Tangled: (1) Coming Home To You.
Birthday Surprise
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*.....* Actions or movements
(......) Character is Thinking
........ Character is Speaking
Pete is arriving home in the evening after work. He's just let himself into his house and has closed the door, taken his shoes off, slipped on his slippers and is moving towards the kitchen to get himself a glass of water.
Pete
*Very softly (and a little bit tiredly) talking to himself*
I'm home.
🌃🌃🌃🌃🌃
Pete
*still talking to himself*
Ahhhhhhhh!!!
What a crazy crazy day....
😵💫🫨😵💫🫨😵💫
I'm so glad I'm home.
🌃🌃🌃🌃🌃
Pete
*still to himself*
I'm so tired
😴😴😴😴😴
Pete
*still to himself*
I'm also glad it's Friday.
I think I'll be able to sleep all the way through the weekend until Monday arrives again.
💤😴💤😴💤📽️
Pete
*Drinks water he has poured for himself*
Pete
*checks fridge for food and continues talking to himself*
Uhmmmm. 🤔
I'm starving...
I wonder what I can have for dinner.
Pete
Hmmm???
🤔 🤔🤔🤔🤔
There's not a lot there because I shop on the weekend.
🚫🍓🥒🥗🚫
I guess I'll order in tonight.
Pete
(I wonder who's there)
🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
*walks to door*
Pete
*checks front door security camera*
Pete
(excited/ happy surprise)
Elsa.
Annoying Big sis.
I haven't seen you since last weekend.
Pete's elder sister (Elsa) is at the front door carrying something that looks like a rolled up rug.
Pete and Elsa hug each other happily in a friendly greeting.
Pete
Hi Elsa.
👋🤗👋🤗👋
❓❓❓❓❓
How was your week?
I wasn't expecting you today...
But, I'm glad you're here...
What are you doing here?
What are you holding?
It's quite big?...
What is it???
What have you done that you need to hide at my house???
❓❓❓❓❓
Big Sis (Elsa)
*Smiling Brightly and Excitedly at her favourite little brother*
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Hi to you too Pete.
I'm also happy to see you.
Baby Brother - You're such an air-head
You've forgotten your own birthday.
Pete
*knocking himself gently in the head and feeling a bit embarrassed with himself*
Pete
Whoops - Yep. This air head right here forgot my own birthday.
Big Sis (Elsa)
*walking inside Pete's apartment*
Happy birthday to you!!!
Can I come in?
This gift is so huge. I couldn't carry the present and a cake, so we'll have to order you a cake to get delivered.
Pete
Of course, you can come in. I don't have any food til I shop tomorrow, so we'll have to order dinner in any way.
Elsa leans the rug looking present against the wall and moves towards the lounge chair and sits down. Meanwhile, Pete gets Elsa and himself a glass of water and brings them to the coffee table in front of the lounge chair. Then sits down next to Elsa.
Big Sis (Elsa)
I'll order dinner then. It's your birthday so what do you feel like?
Pete
Can you order my usual favorites from my fave Thai restaurant? Also, I only have water so if you'd like wine or something else can you please order that too?
Big Sis (Elsa)
*Ordering food, alcohol and cake on mobile*
Sure - I can do that.
Big Sis (Elsa)
I know you hate making decisions, so I'll just order what I know you enjoy.
Pete
*Looking at the rolled up rug hoping Elsa hasn't really bought him a rug for his birthday.*
Pete
(I have to act like I love it even if I don't. Elsa and I are so different. If she likes something - I probably won't...)
Pete
Thanks Els, When it's food - I'll like whatever you order.
Big Sis (Elsa)
*Puts mobile on coffee table*
Big Sis (Elsa)
Order is all done. 👍
Big Sis (Elsa)
How are you Pete? I haven't seen you since last weekend.
Big Sis (Elsa)
I'm guessing that for you to forget your own birthday you must be pretty stressed out.
Pete
(Still looking at the rug wondering what it is?)
Pete
I'm ok Els. Works really busy at the moment because we're trying to finalize an important project.
Big Sis (Elsa)
(noticing Pete looking at the rug)
Big Sis (Elsa)
I'm really excited about your birthday present.
Big Sis (Elsa)
This is THE BEST gift I have ever given you!
Big Sis (Elsa)
Do you want to try guessing what it is?
Pete
*trying to act excited because he doesn't want to let his sister down*
Pete
You Always choose the BEST!
Pete
You know I'm going to love whatever you get me.
Pete
I'm going to try guess that it might be a rug?
Big Sis (Elsa)
*Laughing 🤣*
Big Sis (Elsa)
Nah - It's not a rug. The rug isn't actually your present. I just used it to package your present so I could deliver your gift.
Big Sis (Elsa)
... I don't actually need the rug back - you can keep it if you like it.
Big Sis (Elsa)
Any other guesses what I might roll up in a rug for my favourite brother?
Pete
(OMG - I'm so relieved it's not a rug)
Pete
Hhhhmmmm - Now I'm stumped.
Pete
... I really have no idea.
Big Sis (Elsa)
*still laughing and watching Pete watch the rug*
What can you roll-up in a rug?
Pete
I really don't know. Could it be a ....
Big Sis (Elsa)
Well.... It's your birthday present from me!
Big Sis (Elsa)
So you can open it whenever you want
Pete stands up from the couch and walks towards the rug holding his birthday present.
Pete
(Hmmmm - Now I'm really curious.)
Pete
Els - I love presents. I wonder what it is?
The BEST Birthday Gift EVER!
Elsa is still sitting on couch.
Pete moves to rug leaning against the wall
Pete
Elsa - I'm so curious now
Pete
Come help me move it to the coffee table, so I can open it
Elsa gets up and helps Pete move it. Then sits back down again.
Big Sis (Elsa)
Sure- I really hope you like it
Pete
Pete starts unraveling the rug. Eventually he's able to take the rug off. Too interested in unwrapping his gift - He throws the rug behind the couch to clean up later.
On the table is a life-sized AI robot that looks like an adult version of the person he used to have a crush on during High School.
Pete is instantly attracted to looking at it. He crushed on this guy for about 3 years during HS. His testosterone filled fantasies from his teenage years that had been passively sleeping suddenly woke-up in his mind.
Pete
*biting his lip - unable to look away*
Pete
*unable to say anything because he can't think while he can't control his crush-filled fantasies playing in his mind like a film reel*
Pete
*still biting his lip while his face takes on more of a seductive pout*
Pete
*still thinking - looking - biting - pouting*
Pete
(Oh shit - I still find him so sexy. Those god-like abs are so hot and ***** right in front of me.)
Pete
(I've never been able to touch him before)
Pete
*unconsciously licking his lips suggestively - still unable to look away*
Pete
*so excited - something went up and pressed hard against his pants*
Pete
(When Elsa goes - I'm going to slowly trace every mm of his body with my fingers)
Pete
... (and then I'm going to do it all over again with my tongue)
Pete
...(and then I'm going to kiss...)
Pete
(oh shit - Elsa is still here - and I'm rock hard. I've got to get my mind out of its sex-filled thoughts until she leaves. I still need to eat dinner and a cake with her)
Pete
Wow! Elsa - Umm! Not too sure what this is right now.
Pete
Why exactly do I have a life-sized version of your HS crush as my birthday present?
Pete
(I'm sure Elsa didn't know I also crushed on her crush. It was the only secret I have ever kept from her.)
Pete
... (or maybe she knew - and just never told me she knew)
Big Sis (Elsa)
*talking in a very excited tone as she boasts positively about her latest work product*
Big Sis (Elsa)
It's the latest AI product that is being made at the company I work for.
Big Sis (Elsa)
It's now in the beta testing phase so all the people from the company are asked to take them home and trial them.
Big Sis (Elsa)
Basically we are doing quality control.
Big Sis (Elsa)
The aim is to check for any defects, glitches, problems with programming etc etc. so that we can identify any problems and fix them before the product enters its final commercial stage and gets sold to real customers.
Big Sis (Elsa)
I have to do it for work but when they asked if I knew anyone else who could help us test it - I thought it would be perfect for you for your birthday gift.
Big Sis (Elsa)
It can be programmed to do most household tasks which would mean you have to spend less time on cleaning around the house.
Big Sis (Elsa)
It also has access to the internet, so it can help with all questions that AI normally gets asked. So it can answer questions about weather, news, song lyrics and all the latest AI developments.
Big Sis (Elsa)
It is definitely capable of reminding Air-Headed people that it is their birthday.
Big Sis (Elsa)
Happy Birthday, Little Brother
Big Sis (Elsa)
So, Do you like it?
Pete
*Truly very excited now*
Pete
(This is actually THE BEST gift. I am so excited.)
Pete
(2. It's the latest AI robot)
Pete
(3. It's his crush lying *****)
Pete
(4. It's his crush - lying ***** - for him to....)
Pete
*still unconsciously moving between biting his lip, licking his lips and trying to hide his c**k has gone hard from his sister*
Pete
This is really a great present.
Pete
Why does it look like you're crush from High School?
Big Sis (Elsa)
I was the designer for it. That was my job on the project and also why we get to be testers for it.
Big Sis (Elsa)
I've set mine up at home but there are instructions here. Do you want me to help set it up.
Pete
Sure - that would be great.
Pete
*Pete reaches out to touch the robot to try to help Elsa set it up but when his fingers touch the ***** body his thoughts go into over drive again and it has become too difficult for him to resist letting out a *****
Pete
Actually Els, I only just got home from work before you arrived and haven't showered yet. Can you begin setting it up, and I'll help when I am out of the shower?
Elsa finds the instructions and begins setting up the robot while Pete retreats into the bathroom. Remembering Elsa is still here- he locks the door and turns music on on his phone.
Alone in the bathroom Pete is having de ja vu from his high school days when he used to live with his family and needed to move stealthily into his room or the bathroom if his unruly teenage thoughts got too much for him, and he needed to be alone.
With the image of his crushes face and the feel when he touched the ***** body still fresh in his mind; he let his mind wander into whatever fantasy it wanted.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
(Seductive tone while slowly looking Pete up and down like he wants to do something very naughty.) Pete - Baby - You're all grown up!
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*Eyes settling on Pete's c**k*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
(quiet seduction) look how big you've grown.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*eyes roving slowly over Pete's body again before stopping at his chest*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*finger pointing at shirt*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
Take it off baby.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
Strip off all of your clothes, so I can see how big you are.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*licking his lips as he watches Pete*
*moans pleasurably as he lets his dream take over*
Pete
*Unconsciously bites his index finger before letting it explore his lips.*
Pete
(I wonder if Flynn's lips feel this wet and soft)
Pete
*tracing his index finger down his chin, along his Adam's apple and down his neck*
Pete
(I wish these were Flynn's fingers exploring me right now)
Pete
*still tracing his fingers down until he reaches the top button of his shirt*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*Quietly letting out a suggestive *****
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
I wish it was my fingers too.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*Tracing his left hand in the same pattern as Pete like a mirror image*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
Pete - I love watching you strip for me.
Pete
*slowly unbuttoning his top button*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*left hand moving from the same place Flynn's open shirt button on his own body*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*right hand greedily exploring his own body as it trails down his own chest and stomach - one ab at a time*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
You are so fine - watching you strip is making me so hot
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
(begging) strip one more button
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
(begging) for me...
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
(begging) please
Pete
*loving getting lost in the pleasure of his own fantasy*
Pete
*unbuttons his shirt and lets it fall open while he watches Flynn get all hot and bothered.*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*His left hand continues to trace down his body a mirror image as to what Pete's does as Pete unbuttons his shirt*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*His right hand continues to move from the bottom of his abs down to his c**k.*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*nestles his c**k in his hands*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
You look so good. I wish I could taste you.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
Why have you stopped - Your pants need to go to
Pete
*leans back on the basin while he unbuttons his pants and lets them fall to the floor.*
Pete
*watches Flynn groping his own c**K. It excites him so much he decides he wants to do the same, so he gropes his own c**k*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*begins stroking himself up and down along the shaft of his c**k*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
That's it baby. You're ***** like me now. We look so pretty.
Pete
*mirroring Flynn - stroking up and down rhythmically *
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
(begging) Let me taste you....
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
(begging) please
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*walks slowly to Pete and takes Pete's c**K in his mouth while jerking himself off until they both ****
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
Baby - You taste so good. Shower quickly so we can meet again in your next dream.
Pete
*takes his shirt off and obediently jumps in the shower*
Task 1: Towel Delivery
The warm blast of water on Pete's body woke him up from his illusion. After a while he began to relax. After a time he calmed himself down and was sure he could control his urges and was ready to face Elsa and his new toy.
Pete
*looking around for his towel*
Pete
*unlocking bathroom door and opening slightly*
Pete
(shouting so Elsa can hear) Elsa - I forgot my towel. Can you please bring me one.
Big Sis (Elsa)
Yep. I wanna try something new. I'll send it in soon.
Pete
*Pete continues his shower while waiting for his towel*
After a minute or two Pete looks up when he hears the sound of the bathroom door opening and closing.
The image in front of him was heaven sent to tease him again. The fire that had been washed away in the shower raged even hotter in his body again.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*till ***** but now holding up a towel which he is delivering to Pete*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
Hello. I am Flynnie Bot.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
I am your new AI robot from your best big sister Elsa.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
My current task is to deliver a towel to Pete in the bathroom and make sure that he is dry.
Pete
*All his senses are on high alert. His sleeping c**K suddenly awakened again by the image of his crush standing ***** in front of him.*
Pete
(Why is he so beautiful)
Pete
(I'm not a teenager any more)
Pete
(This isn't even a real person)
Pete
(Why can't I control my body right now)
Pete
(He's too sexy standing there *****.)
Pete
*turns the shower off and steps out of the shower. Tries to take the towel from AI Flynn*
Pete
*looking greedily at Flynn. Enjoying the pleasure of being able to look at his face and body without worrying about what the other person thinks*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*Stands calmly (like a robot) watching Flynn get out of the shower.*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*When Pete is standing out of the shower he moves towards Flynn.*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*Opens up the towel and wraps it around Pete's body. Holding it firmly just in front of Pete's chest while looking at Pete's face*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*My task was to make sure you are dry*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*Please stand still while I dry you*
Pete
(Is this really happening.)
Pete
(I feel kinda weird - reacting to a robot like this)
Pete
(but he's so pretty. I've spent most of my teenage years imagining different ways to play with each other.)
Pete
SO..... MANY... WAYS!!!
Pete
(His touch on my body feels like a real person.)
Pete
(And he looks perfect - I want to eat him and be eaten by him. And then repeat it again)
Pete
(Oh what the hell - He's a robot, and I am the only person in this bathroom. We are not hurting anyone)
Pete
(I think I'll just enjoy exploring this moment of pure bliss)
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*Using the towel to massage Pete's body from his head, gently over his face, around his shoulders, arms, chest, abs and all the way down Pete's body to his toes.*
Pete
*moaning uncontrollably as he felt Flynn's touch roam over ALL his body.*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*Hangs the towel on the rack*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
Please keep still while I check that you are dry.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*Starting from Pete's hair again. Gently stroked down Pete's body with his fingertips*
Pete
*Completely lost in the feeling of being touched and massaged by AI Flynn who has the body and face of the only person he has liked. At some point during this moment of bliss Pete came again*
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
My task is finished.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
I delivered a towel and made sure he was completely dry.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
If there are no other tasks I will return to my charging dock.
Flynnie Bot (AI Flynn)
*Opens door, walks out of bathroom and stands at his charging dock*
Pete
*Spends a moment standing in the bathroom while his senses all calm down and quickly cleans himself up again*
Pete
*Makes his way out of the bathroom to his room to find himself some clean clothes*
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