My Bestie
Surprise Party
Hi everyone..
So this is my first story. So let me know how is it and you can suggest me how I can improve it..
So let's introduce our characters
Cassie/Fl
Name:Cassie Smith
Age: 17
Character : sweet, innocent, introvert, smart and naive
Loves: Family, besties and the people who lovea me.
Hate: Socializing, Crowd,....
Jessica/Fl's bestie
Name: Jessica Brown
Age: 17
Character : Carefree, extrovert,
Loves: same as Cassie
Note:
*....* :action
"...": thinking
Let's start our story now😊😊
Cassie/Fl
(looks at the door)
Cassie/Fl
"Where is she? Why hasn't she came yet"
Cassie/Fl
*Cheerful*Everyone start *Shouting*
Everyone: (singing) Happy birthday to you............. dear Jessica. Happy Birthday to you.
Cassie/Fl
Happy Birthday my dear bestie 😚
Jessica/Fl's bestie
"surprised" you knew?
Jessica/Fl's bestie
I thought you forgot.
Jessica/Fl's bestie
Ohhhh... Now you are getting better at acting day by day..
Jessica/Fl's bestie
See I told you I am really a great friend. Because of me you are getting better at acting.*proudly*
Cassie/Fl
Yeah yeah I know *eyes rolling*
Jessica/Fl's bestie
But I am not happy...*pouting*
Why did you not tell me before that you know it. I have been sad all day because of you. *folding hands*
Cassie/Fl
If I told you before how could you get your surprise? Hmm? *raising one eyebrow*
Jessica's friend 1
Can you two stop please. Cut the cake first. I have been waiting for the cake.
Jessica's friend 2
Yeah yeah . *pointing at the cake* look the candle is also melting.
Cassie/Fl
ok ok let's start.*puts the cake in the table*
Jessica/Fl's bestie
blows candle and distribute the cake.
Gift
Everyone celebrates the birthday happily. After that all of them went to their houses. Only Cassie and Jessica were there.
Cassie was smiling, but her smile did not reach her ears.
Jessica saw that and came near her.
Jessica/Fl's bestie
Hey! Thinking about her?
Jessica/Fl's bestie
*Hugging* I know you miss her but what can we do. After you came here you have me. You don't have to worry. Your friend will soon reach you.
Cassie/Fl
*teardrop falls from her eyes*
I know she'll meet me. But every time I see these celebrations I just think about her. You know she used to do these things for me. Otherwise, I would be the same nerdy who doesn't know celebration other than the books and everything.
Jessica/Fl's bestie
Hey I am here. OKAY. And I don't like you thinking about her every time except me. *pouting*
Jessica/Fl's bestie
And I know you miss her but you came here years ago and you two lost your contact after that. You don't even know where she is and how she is. So stop thinking about her now. It's MY BIRTHDAY and I don't want MY BESTIE to think about her old lost bestie.
Cassie/Fl
Ok ok I will not think about her. But Your bestie, me, is like this because of her.
Jessica/Fl's bestie
Ohooo now don't start again ok.*joining hands* I know how she was what she had done for you. So Please stop and dear Cassie you forgot one thing. *showing her right hand to her*
Cassie/Fl
What did I forget? I didn't forget anything.*showing like she don't know anything*
Jessica/Fl's bestie
*childish and irritated voice* C'mon Cassie. don't play with me. I kno you know what I am asking. Where is my gift? Give me.
Cassie/Fl
*laughing* I know I know. How could I forget that.
Cassie gives the gift box to her
Jessica/Fl's bestie
*opening*
Jessica/Fl's bestie
*shocked*
Jessica/Fl's bestie
*emotional* Cassie how did you know I wanted it? I... I could not believe how shocked and happy I am.
there was a bracelet in that box
Jessica/Fl's bestie
You know this is exactly like that bracelet which my grandma gave me and I lost it. I saw it in that store that day but I could not afford it.
Jessica/Fl's bestie
*hugs cassie*
Thank u thank u thank u very much.
Jessica/Fl's bestie
*suddenly realised something*
Wait.. how did you get the money to buy it?
Cassie/Fl
Cassie laughs... you don't have to know that. I saw that you liked it so I bought it.
Cassie/Fl
So let's go and buy icecream now.
*trying to change the topic*
Jessica/Fl's bestie
Don't tell me you used your pocket money which you have saved to buy your dress.
Cassie/Fl
*laughing nervously* What... no.. why would I do that?
Jessica/Fl's bestie
*in a heavy tone* CASSIEEE
Jessica/Fl's bestie
tell me the truth
Cassie/Fl
yes you are right
Jessica/Fl's bestie
why???
Cassie/Fl
because you wanted it and and I can buy that dress any time.
Jessica/Fl's bestie
Aww I am so lucky to have a friend like you.*hugging*
the both talked with each other for some time and went to their house after sometime.
Cassie's House
Both Cassie and Jessica went to Cassie's house after some time.
Cassie/Fl
*shouting* Mom we're home.
Cassie's mom
*sweet voice*Welcome home sweetie.
*questioning* weren't you supposed to leave your mom and dad home alone. How come you come this fast?
Cassie's dad
*annoyed*Honeyyy
Cassie's mom
*looking innocent* what?
Cassie/Fl
You two AGAIN. Can't you act this Lovey-dovey drama when I am not home. *rolling her eyes.
Cassie/Fl
And Jesse is with me. Didn't you want her to come to our house?
Cassie/Fl
Now she is here, and you are not saying anything. *raising one eyebrow*
Cassie's mom
What are you jealous that I am loving her more than you?
Cassie's mom
Jessica you come here. *waving her hand indicating to come near her*
Cassie's mom
*playing with her hair* Happy birthday child. *kissing her on the forehead lovingly*
Jessica/Fl's bestie
*Teary voice* Thank you auntie. You are the sweetest person I have ever met after my mother. Even dad does not love me this much.
Cassie's mom
*hugging her*
Cassie's mom
*getting emotional*
Cassie's mom
*tears in her eyes* silly girl didn't I told you to call me mom. Why are you calling me aunty. *acting angry*
Cassie's dad
*in a cheerful voice* Hey why are you getting angry at such a lovely child? It's her birthday, and you are making her cry.
Cassie's dad
Come here daughter. *pulling her into his arms* you don't have to worry about that. We love you.
Jessica/Fl's bestie
Even my dad doesn't love me this much *soft voice*
Jessica/Fl's bestie
*thinking*(After mom died my dad do not even care about me. But he showers me with love every time I come here.)
Jessica/Fl's bestie
(I wish for a happy family just like this)
Jessica's mom died some years ago and after that day her dad does not talk to her that much. He comes home always drunken and even bits her sometime. But Cassie's family love let very much. So she often comes home with Cassie.
Cassie/Fl
Hey I am also here
Cassie's dad
come here sweetie pie we did not forget about you.*pulls her in a hug*
Cassie/Fl
If you guys finished then I am taking Jessica to my room. We have some girls talk to do *wink*
Cassie's mom
Yeah Yeah do what you want to do
Cassie's mom
We also have some unfinished work to do. What do you say?*looking at Cassie's dad.*
Cassie's dad
umm... Y..Yes we have. *blush*
Cassie/Fl
Arghhh *annoyed*
Cassie/Fl
*whispering* Let's go fast before they start again.
Jessica/Fl's bestie
*underatands* Byeee unc..umm..dad and mom. Good luck uncle. *wink*
both Cassie and Jessica went to their room.
Jessica: *wishpering* Now tell me. Who was that??
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