"My Sweat Killer" Bl
introducing
Hello dear readers, this is my first story
I hope you like it and please let me know what I should improve in the comments...
Start introducing a few characters
Koro
age: 26
Family: parents Mr. Loyd and Mrs. Loyd has a little sister named Leyla
Character traits: kills anyone who stands in his way, is a powerful mafia boss
Mr. Tinre
age 48
family: Wife Mrs.Tinre has three sons and one daughter
Character traits: cold-hearted to strangers, loves his wife, hates his eldest son
Mr. Loyd
age 46
family: Wife Mrs.loyd has a son and a daughter
Character traits: is very strict with his children, Loyal, rarely speaks
Mrs.Tinre
age 47
family: Husband Mr.Tinre has one daughter and three sons
Character traits: warm heart, cares deeply for his eldest son, is very strict with his other children
This Dream
It's quiet, you can't even hear the wind
Something is wrong, and you decide to look around
But you see nothing but trees.... and more trees
Suddenly... a noise, you look around but see nothing but the feeling that someone is watching you won't let you go
You call if someone was there, the feeling that someone is with you in this forest is getting stronger
but before you can react, a figure jumps at you and other creatures jump towards you
Koro (Alpha)
*sits up and stares at the dark wall of his room*
Koro (Alpha)
"again this dream... it must mean something..."
Koro (Alpha)
*lays back down and tries to go back to sleep when his phone rings*
Koro (Alpha)
" Ugh what's up again it's the middle of the night" 🙄
Koro (Alpha)
*he looks at his phone, and it's his father*
Koro (Alpha)
*he picked up immediately then his father only called when it was important*
Mr. Loyd (Drake)
"Hello koro! You still remember Mr. Tinre?" 📱
Koro (Alpha)
"MH yes, I think, the giant mafia boss in the west?" 📱
Mr. Loyd (Drake)
" yes he is... he is an old friend of mine..." 📱
Koro (Alpha)
"Yes I remember… But what's the matter with you calling so late?" 📱
Mr. Loyd (Drake)
"his wife Mrs. Tinre called me and asked me to come to him, we all!" 📱
Koro (Alpha)
"Ok! I'll come, I'll drive to you first" 📱
Mr. Loyd (Drake)
"Okay, see you then!" 📱
Koro (Alpha)
*he puts down the phone and stands up*
Koro (Alpha)
"The Tinre family... this could be interesting..."
So my dears, that's it for the chapter...
But don't worry, it'll be on soon
See you in the next chapter byeee ♥️♥️♥️
The "Problem"
he (koro) put on elegant clothes
He got his car keys and went to his car
He quickly got in and drove as fast as he could to his father
he parked in front of the villa and got out of his car
His sister ran to him and greeted him first
Leyla
age: 21
family: parents Mr. Loyd Mrs. Loyd has a big brother
Character traits: cheeky, listens only to her brother, loves excitement
Leyla (Omega)
"Hi ii koro brother! I haven't seen you in ages I missed you so much!"
Koro (Alpha)
*he hugs his sister*
Koro (Alpha)
"haha it was only half a year to be exact"
Leyla (Omega)
*hugs him back*
Leyla (Omega)
"but it's felt like years "☹
Koro (Alpha)
*he breaks away from the hug when he heard his father*
Mr. Loyd (Drake)
"There you are koro!"
Mr. Loyd (Drake)
"Let's not waste time and let's go!"
Koro (Alpha)
"Yes you are right.. won't mother come with us?"
Mr. Loyd (Drake)
"No She's Too Busy"
Mr. Loyd (Drake)
"she's coming later"
Koro (Alpha)
"Ok understand, then we should go, come on Leyla!"
Leyla (Omega)
"yeah yeah I'm coming"
Leyla (Omega)
(thinks: he's so weird today his pheromones are so strong)
Koro (Alpha)
"Is everything ok Leyla? Or why are you standing there so silently?"
Leyla (Omega)
"huh ehm no all good, let's go.." 😅
Koro (Alpha)
"Come on now father will get mad otherwise" 😒
Meanwhile the Loyd family drive to the Tinre family
Mr.Tinre (Dante)
(thinks: I should tell Hansol (Mr.Tinre) that the Loyd family is coming)
Mrs Tinre was worried about how his husband would react but he had to do it
Mr.Tinre (Dante)
( he was nervous but he had no choice but he trusted his man)
He walked back out of the garden to speak to his man
( The villa and the garden)
Mr.Tinre (Dante)
" Honey ?"
Mr.Tinre (Dante)
"I have something important to tell you!"
Mr.Tinre (Hansol)
"yeah? what is it babe?"
Mr.Tinre (Hansol)
"It's still very early, don't we want to eat something first?"
Mr.Tinre (Dante)
"mmm yes as you like"
Mrs. Tinre makes his husband something to eat
Mr.Tinre (Dante)
(thinks: all will be fine... I hope)
Mr.Tinre (Dante)
"eat is ready honey"
Mr.Tinre (Hansol)
"Thank you babe you're the best"
Mr.Tinre (Dante)
"No problem... so what I wanted to tell you is..."
Mr.Tinre (Hansol)
*listens to his wife and starts to eat*
Mr.Tinre (Dante)
"You still know the Loyd family?"
Mr.Tinre (Hansol)
* nods *
Mr.Tinre (Dante)
"I called them to come over..."
Mr.Tinre (Hansol)
*just nods*
Mr.Tinre (Hansol)
" because of the "problem" ? "
So that's it for this chapter...
I'm sorry they are so short
But I'll do as many as I can for that
Byeee love you my readers
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