I RS-XIN the ruler of the immotals and even god cannot match my strength.AGE 1600BC 40 yrs old.

''MAHAL LEON'' brother I just enter into immortal realem, '' rs-xin'' good my litlle brother now i will tell u how will u can inhert my moves specially made by me, ''mahal'' hahah!! now i can also stand with u brother, ''rs-xin '' lil bro u always stand by my side.

NOTE [ ] EVERYTHING THAT WILL WRITTEN IN BRACKETS WILL BE IN CHARACTERS MIND THOUGHT WHICH THEY THOUGHT OF ,and <> these are the emotions leaking from the character.

''RS-XIN '' [ this is my lil bro that i found in the east alkama empire he is also martial art master but his parrent6 disinherted him that time found and got pity on him and take with me ], what guys are u talking about ''mahal'' MISS

we were talking about i just entered in immortal stage ''DEESI MINIS '' wow intresting i just gold level only how envious of u ''RS'' dont be upset dear u can also be immortal stage very soon [DEESI is my lover she is with me when i defeated east fire lord ] ''DEESI' what are u thinking dear ''RS'' nothing just it like we meet tommorow , ''deesi'' hahaa! .

severent1- sir the time has come every one is asking for u , '' RS'' yeah coming right way comeon deesi and mahal lets go to the area all freinds are wating there , ''deesi'' yes yes we all prepare a special gift .

at banquet ''RS'' hlo my freind u all are my patner in ruling the whole empire shall we make a toast , ''DEESI' dear close your eye we have the gift ,''RS'' why i have to close eye ''DEESI'' just close it , ''RS'' ok ok see closed my eye now what < IN PAIN SUDDENLY data-tomark-pass > eyes open see a sword is stabed in his body total 4 sword and all of them are his partner and next two sword stab by his beloved and his lil bro , ''RS'' why u all betray me what i have done i care u all ''MAHAL'' care hahaa!!! it was all are plan when u defeat fire lord that time we paln this haaa!!!! , but DEESI u also '' DEESI' i never loved u i always loved MAHAL we thought of this plan because we want GOD DEVIL STONE .

DEESI and MAHAL get close and kiss each other then try to take the stone but suddenlly 'RS'' u will never live happy its my cure and for stone my instintc were right that time when ***LIN  told me that u hide the stone ***thatswhy i hid it in deep that no one can find it hahaaa!!! as for me i can also dont caught by u aaaaaaa!!!! \, ''MAHAL'' such a strong force if we dont do any thing then we all can be die suddnely RS jump out of villa and go to the valley he made .

AFTER ONE HOUR - ''RS'' they  WANT STONE they never will get it , it seems my time came < in pain data-tomark-pass > in this life i always have regret not save the persons which i loved most and now i am dying in this pain if i have another  chance i will definetly save them < in pain data-tomark-pass > suddenly stone which he hide in deep somewhere appear in front of him and say i will grant your request but live happly .

hen < crooco data-tomark-pass > suddenly RS open his eye saw theyare  his stepbrothers coming to bulling him in the same morning [ did i really get reincarnated ] , CE-XIN second brother of xin clan ,''CE'' get up u halfass brother '' RS'' suddenly brother what this age pls tell me ''CE'' haha!!! it look like i beat u badlly tommorow thats why u lost ur memory hahaha!! ''RS'' tell me which age is this ''CE '' just momment and tell the this age is.. 1565

''RS'' hahah i realy travel time back i am now 5 yrs old enough to start my culltivation and pay them back [wait for me i will get my revenge and also save my friends ] ****

I RS-XIN really time travel and come back to the my young self , this time i will never will again fall for their trick and i will get my revenge [ but its really ok for take revenge last life i only live for taking revenge on my parents death and lost every thing what should i do this time] .

after some time of thinking - diddnt reach the counculison \, ''RS'' lets first stabilized my cultivation and go and take the stone \,if i think its on the top of the dark valley and protected by divine beast but in my last life i luckly take the stone when divine beast is not there when my uncle throw me in the valley \, but first start the cultivation .

in my last life i only learn sword art and magic art thats why my body not that strong to take the blow of body cultivation of gold stage even i am immortal and above that i tell him to learn that because its not achive by every one because people think that its not strong and flashy but its not true , if i think that its was start with basic practice lets do this in this life i will master the BODY AND SWORD CULTIVATION BOTH .****

*MEDIDATION STARTS ALMOST 15 MIN... LATER**, in the meditator area its the books that i last time mstered why they all are here it means that i dont have do extra work regarding finding the books but < little sad data-tomark-pass > it will be alright that i dont have to find the stone but it will not happen < hhh.. data-tomark-pass >,*

first lets start with the this 8 SWORD ART , lets start the first step.... after first time ... oossh now my cultivation stabilized at level one but its not enough i have find some elixir so that i can step forward if i think in the backyard there are mistic grass low level but it will help lets start aftersome time it sucdded to break through two and three level its almost noon lets go to in the mountain i can now handel level 2 beast with my body cultivation of level 3 and with eight sword step  lets go ... at the forest mountain ... lets enter in the forrest ,hmmm i find the sony flower it will help me to another step of body cultiviton lets take .... [hmm.. its nothing seems right why the flower is there and where is spider beast who take care of the beast and also beast will at least level 4 beast ] hhh... there is some noise is coming lets see its a girl and spider beast but it is at least level 5 it will almost immposible to beat if i am there and it also look like the girl is also havin have tough time , lets go its not my problem i have got the flower .... girl is fighting with beast and suddenly beast use fake and almost come to kill the girl ""girl"" its seems like i dont have time to avade it, suddenly clank noise came when the girl open is eyes "RS'' are u alright hahaa its seem my entry like hero ''girl'' hmm.. who are u and why are u here ''RS'' ehhh its the first word to ask to the person who save u ahhh.. but i am good hearted i will tell u my name hear my name is RS - XIN ''girl'' thank you for saving but retreat from here u are no match for the beast ''RS'' ooo stupid girl ''girl'' stupiddd.. iam telling u for your own good ''RS'' oo then what about you u almost had your arm broken ''girl'' iam alright u go ''rs'' suddenly take the girl and lift and says if we cannot we then run for it......... ''BEAST'' < not know what happen data-tomark-pass > 'girl'' why do u help me ''RS'' hmmm becuse of flower we can share the flower ''girl'' but its was there were beast was not there u can take and run away ''RS'' hmmm u ask to many question its seems ike best is still chasing hmm if i remmber corectly then we will use a bait to take down the beast can u do this '' girl'' who thhe person u are saying.. ''RS'' then its settle lets start .. ''RS'' comeone beast lets have party aaaaaahaa clank clanc suddenly girl attack ''RS'' [eee its sems like beast is known that we will attck from both side it is danger i have to stop its semms it to late what i do] suddenly girl also realized but its to late ''girl''[hmmRS h its seems its short period but i like your character its better not tell him... but is to late..] suddenly girl think why do not i ge a hit and open her eye and see that RS is slashed by beast... and his body flying but also beast body is damage by RS attack but ... ''girl'' run and catch the body , are u stupid ''RS'' hahaa... its seems like my last time come[ its seem this life about to end but i dont have regret that i help her ] ''girl'' are u really dont talk i will sve u u wait here.. i will come with the help '' RS'' dont go if i will be saved will u be girlfriend.. ''girl '' u idiot first i will save u then i promise i will deafinetly be your GF.. ''RS'' haha thankyou.... suddenly a shadow master id there ''GIRL'' pls master save him pls master... ''' master'' ok i will save  him but why u associate with himm ''GIR'' hmmm ''master' lets leave the topic lets save him.....aftersome time ... RS is sleping in the lap of girl and is almost next morning ''MASTER'' lets leave ''girl'' little bit time.. pls.. master... ''RS'' hmm '' GIRL'' its seems u alright i have to go but i will deafinetly.. your GF when u come to my palace.. oo i didnt tell u my name  right ,,. ''RS'' hmm its seems like hmmwhat are ur name its seems like iam again going sleep.. hahaa!!!

**''GIRL''**

MY NAME IS........... ******

IN FOREST MORNING 

''RS'' awake slowly where the girl go and what she saying ..... hummmm...               [ aaaaaaa she is telling her name whats were her name aaaa i forgot aaaaa... ahmm what is in my hand it look like a ring and seems very costly aaaaaa..... this space ring and this very high quality it can store almost all village but hows that girl  have it and seems there is a crest i have seen this crest but were aaaa. not able to remember where i have seen this lets search for later first i have to go village hmmm.. lets first store herbs in the ring its seems have special function lets try it invisible ahah it really gone but i can feel < in pain > why ring absorb my blood its seems ring has some spiritual power and accepted me as a master lets go village first ].

VILLAGE   

              ''CLE - XIN ''  where are u ''RS-XIN''  ''PAC -XIN'' dont ask father this idiot punish him for not comming home in time < smile sadist> '' RS'' ooo why i have to take your advice to go out haa.. i can do what i want and iam the head of the the this house and u order me to do what i do haa.. ''CLE'' [ why he say something like this he never say something like this before what happen last night   GI-XIN also saying something that he change i didnt  take the word seriously lers see first ] thats not it rs we didnt mean like this we all are worried ''RS'' haa.. worried and here my older sister saying to punish me ''PAC'' so what haa.. and u are not master of this house my father and ur uncle is the master of this house ''RS'' oooo is this right uncle if i clearly remember that father name all the xin property is mine name and older sis saying that this is all yours are starting rebel haaa.. if u start rebel then iam affraid that i have  to tell this word to the 1st elder lets talk to the elder CLE uncle ''PAC'' aaa so what ''CLE'' gaurds take the mis to the home [ this brat really change now giving me warning of elder thats right 1st elder always pampering him we cannot take the risk before i take the my plan to take over the house ] lets come my child there is all elders are watting for u in hall ''RS'' yes i will come first let me change the dress of mine ''CLE'' ok ,

after sometime '' CE-XIN and GI-XIN '' yo rs are u alright can u cultivate now hahaaa.. ""GI'' ce brother dont bully big brother after all what he can not cultivate he is  the leader of the house ''CE '' hahaa from now on u are not leader because u can not cultivate and if u cannot cultivate no one favour u  hahaaa ur mother also b8**** and u also ''RS'' < angry> ooo and who u are taking the property of cousion are u ******** hahaaa ''CE'' u i will kill u ''GI'' yes brother kill him ''RS'' it seems u are really idiot come i will take care of u because i have to in hall if i will not go because of u your father in tough position haaaaha ''GI'' brother he right first lets wait for him to fail then we can take care of him ''CE'' u escape today but lets fall down u first hen we will take care of u... hahaaa.. lets go lil bro.

''RS' in last life when i attain the power i came and destroy all of them with the without mercy that was really satisfing but i have to take care of the elder to not see that i will cultivate because i have to go dark valley because in my current strength i can not go alone first they have to kiddnap me in night when i am sleping and left me in the valley but how can i decive the eye of elder aa i rember that girl ring can help to hid my cultivitation lets try out hmmssmm it really work i realy got nice GF but first have to grow strong and come for u , lets go in hall first .

in the hall all 5 elder are sitting '' RS'' gretting to elders ''1ST ELDER '' its alright child lets start without any late to test can u cultivate ''3rd elder'' its seems u cannot cultivate why do test 1st elder ''RS'' its seems elder have divine eye right first elder ''1st elder '' hahaaa.. its seems like ''RS'' [ only 1st elder always take my care in last life when i came to revenge the 1st elder donot fight me and says its my fault kill me ] 1st elder but it is right that i can not cultivate but i dont eant to give the position because it not nessary that i have to cultivate if u all dont semms right than at least give my fathers house i dont want to participate ''3rdelder'' why would we give if u cannot cultivate ''RS'' elder donnt be to much gredy it will backfire u only right uncle u can at least u can give me home right or u want me to starve in road .. ''PAC '' why we have give thats my mothers house u are orphon we donnt give any single of the land all lands are mine u are nothing ''RS'' ooo its seems thats uncle wish but if i remeber that ur dad come to fathers house and all the  thing are fathers even the elder cannot participate then how u all here to disscus the position of household its seems that u all herebecause of my uncle ''UNCLE'' thats not case RS i will backoff ''SIO-XIN'' why we have to give the household    '' uncle'' shsss shutup first ''RS'' its seems that u all take as ur property but u all forget that this property in my name thats why u all can not do any thing hahaaa.. ''1st elder'' [its seems they harash badly to RS ]  then its settle that the household is RS .

''RS'' thankyou elder then i take my leave then

a voice came i dont aggree to this ............ ''RS'' here come last person i want to see my fiance  RAI -BAI