This will be more of an honest review. I will read your hard work and will provide an unbiased, facts and statements to improvise it.
I will try to come up with suggestions and will provide a conclusion for your work. Even can share ideas to make it more interesting.
Last But Not The Least-
One secret---
I will not go to judge your work on your grammar, Shh doesn't reveal these to anyone.
Lots of Love in advance and keep going.
Hurray!!!!
Dear Author,
Kudos!! To your Hard Work.
*I've read your first five chapters and the last five chapters. Trust me everything was well and good- the storyline is fresh for a reborn lead. I've read many comics including books few of them have a MODERN REBORN for the female lead this part got me unique.
While reading I found that the appearance of the male lead was too quick { I guess the reason behind could be the story is in a* Chat Story form instead of a novel }
I feel that the past of the female lead is being moreover losing.
There's one more thing I would like to highlight the spelling errors. I completely understand being a human we do have a typo error.
*For instance:- In a chapter, you wrote "I don't no that" the correct sentence should be "I don't know".
I love the cover of your chat story!!
I love the way how you have made great use of images in the chapters. It's a realistic and remarkable way to convey the feelings of the characters to the readers like us*.
**RECOMMENDATIONS:-
To convey the emotions or any feelings of the characters, please use capital letters and furthermore use punctuation(. , "?)
Try to resist spelling errors because there were many in the further chapters.
Try to make it further suspense, twist turns and create a curiosity in the readers like us**.
*Moreover, I loved reading it and we're looking the more upcoming chapters. I gave you "5" stars.
Good luck!!! for your chat story. Keep writing and growing!!
Thanks&Regards
XOXO*!!
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