The Old Man
Introduction
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hey so i am remaking this story
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the last one didn’t really have a plot i didn’t know where it was going and yea
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so here is the new cast
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and might i say they are so gorgeous 👍🏾
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let’s introduce them to you
This is Ares Zodiax and he is ml(main lead) he’s 37 and single has 2 kids and he is a CEO of a company
This is Diamond ml ex wife (moving on)
This is Zenovia Zodiax she’s ml daughter and she’s a senior in high school she’s 18 years old
This is Ariya Zodiax she is also ml daughter (will get more on her later😉)
This is Valero Syntax and he’s sml (side main lead) he’s 45 he has 2 kids he’s married and he’s also a CEO of a company
This is Octavia Syntax sml current wife she’s 40 she has 2 kids she doesn’t work because she relies on her husband income
This is Quasaria Syntax and she’s sml daughter she’s a senior in high school she’s 18
This is Azaire Syntax he’s sml son he’s also a senior in high school he’s 19 (has an early birthday was 6 in kindergarten)
This is Malakai Jean he is an important character later he’s 29 he works at the mall
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okay and that is it for introduction
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nice cast rightttt
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can’t wait to get into this story
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Episode 1
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hi let’s get on with the story
each year the world puts up a vote
they bite on who’s company has been nominated for number 1 best company for that year
each year two companies trade places and they have become enemies
they have never spoke to each other before and they are extremely competitive
right now the moment is about to announce whose company is on top this year
news reporter
today we will announce another year of close voting results
she began talking and got sidetracked
Ares Zodiax
this lady need to give the news already
Zenovia Zodiax
dad seriously this is so lame
Ares Zodiax
z shush you know how competitive i am
Zenovia Zodiax
you didn’t win last year so you’ll probably win this year
Zenovia Zodiax
i’m pretty sure it’s a pattern
Ares Zodiax
no it’s not it just because i’m the better company
Zenovia Zodiax
yes of course dad (this is kinda dumb🤷🏾♀️)
news reporter
today we will announce another year of close voting results
(happened at the same time)
Octavia Syntax
honey why are you always like this?🤭
Valero Syntax
you already know this i can’t let him win again
Quasaria Syntax
dad did we seriously all need to be here
Azaire Syntax
yea i wanted to go out tonight
Valero Syntax
well to bad this is a family event
every year this is how it went
news reporter
so the winner is…
news reporter
THE ZODIAX COMPANY
everyone who voted them was cheering at their tvs
while one person was about to explode
Valero Syntax
Are you kidding me? what’s so good about his dumb company
Octavia Syntax
honey don’t be upset we still are very proud of you
Quasaria Syntax
yes we are (wants to leave)
Azaire Syntax
your our favorite company
Valero Syntax
awe so cute😐 stop sucking up
Quasaria Syntax
really dad ?😑
Azaire Syntax
way to ruin a cute family bonding moment *sarcastic*
Valero Syntax
anyways🙄 i’ll win next year no problem
Octavia Syntax
that’s the spirit handsome -pecks him-
Valero Syntax
i love you honey
Octavia Syntax
love you to babe
Ares Zodiax
i already knew i was gonna win😏
Zenovia Zodiax
of course you would dad your like the best
Ares Zodiax
what do you want suck up🙄
Zenovia Zodiax
dad can i go to a party tonight
Ares Zodiax
what time will you be back? who’s gonna be there? you know the deal answer
Zenovia Zodiax
(so overprotective) i will be back around 12 or so just random high school seniors
Zenovia Zodiax
and can you pick me up and drop me off?
Ares Zodiax
fine you can go you already know the rules tho?
Zenovia Zodiax
yes dad, no drinking, no smoking, no kissing, yata yata yata
Ares Zodiax
and you better remember it too go get ready or whatever
Zenovia Zodiax
thanks dad byee
she kisses his cheek and then runs upstairs
this means switching households okay (☝🏾)
Quasaria Syntax
dad can me and zarie go to this party ?
Azaire Syntax
yea it’s a senior party
Valero Syntax
absolutely not you know i don’t like parties
Quasaria Syntax
but dadddd
Azaire Syntax
pops can we please go?
Octavia Syntax
honey don’t be so hard on them let them go
Valero Syntax
only for my beautiful wife
Quasaria Syntax
yes thank you mommy😽
Azaire Syntax
yea thanks mom
they walk up the stairs to get ready
timeskip everyone’s ready
Valero Syntax
y’all got 5 minutes and i’m laying back down
he heard a coming and just waited for them
Valero Syntax
girl you better bring a jacket or something that’s not gonna work
Quasaria Syntax
dad but it will mess up my outfit
Valero Syntax
i’ll mess you up more quit playing with me
Quasaria Syntax
ughh fine dad
she brings a jacket down knowing she won’t wear it
Azaire Syntax
ready come on
Valero Syntax
don’t tell me what to do
Valero Syntax
get in the car
they just mentally roll their eyes and get in the car
Quasaria Syntax
omg look who it is
Azaire Syntax
wow zenovia knows how to dress
Quasaria Syntax
i know right!!!
Quasaria Syntax
our bestie you should meet her she’s literally so nice
Azaire Syntax
that’s a little pushing in but okay
Quasaria Syntax
boy shut up and get out
Quasaria Syntax
come dad let’s go
Valero Syntax
ugh fine (ain’t nobody wanna meet people)
they all get out and approach zenovia
Quasaria Syntax
girll you look so goood
Zenovia Zodiax
honey look at yourself
Azaire Syntax
them high heels you gonna trip
Zenovia Zodiax
boy no i’m not who told you come outside looking like that
Quasaria Syntax
-laughing- should’ve never opened yo mouth
Azaire Syntax
mmtch y’all annoying why do i hang out with y’all
Quasaria Syntax
cause you love us
Valero Syntax
girl i’m not gonna be here all day
Quasaria Syntax
oh yea nova where’s your dad
Zenovia Zodiax
he’s coming out the car
Quasaria Syntax
so our parents can meet and stuff
Azaire Syntax
can y’all hurry up it’s bumping in there
Zenovia Zodiax
wait a minute dang
her dad finally gets out the car
Zenovia Zodiax
oh hey dad meet my best friends dad Mr. Va-
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Episode 2
Quasaria Syntax
y’all know each other or sumn
Azaire Syntax
yea this is good y’all already know each other
Zenovia Zodiax
you didn’t tell me you had friends dad
Ares Zodiax
because we aren’t friends
Zenovia Zodiax
what do you mean
Ares Zodiax
he’s the other company
Quasaria Syntax
oooo y’all be fighting over that spot every year
Azaire Syntax
yea it’s getting boring and not even surprising anymore
Ares Zodiax
go in the party before i change my mind i’ll pick you up later
he walks off and gets in his car
Ares Zodiax
(i finally meet my competition😏) this is gonna be fun
Zenovia Zodiax
well he’s gone
Zenovia Zodiax
it was nice to see you again mr.valero
Valero Syntax
call me just Valero i feel too old with mr
Quasaria Syntax
y’all let’s go already
Azaire Syntax
finally dang come one
Zenovia Zodiax
okay coming
they finally enter the party to have a good time
Valero Syntax
(i can’t believe i lost to him😡) just you wait i’ll be back on top before you know it
anyways the drive back to respect houses
zenovia came downstairs her dad was on the couch
Ares Zodiax
I don’t care fix it now or i’ll fire you!🧊
Zenovia Zodiax
(better not interrupt him)
it was to late for that he saw her
Ares Zodiax
-hangs up- you slept in your late to school
Zenovia Zodiax
yea i was really tired sorry 😓 but i’m ready to go now
there school has a light dress code
Ares Zodiax
who buys you these clothes🤦🏾♂️
Zenovia Zodiax
uhh you do all the time😽
Ares Zodiax
whatever take this to go and get in the car
Zenovia Zodiax
thank you dad
time skip she’s at school
Zenovia Zodiax
bye dad love you
Ares Zodiax
mhm love you too
Zenovia Zodiax
(let’s get to class i’m so late)
she checked in and arrives at class
her besties are waiting for her inside
she walks in and goes to her seat
Quasaria Syntax
her girl where were you at?
Azaire Syntax
uhuh leaving me with her
Zenovia Zodiax
sorry yall i work up late
Zenovia Zodiax
but y’all are looking good in them outfits
Quasaria Syntax
thanks boo i chose his too
Quasaria Syntax
had to get him right
Azaire Syntax
i know how to dress
they say at the same time and laugh
teacher
you guys in the back be quiet and pay attention!!
she yells at them all the time
Quasaria Syntax
oop girl we beefing too loud
Azaire Syntax
it’s a yalll thing not me too
Zenovia Zodiax
sorry miss we’ll be quiet
Quasaria Syntax
i know y’all saw that
Azaire Syntax
i did she really be picking and choosing
Zenovia Zodiax
it’s cuz we the only blacks kids huh
Ares Zodiax
am i speaking a different language? what don’t you understand?🧊
secretary
sir i’m doing everything i can -head down-
Ares Zodiax
mia you better get this deal or it’ll cost your job🧊
Ares Zodiax
you’re dismissed 🧊
secretary
yes sir -bows and leaves room-
Ares Zodiax
(what has gotten into her? she is always on top of things)
Ares Zodiax
geez do i have to do everything myself
he was interrupted by a knock
teacher
sorry sir but there was a sudden meeting with Mr. Valero
Ares Zodiax
mia what’s this meeting about🧊
secretary
we’ll both companies want the same deal so the people have made a meeting with you both
Ares Zodiax
when is this meeting🧊
secretary
in 20 minutes sir
Ares Zodiax
why such sudden notice ?🧊
secretary
they just booked it sir i apologize
Ares Zodiax
it’s fine you’re dismissed 🧊
she leave and he prepares to face his enemy for a deal breaking deal
this deal could help either company in a good way
no is the game to see who gets the deal first
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