Waiting Death
The Beginning
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welcome dear readers ..
Well first of all thank u for choosing this story.,i will try my best to entertain you.
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Note: this story is completely fictional.
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And read with caution as it uses strong language ,mentions of uncomfortable phrases maybe present like murder,blood.... whatever a normal murder mystery, horror book has
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n lastly have a good read..😁
Somewhere in the woods ,in the pitch dark
,A pale girl in her twenties ,bruised heavily is running.. panting for air
unknown girl
(sweating)Please some some on..eee help meee..
unknown girl
mum,dad .... please i ..i can't... aah
Blood oozing out her nose n mouth
unknown girl
(stand under a tree)
(creepy silence)
....
(breath heavily)...
(trying to call someone but phone falls in the bushes)
(search aggressively)..
...
(shadow looms over..)
(slowly look up)
No no please....aahh leave mee...(screech)
"The woods get painted red again"
Till now what seemed to be grave silence in woods is followed by the cries of wolves
At someone's not so organised apartment
Ruth Smith
(snoring ) ⏰ (ring)⏰
(falls from the bed) ..ouch , what the..( looks at clock ) time (eyes dilate)
....shit I am so late☠️
Ruth Smith
(🚿 having bath)
Ruth Smith
that was the 3rd nightmare in a row.i should stop watching late night horror shows
Ruth Smith
(half bread in mouth)...
(making coffee).. atleast I'll need this to stay alive today..
On tv: another body from the woods,the girl faced a gruesome death just like others
.this is the 10th murder we are observing in our locality..that's alerting
..are our people safe or do we have a serial killer on loose or is the woods really haunted...
The government has no answer...
Ruth Smith
(turn off tv)..(sigh)
Head officer
so miss Smith what excuse u have up ur sleeve this time, walking a poor old grandma or running onto a tricycle
Ruth Smith
it was bicycle sir
Ruth Smith
Sorry sir .. but i
Head officer
(ignore)
everyone in my cabin NOW
Zeke Mandela
u look worn out (serious)... it's not actually concerning because u always look like u came from the zoo
Head officer
i hope everyone is aware what is happening
Head officer
See.., team the situation is already out of control, we can't let this person gain upper hand again
Head officer
The state is already putting pressure on us
Zeke Mandela
sir maybe the woods are really haunted
Head officer
Miss Smith you will be heading the case ..
Everyone dismissed
Ruth Smith
(internally happily screaming) yes sir🥺
Head officer
Wait miss Smith
Head officer
I really mean it...this is very important case, and i trust you.. don't dare to disappoint me
Ruth Smith
humph...my first leading case..God bless me🫠
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please do like n comment and share ur views
Ruth Smith
If u didn't meddle i would have actually talked something
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Where did u come from go..💢😅
meeting
Mina Iyengar
Ruths,wow i am so happy for you
Ruth Smith
thanks girl, but now I am afraid
(hug her)
Zaria Mandela
Girl u dreamed for it
Ashley Brown
This is ur first case in from the time u joined here...that's 5 years
Zeke Mandela
we can do this 😉...so captain where do we start
Head officer
👀
(cough) Miss Iyengar and Miss Brown ...i hope you are not ignoring the previous cases ...they all must be solved asap
Mina Iyengar
chief we are already close to the culprit...one single mistake and we will know who infiltrated our government's database illegally
Ruth Smith
and that was so tiring
Ashley Brown
Yeah ..excuse me i did the tech part ...u were sleeping
Ruth Smith
Yeah because it was boring ...
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😁...Zar u up today
Zaria Mandela
It's my day off .. yesterday we were at this drug centre..i alone had to fight with all those goons .
Zeke Mandela
And u didn't fail sis.
Zaria Mandela
bcoz I was not gawking at girls all the time
Zaria Mandela
And stop calling me that we are colleagues here not siblings
Zeke Mandela
we should appreciate beauty sister
Zaria Mandela
She fractured my hand 💢
Ruth Smith
Ok i get it geez
Mina Iyengar
So what is the plan
Ruth Smith
Not having twins
Mina Iyengar
What...😑i am talking about the case 🤦(these people)
Ruth Smith
Ok (serious tone )Ash n Mina you will go to the crime scene ..me n Zek will go to the hospital to take postpartum results..
Zeke Mandela
on it captain
Ruth Smith
CBI reporting...where we can meet doc Johnny
Zeke Mandela
She means doctor Johnson 🥲
receptionist
I am not paid enough 😮💨...(mutter under breath)
Ruth Smith
😶🌫️🫣 yeah him only...why u didn't tell me earlier
..(hit Zeke shoulder)
Ashley Brown
That's a lot of blood it feels like it hasn't dried only
Ashley Brown
I can seriously imagine the girl lying in this pool of blood
Mina Iyengar
same as the others...the killer is compassionless..
Ashley Brown
👀..does that word exist
receptionist
U might have to wait... he's busy right now
Zeke Mandela
we don't have any other choice
After what it feels like eternity
receptionist
Yes sir ok sir ..i will send them now ( on call)
receptionist
(looks at them)
Ruth Smith
thank god ....(heads to stairs)
receptionist
His cabin is in opposite direction..on the first floor third ward..🙂
Ruth Smith
...(halt n turn...)..😅...i was just checking the stairs strength..
🙂...👀
Ruth Smith
excuse me doctor ..(knock)
Zeke Mandela
hello sir we are..
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Please like n comment n subscribe..ur support is much needed ...♥️
Ruth Smith
Why u always have to meddle in between
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we will be back guys🥲
Introduction
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Let's start with our characters intro
Gabriel Johnson
we can do that
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Yeah I mean yes .. please go on
(quite a complex beings)
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So my name..
Ruth Smith
Hello guys..(flashing the most charming smile)
Ruth Smith
Name: Ruth Smith
Job : Detective
Age: 27
American.
Likes: animals, friends, watching horror shows,her job n loves her father
Dislikes: the murderer,food being snatched, waking up early , getting scolded for watching cartoons...
Nature: lovable ,chaotic , clumsy, relaxed even when need not be,panic easily , and afraid of dark,ghosts anything related to it, sometimes gullible 🙃
Dream: to become one of the best detective
Gabriel Johnson
Name : Gabriel Johnson
Age: 29
Asian American
Job : Doctor
Likes : peace n perfect works, working, spending time with NGOs helping children, animals, even old people
Dislikes: chaos , interrupting his talk,unprofessionalism.
Nature: caring, loving,a perfect boy for a perfect family..collected
Dream: to have a happy family
Mina Iyengar
Name : Mina Iyengar
Age: 28
Job : Detective
Indian
Likes : solving mysteries , outing, staying fashionable, vacation,her friends
Dislikes: cutting off sleep, being clueless, working late, feelings not under control
Nature: checking on everyone, conscious, organised,a family girl,no messing around n pure God believer
Dream: make her family especially her father proud
Ashley Brown
Name: Ashley Brown
Age : 28
Job : tech expert
Likes: tech work, being secretive, always one step ahead, friends
Dislikes: her parents, doubting her skills, distracted
Nature: gentle, smiling,helpful, workaholic but sometimes would love an outing with her team
Dream: help humanity with her expertise
Zeke Mandela
Name: Zeke Mandela
Age : 27
Job : Detective
African (Somalia)
Likes: attention, girls, adventure, sleeping, eating, dancing literally everything , annoying sister
Dislikes: people being mean for no reason, crying kids, tattoos, using someone,
Nature: relaxed,fun seeking, solving crimes with his crime partner best friend Ruth
Dream: go on world trip
Zaria Mandela
Name: Zaria Mandela
Age : 27
African Somalia
Job : undercover detective
Likes : having fun, partying,late night works, holding someone at gun point, having a blast fight,, and going out n enjoying small moments with her group, feeling belonged n not alone loves her brother but not show
Dislikes: something not going according to plan, restart everything,laziness
Nature: energetic,angrybird,n sometimes extremely dumb
Dream:to have her own home
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Whew that was long
Ruth Smith
I think we can end it now
Ruth Smith
Let's meet in next episode dear people....lots of love 💕
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My name is author and i like u reading this story and dislike u not liking n commenting
Ruth Smith
They don't wanna know..well we are here don't worry we will listen to u
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(why is she like this)😭
Ruth Smith
N quite stubborn she is
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No wait...hehe
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Some notes...
Words in bracket (ok)...are thinking in mind
👀means looking...
📱 talking on call
💢 angry
😤 funny angry..(don't ask me what's that)..
...n i guess u know everything...
The pictures used don't belong to me.... but the story is definitely the outcome of my last 2 brain cells in every serious situation...
So do forgive this poor teeny whiny... author for any mistakes...
N love u all .. thanks a lot for thinking to give this story a read..
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N most importantly...this above three dots....they mean that scene is shifting..or some time passed...
So if u encounter... something like this
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boom
it means scene shifted or its some time later
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