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FIXING THE BROKEN ONE

INTRODUCTION

EVELYN BRITTON

24 years

college student

cute but introvert

extremely affectionate with loved ones

scared of yelling and shouting

has daddy issues

can be kinky but is soft

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NATHAN PARKOUR

29 years

CEO of family business

hot but a gentleman

strict but have soft heart

loves cute boys

kind and forgiving at heart

has abandonment issues

kinky and rough

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Vestin Evans

24 years

college student

Evelyn's best friend

shameless and really blunt

can switch but likes to bottom

hate liers

likes commanding

supportive and a sweetheart

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AIDEN WEST

27 years

CEO of a club and hospital

strict but soft hearted

possesive over what is his

understanding and patient

loves cute boys

has a little secret that no one knows except his best friend nathan

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Mr. JOHN BRITTON

48 years

chairman of his company

loves his wife and son

can be strict at times

hates liers

fashion freak

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Mrs. Shirrey Britton

47 years

loves her son and husband

likes teasing

playful and happy lady

don't get emotional easily

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Mr. Harris Parkour

57 years

chairman of his company

natural extrovert

playful and loving

loves his family

can be cute and clumsy

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Mrs. Rason Parkour

54 years

strict but a sweetheart

don't hold grudges

loves her family

likes baking

happy soul

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SYNOPSIS:

The pretty boy named Evelyn lives a happy and healthy life until he finds himself in the claws of a hungry and cruel man who leaves no chances of breaking the poor soul . Being young and naive also didn't worked in Evelyn's favour as he lets himself drown in self misery and depression.

He vows to never submit to anyone again in his life and never go on the path of pain called love which lead him to a life where he is never free of nightmares and horrible memories of his ex.

He is always closed off in a shell of rude and mean persona to avoid any type of emotions and feelings.He is a student right now and also works part time at a bakery. His best friend Vestin has been a great support during his hard time who has absolutely made sure to keep the boy safe and healthy. Sometimes Vestin can be protective but overall he has a goofy personality around Evelyn. Vestin can be stern at times when he thinks that Evelyn is acting like a brat which is quite common as he is the only one person that Evelyn trusts enough to be comfortable around otherwise he gets really nervous and scared around other people especially dominant men who makes him feel small and helpless in front of their huge muscles and powerful auras.

What happens when this rude cutie stumbles upon a hot but a gentleman Nathan Parkour who only wants to save Evelyn from his bad past and himself? What will Evelyn do when he finds himself loving the gentle treatment of the man whom he comes to love and the safety provided in Nathan's words and loving touches ?

Read to find out 😉😉😉😉😉

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Hello lovely readers

so here are the characters as how I imagined them .

* hot but also cute story

* not hate towards anything or anyone

* warning before mature content will be given (not that it will matter)

* if something makes you uncomfortable please skip

* there can be mistakes ( cause I am only a human)

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* the story contains mature language, smut , cursing, bdsm scenes and a lot of cute stuff

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ENJOYYYYY**………………

CHAPTER 1 (Evelyn has a date )

Evelyn's pov.

"Come on now , why won't you pick up the call " I was so frustrated by my best friend who was busy doing God knows what and was not bothering to answer his phone .

The thing was that pretty me had a date today which was making me extra nervous because I didn't knew what was I going to wear and it was freaking me the **** out. My date would be here to pick me up around seven in the evening and it was already one in noon.

"Fucking finally Ves , Where the hell were you ? Atleast look at your fucking phone you God damm idiot . " I started shouting as soon as I heard Vestin on the phone . I was starting to breathe heavily for a second due to all the yelling I did.

Vestin calmly listened to me talk or rather yell at him for a while before there was silence. Vestin might be rubbing his nose bridge for a second and then said in a raspy voice " There now sweety , there are too many bad words in a sentence hmm? Calm down and breathe " ,he knew that I will only listen when he uses this voice which he knew worked when he heard my soft voice .

"sorry ves , i was just freaking out for a while and you are still not here"I was nervous, it was really clear from the way I was rushing my words which was a habit Ves knew about.

" okay , wait for me , I will be there in a while . drink some water will you? " saying this the line went dead indicating that the phone was disconnected.

I drank some water just as I was instructed and waited for my best friend to show up. After about 20 minutes I heard the bell going off means that Vestin was here .

I quickly jumped off the couch I was sitting on and ran towards the door immediately tackling Ves with a big hug and a kiss to his cheek. He gently lowered me to the floor and pecked my forehead. I was such a sucker for forehead kisses.

Ves was wearing just some white shirt and loose sweatshirt looking so God like. " come on please, I need help " I dragged him towards my room to ask him what I should wear because let me tell y'all that Ves is a pro at fashion. He can literally pull off a trash bag in the best way.

" you are overly excited for this date of your Eve. You don't even know the guy that much for Christ's sake. How can I be so sure he is not some creepy asshole" Ves said in his protective voice that I knew too well by now but I can't help but shut him up because this was the 100th time he was talking shit about Henry .

" you won't say this again okay , he is not that kind of person so chill. It's all going to be fine " I told him and went back to my closet to pick out some clothes to show him. Ves was quiet for a while and then said in an assuring manner" Whatever man, I will be here for ya if you need me , but still be careful okay . He doesn't sound that good to me ". I really love when Ves cares for me because honestly he was the only one I have, to cherish but sometimes his possesive behaviour just makes me feel like a child who needs constant care.

"Thanks Ves , you are the best really." I smiled at my best friend and resumed changing my clothes to something casual but attractive. I am not going there to impress him with my dressing style...... okay maybe but I am not trying that hard you know .

I came out with a black t shirt and black skinny jeans with a white fluffy jacket on my arm and also picked up my white timberlands on the way out of the closet to show Ves.

"Here is what I got, should I show you how I look and maybe we can change something if it's not good? " I asked with an unsure tone which was actually telling how nervous i was.

Ves looked at my outfit from the bed and gestured me to change into it while he was scrolling on his phone. Now , he is my best friend so I don't have any problem changing in front of him ,it's not like he has never seen me n@ked before.

After changing my shirt i removed the sweatpants clinging to my legs and immediately heard the whistle from Ves which made me roll my eyes at him . "you got an @ss Eve. round , plump and perfect . Hey , does it jiggle? " Ves said in a curious voice and I jumped at his question scrunching my nose at his silliness .

" Don't you dare Ves last time I let you check that you spanked me and it hurts man . So, no you are not going to touch it" I said in a calm voice but what he said next made me whimper because no matter how bubbly and sweet he is , whenever he use that tone i am a goner and comply to all his wishes . Maybe I know that he will never hurt me that's why my body has no issues to follow his commands.

"come and bend on my knees Evelyn, you've got 5 seconds" Ves said in a demanding tone which made me shiver. I slowly made my way over to him and laid down on his thighs . Truly speaking he can be a sweetheart and a devil at the same time so I sometimes like to call him my sweet devil.

Ves removed my black boxers and rubbed on the skin underneath. I made a noise in my throat which earned me a pinch . " you know Eve, I have always loved your @ss. It's so soft and squishyyyyyy" He gushed at my @ss while massaging it and making me sigh in content. I jumped when his bigger hand landed on my left @sscheek making me whimper and mewl .

" See, it jiggle , how cuteeee" Ves sounded like he was given a candy by someone and he can't stop eating it because it's so delicious. The next 5 slaps landed after that which were not really hard but hard enough to gather tears in my eyes and make me sniff from the pain .

" Aw, baby shh it will soon go away , shh shh sweetheart " Ves said in a caring voice which relaxed me but there was still stinging on my butt. He massaged the skin and blew cold air on the area which was so soothing.

" I love spanking this little butt of yours. And the fact that you respond so well makes it extra exiting" Ves said while rubbing my back . He said this everytime he spank me without any reason and I can't even imagine that times when I give him a reason .

Those are the worst time because he usually give me a time out or ground me for few days but when he is too angry and really want to punish me he would spank me 15 times exactly everytime. I am always crying or sometimes screaming when he is done and then he leaves me there without a word . He usually spank me in the evening so that he could come back to me at night when I am sleeping and apply cold gel on my butt and hug me to sleep . He is the most caring person I have ever met and i can't think of losing him one day.

After about an hour I wake up from my short nap and got ready . Ves told me to wear black shoes instead because white looks too perfect.

My date was at the door exactly on time. Ves bid me goodbye and told me to be careful and call him if something is wrong. I hope nothing goes wrong today. I want to enjoy my day and who knows may be get a boyfriend for myself.

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CHAPTER 2 (the odd behaviour)

Evelyn's pov.

I was so freaking nervous sitting in the passenger seat of Henry's sleek black car and the way he was rubbing his hand on my thigh was freaking me out. No doubt he is a nice guy but his touch was sending weird feelings down my spine and not the good kind.

"How old are you again sweetie?" Henry asked me in an extra sweet voice which made me cringe inside. " I am 24 years old" I replied softly . This man beside me scares me . Yes we have met a few times and texted each other but every time he is near me I feel so small and terrified.

Henry is 26 years old and stands 6'2 feet tall . He is muscular and has a sharp face with a perfect jawline . But honestly he doesn't appeal to me that much now that I start noticing his features from up close. I do like men with good physique but he was too big with his protruding muscles. The thing that makes me feel uncomfortable is his eyes. They were cold and stern without an ounce of emotion.It's like he doesn't have any soul inside. He keeps a frown on his face and never looks at me like he is actually willing to be with me , it's like there is this strange glint in his eyes which makes him seem cruel and evil. I don't even know why I agreed to go on a date with him, maybe I am too desperate for someone to love me .

We reached a well lit and beautiful House at the outskirts of the town. There were no houses in sight as far as one could look. I again got that odd feeling at the pit of my stomach that something was seriously going to be wrong. I got my phone out of my pocket and opened Vestin's contact to call him. As soon as I tried to press the call button my phone was snatched from my hand by Henry who was looking at the house but he had a frown on his face.

" Hey, give back my phone , I need to make a call" I said in a shaky voice because he was looking scary with my phone clutched in his hand . Suddenly, he threw my phone out the window of the car making me gasp in shock and fear. " You don't need that babe, I am right here so you should pay attention to me" Henry said in a menacing tone making me shudder . He had this really crazy look in his eyes which was enough for me to know that I am in deep shit.

He got out of the car and came towards my side opening the door for me to get out. I hesitated but got out eventually and held his bigger outstretched hand with my shaky one. He seemed to relish in the fact that he was making me scared which was clear from the smirk on his lips.

We entered the huge house in front of us and I looked at the interior. I was kept clean and well furnished with a few book shelves in the living room , a tv on the wall , and a grey set of couches. The kitchen area was connected to the living room .

I didn't get to turn back because I was harshly shoved in the nearest wall with my head hitting the hard surface making me wince in pain. Henry was in front of me with those scary eyes looking at my face like he had won a trophy of some sort .

His one hand pinned both my hands over my head while his other hand went under my shirt resting at my back just near my butt. I looked at him with wide fearful eyes. His smirk turned evil within seconds and his next words made me sweat and tremble.

" I finally have you in my grasp pretty thing. I will never let you go away from me " Henry said like he was stating facts . I looked at him like he was out of his mind and tried to push him off of me but my attempts were futile because my strength was no match in front of him.

" Henry what are you saying, let go of me right now. You are scaring me . Get away" I got angry at his aggressive behaviour and pushed at his stomach with my knees. " You are such a fucking creep , get the f_uck away from me " I yelled at him which did nothing in my favour as I soon found myself on the cold floor with a red handprint on my cheek while Henry was standing over me with an angry expression on his face.

" You will not raise your voice at me you dirty piece of shit.Now listen to me carefully.You will stay in this house as long I wish and you will obey whatever I will tell you to do if you want to stay alive" Henry said in an angry tone while gripping my jaw in a tight hold. Tears gathered in my eyes and fell down my cheeks which made Henry grin even more.

" Next time will be more than this if you misbehave in any way. I will keep an eye on you all that time and don't forget your place in this house. You are just a plaything for me nothing else" Henry told me and went towards the kitchen to drink water because I heard the tap running .His words hurt but what terrified me was the meaning of his words . This man had literally kidnapped me with my own will and he is planning to keep me locked in this house far away from the city and Vestin for God knows how long.

I was pretty sure my life is going to be living hell. I cursed myself for getting in such a situation with no way out because the house was surrounded by big and scary bodyguards who have guns.

Tears fell from my eyes non stop thinking about what I got myself into . I thought about my old life , about Vestin . I have no idea when I will see him or if i will ever be able to see him ever again.

I sobbed on the floor in fear and pain . I don't know what this man will make me do but the way he was speaking to me he is actually going to treat me like his doll .

I have seen many documentaries to know how my life is going to turn after this. I will be stuck in this house until I have a way to escape which seems impossible.

I hope God will have mercy on me and someone will save me from this demon of a man.

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