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Douluo Dalu World.

Draft

Tang Lin a girl who was abounded by her family, because there life was in danger and don't want anything to happen to them. They gave her ring which is infinite amount of gold, dresses, weapons and many things. Worst was she was born blind as her mother was attacked one time, she was pregnant, so it affected her child. After living near Holy Spirit village, they vanished. Jack head of the village found her with her name written in paper.
6 years later
We can see a boy with blue hair sitting on a place cultivating. When suddenly a girl came with blindfolded in her eyes surprising thing is her senses are dangerously sharp even an ant moving sound she can hear she can walk without any because she is aware of her surrounding.
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Brother Shane ..... you are still practicing ..... come on get up I want.....to talk with you 🙂
Yes, Tang San and Tang Lin know each other from beginning, Tang San talk with her freely without any worry.
Tang San
Tang San
HHH...... liner why are you here..... this place is dangerous (holds her hand)
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Brother I know...... didn't I tell you.... my senses are very sharp ☺️(still holding his hand)
Tang San
Tang San
(flick her head) Still careful today..... let's go to my home ☺️
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Owe..... ok let's go.... how is uncle Hào 🙂
Tang San
Tang San
He is good.... here we are... wait..... Dad I am back and..... liner is also here ☺️
Tang Hao
Tang Hao
MMM
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Uncle Hào how..... are you 🙂
Tang Hao
Tang Hao
Good.... come in careful 🙂 you both stay here.... I am going to sleep (went to his room)
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Xiao San..... aren't you curious about ..... tomorrow .... we are going to awaken our spirit ☺️
Tang San
Tang San
I am indeed.... let's see ..... here drink this 🙂
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Saner ...... you sound so cute.... I wonder how you look 😔
Tang San
Tang San
Hey don't be sad.... wait you will be able to know (take her hand, and make her feel his face, blushing like hell) Ahem.... so did you fill it 🙂
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
(amazed) Tang San now..... I know how you look..... when you grow up you.... will surely be..... a ladykiller 🤭
Tang San
Tang San
He..... hey don't talk like that 🙂
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Oh..... can you check this ring..... is this a storage ring or what ☺️
Tang San
Tang San
Just a minute........ WAIT this is ..... indeed storage ring..... from small you are wearing this.... 🤔
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
MMM...... I think there might be .... many things.... huff I will... see later what's .... with it ☺️
Tang San
Tang San
Hey wait there are many.... dress let me chose ..... huh, yes it will look good. Come on let me take.... you home 🙂
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Hum mm..... ok ☺️
Next morning
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Oh so this dress he-he.... beautiful ❤️.
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
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Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Really beautiful ❤️
Tang San
Tang San
(knocked on the door) Liner are you ready.... let's go ☺️
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
(coming out) Saner.... how.... am I looking ☺️
Tang San
Tang San
Beautiful 🙂
Jack- Let's go 🙂
Jack - Master Su Yantao these are the children..... who will have their awakening
Su Yantao
Su Yantao
Ok..... My name is Su Yantao level 26 ❄️
Inside
Su Yantao
Su Yantao
Don't get scared for what you will see 😒
Su Yantao
Su Yantao
{Lone wolf possession} now spread your right hand
After sometimes everyone s was not good spirits.
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Saner go remember this..... In this world their is no trash spirit only trash spirit master ❄️ (looking at Su Yantao)
Tang San
Tang San
Hmm stay here.... don't go to 🙂
Su Yantao
Su Yantao
Thought 💭 this girl even though she is blind.... looking at her giving me chills 😟
For now bye

2

Tang San
Tang San
(extend his right hand) {Blue river grass}(amazed)
Su Yantao
Su Yantao
Again a tr---(suddenly felling a huge amount of killing intent)(looks towards)
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
(The person who did this) Wow blue river grass..... even it's basically not good.... but if you continue to strengthen..... it might grow more strong 🙂❄️
Su Yantao
Su Yantao
(shivering) Put your hand in this globe..... WHAT! Innate full spirit 😨
Su Yantao
Su Yantao
It's.... huff go next
Tang San
Tang San
Be careful 🙂
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Humm 🙂
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
(went there and stand felling a warmness in both of her hand, clenched her left hand) (showing right hand, suddenly got surrounded by black aura)
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
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That time a huge demonic aura was surrounding her sword
Su Yantao
Su Yantao
This..... impossible ... this is I know clearly..... DEMON LORDS SWORD 😨😨(stumbled)
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
(put her hand on the globe) Oh innate full spirit with..... demonic sword 🙂
Su Yantao
Su Yantao
Girl why don't you join...... spirit hall 😏
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
No, thank you, I am good. Tang San let's go 🙂
Tang San
Tang San
(hold her hand) Hmm let's go.... and thank you for that time ☺️
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
He... it's ok... oh let's go to your home..... I want to talk with uncle Hào 🙂
Tang San
Tang San
Ok.
After sometime
Tang San
Tang San
Dad we are back
Jack - Humph you didn't even come... to Xiao Sans spiritual awakening 💢
Tang San
Tang San
It's ok.... grandpa jack
Jack - I am leaving (left)
Tang Hao
Tang Hao
So what did you got 😒
Tang San
Tang San
(blue river grass , came from right hand) Even though Su Yantao said it's trash..... but Liner says it's not 🙂
Tang Hao
Tang Hao
(teary eyes after seeing his spirit) This..... just like her 😢 I am ---
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Ai...... don't you want to check .... his second spirit 🙂
Tang San
Tang San
You know (schocked)
Tang Hao
Tang Hao
2nd..... show me
Tang San
Tang San
(A hammer came from his left hand) This .... but dad it's... getting heavy 😣
Tang Hao
Tang Hao
(hold his hand) This also you got (hugged him)
Tang San was left but what he noticed was
Tang Hao
Tang Hao
Now retrack your spirit and liner ..... huh were did she go 🤔
Tang San
Tang San
She was here ...... dad there are.... few drops of blood in floor I am going first see you later (left)
Tang Hao
Tang Hao
Huff....... she must have known...... about something serious 😟
Actually when she saw them..... she started to miss her family but instead of water it was blood
Tang San
Tang San
Liner where did she go.... there huh what is she doing
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Tang San.... I want to show you.... my second spirit (from her left hand a flute with surrounded by black aura came out ) This is also demonic flute 🙂
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
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Tang San
Tang San
Its ok..... are you hurt anywhere.... in our floor there was blood 😟
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
It's ok.... oh I am not.... going to Nuodong Academy 🙂 this is for you. See you next time (give him and left)
Tang San
Tang San
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Tang San
Tang San
Humm see you soon 😀
After 2 weeks Tang San left. After sometime Tang hao also left
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Humph ...... spirit hall get ready to die . After 3 weeks I will go to spirit forest to get my first spirit ring 🙂
For now bye

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Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Next morning
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Hum huh...... oh I need to check why..... my flute was showing.... memories 🤔
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
(bringing out her flute, grabbed suddenly started to see things)
What she was seeing was her clans' death everyone s death. Even her parents who was killed brutally. Their clans are expert in sword. But at very last she was many people who killed them their badge. It was a cross sign with spirit written.
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
(open her eyes) Huh.... huff.... This.... so they didn't abounded me.... but got killed..... this flute power can be absorbed.... but its demonic aura..... huff.... I will see later.... let's practice ❄️
What she didn't notice was, for a second her purple hair change into white, but got back to normal, but now there is a fire mark on her head
Time skip
It's been 2 years since everything happens, she got her first spirit ring which was yellow an ice fox which is very strongest ice user. The storage ring in her hand was an infinite ring full of gold, dress etc. One day
Tang San
Tang San
Quick come... we are already here 😀
Xiao Wu
Xiao Wu
Are we finally here ..... wow 😲... huh.... who is that girl Tang San 🤔
Tang San
Tang San
Huh who..... OH, no.... Tang Lin quick come with me 💢
Xiao Wu
Xiao Wu
Ok.... but who is she 🤔
On a place near an abyss
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
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Tang Lin
Tang Lin
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Tang San
Tang San
Tang Lin are you.... crazy 😦 (grabbed her hand, dragged her back)
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Huh..... Xiao San.... is this you (touches his cheek) You... are back 😣😄
Tang San
Tang San
(blushed) Yes I am back.... how are you 😦
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
I am good.... oh who is that girl.... maybe your.... girlfriend 😊
Tang San
Tang San
WHA ...... what are you talking about.... wait where are going (following her)
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
(went were Xiao Wu was) What is your name..... little 'rabbit' 🙂. Thought 💭 A spirit beast change into a .... human 😏
Xiao Wu
Xiao Wu
(stunned) My name is Xiao Wu.... nice to meet you sis. Thought 💭 She found out about me
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
(Patted her head) Cute 🤭. Don't worry I won't tell anyone (whisper) Oh..... Saner please.... don't be sad.... after this.... come with me 🙂
Tang San
Tang San
Huh sad ..... for what
Xiao Wu
Xiao Wu
Let's go and see 😊. Thought 💭 Thank you sis
Inside Tang San home
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Huff..... their is a letter in..... that table... read it (went out of the house)
Tang San
Tang San
Huh wait... let's see.... (after sometime, letter dropped from his hand) Why did you.... leave dad 😢(went out)
Xiao Wu
Xiao Wu
Huh(after reading letter) Saner wait(went out)
Tang San
Tang San
(putting his head on her lap) Liner .... when did dad left
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
(patting his head) The day.... you left... don't worry.... uncle Hao..... must have some very.... serious work.... but I am here for you.... now even Xiao Wu is ..... here for you. Am I right Wu? 😊
Xiao Wu
Xiao Wu
(schocked because she was found out) Yes Saner.... sis liner is right I ..... no we are here don't.... be sad 🤭
Tang San
Tang San
(sitting up) Thank you so much..... you both come..... with me.... I want to show... you something 😊
Tang Lin
Tang Lin
Ummmm..... Saner you take Sis Wu and go..... I am going to cook for you both.... go now see you (left)
Tang San
Tang San
Huh..... ok... let's go ☺️
Xiao Wu
Xiao Wu
Ok 😊
For now bye

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