you for saving my life twice

(She walks angrily he drags her hand and says my name is Dashiell then leaves her she falls on the ground "THUMP"

Yun : how dare you!! Just you wait!! I will catch you!!

Dashiell: (chuckles)

Yun what's with him

Dashiell: wanna go have fun and some snacks

Yun: why not!! I'm really hungry, I've not even had my break fast and it's already 1:19 we better hurry

(Yun belly makes this sound " grrrrrrrrrrr")

Dashiell: that's a sign to say you're really hungry

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CORRECTED ALL MY MISTKES , AND MOVED ON

FIVE YEARS LATER

(Yun is sixteen and is in high school before five years passed Yun became dashiell girlfriend and they loved each other now in high school Yun younger sister meets her there and steals dashiell from her before that Yun went to an hotel 🏨 where she had sex, and her wicked sister video her and sent it on school 🏫 platform and then she lost her reputation and dashiell was forced to break up with her she started living with her friend then she applied for XAIO XIAN JEWELRY MAKING COMPANY after she was accepted her sister heard about it and payed her friend to burn the letter of acceptance and to send her out of the house 🏠 she became angry and commit suicide)

(Then she goes back in time)

Yun: I thought I was dead

(She checks the date and see that this was the day she had sex with Melvyn and lost her reputation)

IN THE HOTEL 🏨🏨

Dashiell: good morning madam where is our room

Worker: ohhhh room 1357924a sir

Yun: thanks mam...

Worker:oh here is your key

Dashiell: thanks for what you have done

Yun: Dashiell can I play around

Dashiell: why not,go but do not injure yourself

Yun: okay 😄😄 thank you bye 👋

(She puts a poison in her younger sister drink then give her to fat man wearing a pant on his head)

Melissa Yun: I feel dizzy (she blackouts immediately)

Delian Yun:(chuckles)

(Melissa Yun wakes up naked and sees a fat man beside her , her boyfriend opens the door)

Devlin: you are such a disgrace Melissa

Melissa: how did you know i was here

Delvin: it's all over the school platform and internet you have lost your reputation

Melissa: what!! Who has done this to me did they no i am from the yun family

Delvin :you better dress up now

Melissa: okay thank you bye 👋

Delvin: bye 👋 have fun

(After delian yun leave the hotel 🏨 she comes to her house and see dashiell kissing Melissa and she approached them by saying"Melissa what is your problem you lost reputation then your boyfriend that encouraged you, you dumped him and now dashiell i have been waiting for this day i am done with you let's break up ) (she hisses and walk away, dashiell chases her, she goes to her house and lock the gate, she applies for that XIAO XIAN JEWELRY MAKING COMPANY the following day she was accepted and started working in XIAO XIAN JEWELRY MAKING COMPANY)

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HER INTERVIEW

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Xiao Xian: good morning ma'am

Delian yun: good morning sir

Xiao Xian: your intro please

Delian yun: my name is delian yun I am 17 yrs old

Xiao Xian: you have a good name

( Kevin interrupts)

Kevin: seventeen years old girls are not allowed to walk until they are eighteen in this country except you go to a country that from seventeen years old you can drive and work you can go to his branch office there

Xiao Xian: shut up already Kevin 😡.

Xiao Xian:my name is Xaio Xain I am twenty five years old I am the owner of the company and the other branches in other countries so you're welcome you are going to be my work

Delian yun: what do you mean 😅I don't understand 😆

Xaio Xain: that means my wife or perhaps my assistant

Delian yun: (in her mind) what!! his wife

Kevin: the interview is over you're to start working here from Tomorrow

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