YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND
Chapter 0: Birthday present
Author Verga
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Laxus Fwenzie
I DONT LIKE HER OKAY!? SHE JUST A POOR GIRL WHO ALWAYS WANT MY ATTENTION! (SHOUT)
Kylee Smight
Just why dont you just give her another change bro, maybe you will fall for her HAHAHA
Laxus Fwenzie
SHOUT UP KYLEE!
Kylee Smight
Woa woa okay okay..i stop..what a temper (in low voice)
Ziely Mie Cañe
'who are they talking to?'
Kylee Smight
yeah yeah whatevery...(rolled ayes)
William ashton
kylee you look like a gay..
Kylee Smight
tsk! anyway lets go find axcel, i might ganna die here if i dont get out..
Kylee Smight
grab her shoulder and run*
William ashton
o-ohh f*ck it! s-stop d*mn!
Ziely Mie Cañe
'there gone?'
Ziely Mie Cañe
'now this is my change'
Ziely Mie Cañe
enter his office*
Laxus Fwenzie
What the f*ck are you doing here!?
Ziely Mie Cañe
a-amm...ah.i-i heard that your birthday is today s-so i brought you s-some c-cak------
Laxus Fwenzie
SCRAM! I dont need your f*cking cake so get out!
Ziely Mie Cañe
'no i need to be brave you can do it ziely!'
Ziely Mie Cañe
l-laxus i especially made this c-cake for you i stay up late at ni-----
Laxus Fwenzie
I DONT CARE! just get out..i dont want to hear your f*cking disgusting voice within a second its make me vomit!
Ziely Mie Cañe
'i know you dont like me but can you somehow show some respect to me as a girl? im also i human i can also hurt just like you'
she want to say it to his face but she choose to silent
Laxus Fwenzie
why are you still? I said get out before i lost my patience here
Ziely Mie Cañe
I-i just want y-you to taste my cake th----
Laxus Fwenzie
i said leave❄
Laxus Fwenzie
look at her emotionless*
Ziely Mie Cañe
'come on self! dont be weak to him!'
Ziely Mie Cañe
i wont get out unless you wont accept my cake for you..(brave)
Ziely Mie Cañe
look at his ayes*
Ziely Mie Cañe
'omay im melting!'
Laxus Fwenzie
Can you please just get out? I really hate a women who don't understand me, so now get out
Ziely Mie Cañe
Please Laxus just accept my cake then i get out or just wish anything i will gladly grand it just for you..please
Laxus Fwenzie
d*mn..cant you even inderstand me!? i said GET OUT! OUT!
Ziely Mie Cañe
'why is he so harsh to me....i just want her love thats all..is it wrong to love him?'
Ziely Mie Cañe
p-please Laxus i promise i do anything please..
Ziely Mie Cañe
its okay if you dont accept my cake...but please just wish then i grand it...i really love you..
Laxus Fwenzie
look at her with disguting look*
Ziely Mie Cañe
'does he really hate me so much that he would look at me like a trash?'
Ziely Mie Cañe
tears ayes*
Ziely Mie Cañe
yes! yes!..i will, just say a wish..i will gladly grand it..(happy)
Ziely Mie Cañe
'did he just say yes? did he?'
Ziely Mie Cañe
omay gosh.then what do you wishing at?
Ziely Mie Cañe
excited/happy*
But...my smile fade away when i heard his pain words.
Laxus Fwenzie
then...... I wish you will stop chasing me and leave me alone don't show your face anymore and pretend that you don't know me❄
Ziely Mie Cañe
started to fall her tears*
Ziely Mie Cañe
w-why? (pitiful)
Laxus Fwenzie
why? Tsk its simple i hate the girl who push her self just get my attention and girl who is desperate of everything, you know you just wasting your time to me why don't you just do your business? And don't mind others?❄
Ziely Mie Cañe
come back to sense*
Ziely Mie Cañe
'yeah Why did i mind my own business and leave them alone? How st*p*d im i HAHAHA im so pity!'
Ziely Mie Cañe
wipe tears and look at him with sadness face*
Ziely Mie Cañe
change to cold one*
Ziely Mie Cañe
'And he was right i waste my time on him haystt i really pity my self tho.'
Ziely Mie Cañe
your right...why did i waste my time to you? Maybe because i do really loves you and thats the reason why i became a desperate b***h?
Ziely Mie Cañe
you can't blame me why im like this im just inlove but.
Ziely Mie Cañe
.haystt looks like this is it...i thinl its time to stop this stupidy thing!
Ziely Mie Cañe
'i already hurting my self i think its time'
Laxus Fwenzie
ayes wide but act like he didn't*
Laxus Fwenzie
look at her*
Ziely Mie Cañe
wipe tears*
Ziely Mie Cañe
i think im done...im sorry for this past few months i been disturbing you...
Ziely Mie Cañe
i hope you could forgive me with my action...
Ziely Mie Cañe
i was really blind..that i didn't notice that i been pestering you and disturbing you yhis past few months..so i hope you would forgive me with my stupid action.
Ziely Mie Cañe
any way thank you...you'd awake me form a sad reality..and sorry again..bye..
Ziely Mie Cañe
hope you will be happy (in a low voice)
Laxus Fwenzie
touch his chest*
Laxus Fwenzie
'this is it...she will going to stop me finally but....why in the h*ll im felling this sh*t!?'
Laxus Fwenzie
'nah..it most be because im over working..thats why its hurt like hell..i should have break time..'
Ziely Mie Cañe
tomorrow morning no one will be able to irritate you the woman who is always chasing you
Ziely Mie Cañe
and there is no woman who will always say goodmorning to you when you come in and say hello to you
Ziely Mie Cañe
'That's a promise ... because the woman you always tried to drive away is so tired.
Ziely Mie Cañe
That even if you say hurtful words, he still won't stop, but now that I'm tired .... I hope one day you will see my worth more laxus'
Ziely Mie Cañe
'i will do what you said i will stop chasing you, cause from now on i will take care of my self now...
Ziely Mie Cañe
l'll Ziely Mie Cañe official signing off of LAXUS FWENZIE i will find a guy who will love me as who im i...a guy that will understand me and a guy who will respect me.. I will wait for that guy
Ziely Mie Cañe
I will stop chasing him as his wish, YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND
-FEMALE LEAD-
Name: Ziely Mie Cañe
Age: 19
known as a b!tch because she always chase laxus the campus crush of all the girl dream.
4months of chasing Laxus fwenzie the owner of Lexical university.
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CHAPTER 1: Thank you mom
Name: Laxus Fwenzie
Age: 19
The heir of the fwenzie family, owner of the Lexical university, campus crush, have a greek god face, but have a cold personality.
ringgg! ringg! (alarm clock')
Ziely Mie Cañe
go to the bathroom*
Ziely Mie Cañe
done changing clothes*
Ziely Mie Cañe
go downstairs*
Ziely Mie Cañe
go to the kitchen*
Ziely Mie Cañe
Goodmorning mom
Ziely Mie Cañe
kiss her cheek*
Anen Zyie Cañe
goodmorning sweetie (kiss her cheeks also)
Anen Zyie Cañe
ohh i notice that you didn't get up early to bake your crush cookies..
Ziely Mie Cañe
not anymore...cause from now on...i will get up early not to make him breakfast or cookies but to help you...(smile)
Anen Zyie Cañe
turn around*
Anen Zyie Cañe
Ziely..can you be honest to me? did you cry last night?
Anen Zyie Cañe
serious look*
Ziely Mie Cañe
'will i tell her what happen? shes my mother after all its normal to know her what i been doing and....i also want to share my pain..maybe mom ganna help me'
Ziely Mie Cañe
tell everthing*
Anen Zyie Cañe
you can find a rightful man to you Ziely, so don't immerse yourself in him,
Anen Zyie Cañe
at first I wanted to tell you to stop what you doing but when I saw you making cookies and breakfast with him I saw the joy on your face and didn't want to lose it thats why
Anen Zyie Cañe
I helped you instead because I love you my child (gently cares her face)
Ziely Mie Cañe
started to tears her ayes*
Ziely Mie Cañe
wipe and smile brightly*
Ziely Mie Cañe
'how lucky im i...i got my mother who support me with all her heart..im so lucky to have a mother like her'
Ziely Mie Cañe
cry* t-thank you mommy!....you made my day
Anen Zyie Cañe
shhnow my child...dont cry..
Anen Zyie Cañe
mm now lets stop this dramatic scene..you will be late so lets eat
Anen Zyie Cañe
here eat more
Ziely Mie Cañe
mom! i cant eat that much!
Anen Zyie Cañe
chuckle* okay okay...just eat already😊
Anen Zyie Cañe
bye sweetie..take care
Anen Zyie Cañe
my baby is grown up (smile)
G1: Ghurl look oh..Ziely is here, i bet she ganna bother Babe laxus again 🙄
G2: yeah right ghrul! tsk! she indeed a sl*t
G3: hey she might ganna hear us!
Ziely Mie Cañe
emotionless*
Ziely Mie Cañe
'ignore them Ziely..ignore them there not worth it!'
Ziely Mie Cañe
walk inside*
Ziely Mie Cañe
saw Laxus walking toward me*
G1: laxus is here im sure she will pestering him again.
G2: yeah! that sl*t!
Ziely ignore Laxus presence and continue walking
Ziely Mie Cañe
already gone*
Kylee Smight
woahh! look laxus did you see that!? Ziely just ignore you..she didn't even bother you this time, thats...new
Laxus Fwenzie
'didn't see that coming..'
William ashton
yeah she use to greet you when she see you...did something happen?
Axcel Costivano
probably acting, i know she just acting to ignore you but deep in her inside she want to seduce laxus for sure
William ashton
yeah! Ziely was so inlove to you so, maybe she was really acting
Kylee Smight
HAHAHA she indeed are shameless ha? HAHAHA
Laxus Fwenzie
Can you three shut uo!? your so noisy!
enter his office, and slam the door hard
William ashton
whats his problime!?
Ziely Mie Cañe
GOOD MORNING CLASSMATES 😊
G1: goshh my day was ruin by her! uaghhh!
G2: hey b!tch why dont you just d!e? ha hahahaha
Ziely Mie Cañe
go to Nicole table*
Vannesa
ohh the sl*t is here..(smirk)
Ziely Mie Cañe
amm c-can i borrow nicole for a while? im just wanna talk to her..
Vannesa
tsk! oh nicole my dear do you agree?
Nicole zyie Montarvo
rolled ayes*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
tsk! what do you want!?
Ziely Mie Cañe
c-can i talk to you?
Nicole zyie Montarvo
you can say it here...tsk!
Ziely Mie Cañe
no its a private, and its important please just a min
Nicole zyie Montarvo
no i dont want to hear you trashy voice..
Ziely Mie Cañe
'ouch thats hurt...alot'
Ziely Mie Cañe
or second please..
Nicole zyie Montarvo
cant you even understand me? i dont want to talk to you within a second its make me sick yuck!
Ziely Mie Cañe
felling sad*
Ziely Mie Cañe
go to her chair and sit on it*
Ziely Mie Cañe
look at the outside*
Ziely Mie Cañe
'nicole...when we will still going to be like this? i miss the old nicole i know...this is not her...i miss her so much'
Ziely Mie Cañe
tears fall*
EVERYONE: Good morning ma'am
Teacher
okay now sit down, so for today blah blah blah blah..
kringgg! kringgg! (bell ring)
Teacher
Okay class dismiss
Ziely Mie Cañe
'even thought nicole wont talk to me..i wont give up..'
Ziely Mie Cañe
(took a big breath) you can do it! (in the low voice)
Nicole zyie Montarvo
what now!? (irritates)
Ziely Mie Cañe
hi vannesa and nicole can i join you at the cafeterria?
Ziely Mie Cañe
' i want to make it clear, why is she become like this?'
Vannesa
HAHAHAH did you hear what she said? She want to join to eat with us Hahah She must be crazy, a crazy s***t
all of the student are laugh to her
Ziely Mie Cañe
look at nicole*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
look away*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
walk away*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
leave*
Ziely Mie Cañe
w-why is this?
Ziely Mie Cañe
'i just want to know why she was like that...why is it so hard to pleased her? did i make a mistake?'
Ziely Mie Cañe
'...okay fine..i already said my said that i will take care of myself'
Ziely Mie Cañe
'then why in the h*ll im i doing!?'
Ziely Mie Cañe
'i should really stop now..maybe the old nicole, protective one and the loving one is gone'
Ziely Mie Cañe
'maybe she really forget our happinies memory in the past'
Ziely Mie Cañe
'stupid me..'
Ziely Mie Cañe
maybe i should really stop doing this sh*t
Ziely Mie Cañe
Walk inside*
G1: shes here..is sue going to seduce laxus again?
G2: maybe not...i heard that she didn't bother laxus this morning..isn't miracle?
G3: tsk! maybe she was just putting an act..but deep in her inside she want to r*pe laxus HAHAHA
Ziely Mie Cañe
looking at the available table*
Ziely Mie Cañe
'oh the campus crush was also here....no wonder...student were talking bad about me'
Ziely Mie Cañe
walk to the available table, sit dowm and eat*
G2: look she didn't bother laxus...did you see that!?
G1: Can you shut your voice is so irritable!
Ziely Mie Cañe
'can they just mind there own business? like what i did? this is what they want right? stop being a stupid dog who chase that f*c*ing guy!'
Ziely Mie Cañe
continue eating*
Ziely Mie Cañe
class is over...now lets go~
Ziely Mie Cañe
start walking*
Ziely Mie Cañe
looking for a taxi*
Ziely Mie Cañe
in XXXXX Building thank you..
Ziely Mie Cañe
keep the change (smile)
Ziely Mie Cañe
saw mom waiting for me*
Ziely Mie Cañe
why is my head so hurt!?
Ziely Mie Cañe
held my head*
Anen Zyie Cañe
Ziely here you are why are you l-----Ziely whats wrong...w--Zielyy! are you okay!?
Ziely Mie Cañe
vomit blood*
Anen Zyie Cañe
omay goshh! sweetie..oh god (calling ambulance)
Anen Zyie Cañe
there be here baby..baby? c-can you hear me? b-babay please dont scare mommy please..
Anen Zyie Cañe
baby..b..m....w.....d.d..d...
Ziely Mie Cañe
'why is it hurt so much?'
Ziely Mie Cañe
'im i going to d!e?'
Ziely Mie Cañe
'what about mom? whos ganna take care of her?'
Ziely Mie Cañe
'why cant i hear my mom...and'
Ziely Mie Cañe
lost consciousness*
Name: Nicole zyie Montarvo
Age: 19
Have a rich family, always bully ziely, ex bestfriend of Ziely.
have a cold personality, amazon girl, never fall inlove not even onces.
Author Verga
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CHAPTER 2: What's the truth?
Anen Zyie Cañe
Waiting in waiting area*
she cant calm down because of what happen of her daughter
2hours had past and the doctor come out finally
Anen Zyie Cañe
d-doc how's my daughter?
doctor
I'm sorry to say this mrs. Cañe, but the child's condition is getting worse and worse, and the medicine can't keep up...
doctor
that's why you need to think about what your decision is, at first you should have check her up so it will monitor her condition, but i think its to late to cure it
Anen Zyie Cañe
w-what? she have a illness? n-no impossible my child have no illness she was so healthy so its so impossible
Anen Zyie Cañe
begin to cry*
doctor
yes, she look strong and healthy
doctor
but deep in her inside the disease are slowy killing her without knowing
doctor
wait..your daughter come here last week and get check up, didn't she tell you?
Anen Zyie Cañe
w-what? My daughter come here?...but why didn't she tell m-me? (crying)
she ran to her daughter and hold her daughter hand gently and kissed it while crying
Anen Zyie Cañe
Z-ziely please...fight for your life im begging you..😭
Anen Zyie Cañe
dont l-leave mama..
Anen Zyie Cañe
your the only one i have..
Anen Zyie Cañe
i cant lose you like how i lose your sister and your father...please😭
Anen Zyie Cañe
sob....sob...sob
Ziely Mie Cañe
please? (puppy ayes)
Anen Zyie Cañe
sweetie the doctor said you have to rest so your condition wont get worse more...
Ziely Mie Cañe
i know...but..
Ziely Mie Cañe
its really importand please...dont worry after that i will back early please (puppy ayes)
Anen Zyie Cañe
okay..but first we need to talk to the doctor
Ziely Mie Cañe
thanks mom😘
Anen Zyie Cañe
mm now go changed you ganna be late
Ziely Mie Cañe
go yto the bathroom and changed*
Anen Zyie Cañe
take care okay? don't let your self go tired..
Anen Zyie Cañe
bye sweetie take care
Ziely Mie Cañe
already leave*
g1: look Ziely come back, i Thought she was transfer to another school?
g2: ughh why did she come back!?
g3: why can she just d!e!?
Ziely Mie Cañe
'dont worry i will d!e soon dont be excited'
Ziely Mie Cañe
GOOD MORNING CLASSMATE😊
G1: Oh ghod! why did she come back!? i thought she already transferred to another school!? was is it fake news!?
g2: maybe..tsk! thay b!tch ruin my day!
Ziely Mie Cañe
notice nicole staring at her*
Ziely Mie Cañe
look at her and smile*😊
Ziely Mie Cañe
'GO SELF! JUST TALK TO HER DONT BE NERVOUS HOO-'
Ziely Mie Cañe
walk toward her*
Ziely Mie Cañe
h-hi nicole!😊
Ziely Mie Cañe
Can i talk to you a min?
Nicole zyie Montarvo
rolled ayes*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
are you a gold?
she just ignore it and about to talk but the teacher was already arrives
Teacher
GOOD MORNING CLASS
she only have a 2weeks to live and the thing why she want to talk to nicole
is she want to make it clear why she was acting like that in the past 8years
she have an illness called 'plyintie' its has two kind of illness, (guys this illness is not real it doesn't exist in this world i just made it by my self hehehe hope you understand)
she get out of there classroom and started to find nicole
when she saw her she immediately call her
Ziely Mie Cañe
ran toward her*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
also rolled ayes*
Vannesa
tch! the wh*re is here🙄
she didn't mind and smile to them
Nicole zyie Montarvo
what!?
Ziely Mie Cañe
can i talk to you?
Nicole zyie Montarvo
wh-----
Ziely Mie Cañe
please follow me
Nicole zyie Montarvo
tch*🙄
Nicole zyie Montarvo
'whts this b!tch planning now?'
Nicole zyie Montarvo
follow*
-BACK AT THE LEXICAL UNIV-
there no people coming here so its perfect to talk to her
Nicole zyie Montarvo
also stop*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
what now!?
Ziely Mie Cañe
look at her*
But her smile vanish and started to cry
Nicole zyie Montarvo
h-hey! why are y-you crying at?
Ziely Mie Cañe
n-nicole...
Ziely Mie Cañe
i just want to clear it with you...
Ziely Mie Cañe
why are being like this? why are you being like that? it is really so easy to you to forget our lovely past memories?
Ziely Mie Cañe
nicole please tell me why?
Ziely Mie Cañe
tears ayes*
Ziely Mie Cañe
d-do you still remember the day when we laugh happliy, and the day when we always escape to school to go to tree park? do y-----
Nicole zyie Montarvo
STOP!!
Nicole zyie Montarvo
Look at her anger*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
yeah i still remember it all, but i know all of it was just an act and a lie, why because you were a gold digger!
Ziely Mie Cañe
w-what do you m-mean?
Nicole zyie Montarvo
smirk*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
you want to know?
Nicole zyie Montarvo
Fine..i treat you as my real sister i treat you as my best friend my family.
Nicole zyie Montarvo
.but why? Why should I be the only victim?
Nicole zyie Montarvo
Then you will ask what did you do to stay away from you?
Nicole zyie Montarvo
That's because you used me!
Nicole zyie Montarvo
You befriended me because of my money right?
Ziely Mie Cañe
N-no i-its now tru-----
Nicole zyie Montarvo
stop! I don't want to hear you f**k* a lie!
Nicole zyie Montarvo
Mom is right you are a flirty and gold d*gger! So don't pretend you don't know!
Nicole zyie Montarvo
started to cry*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
tears fall down at her cheeks*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
wipe it*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
sometimes I also think....have I become such a bad friend to treat me like this?
Nicole zyie Montarvo
y-you make a friend of me b-because of my m-money? sob..
Ziely Mie Cañe
No thats not true..
Nicole zyie Montarvo
sarcarstic laught*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
HAHAHA what? wht kind of stupid reason you will used to fool me ha?
Ziely Mie Cañe
yes, i im poor but i never make a friend with you just because of money, were poor but i never cheat anybody, nicole you know who im i..
Nicole zyie Montarvo
No! My mom said you're a gold d*gger and s**t! She give me a lot picture that you kissing a lot of men and sleep with it, i hate you! I really hate you!!
Nicole zyie Montarvo
shout madly*
Ziely Mie Cañe
tears syartes to fall down*
Ziely Mie Cañe
a-and you believe it? (trebling)
Nicole zyie Montarvo
cant speak*
Ziely Mie Cañe
i understand...maybe it's like this, what else can i do? I don't have any evidence to make you believe me...sob* but no matter how much you insult me, I still love you as a sister
Nicole zyie Montarvo
shock*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
'why im i hurt? n-no dont fall for her trap...dont fall for it'
CLINGGG! CLINGGG! (bell ring)
Nicole zyie Montarvo
wipe her tears*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
about to leave but she stop her*
Ziely Mie Cañe
b-before you go...c-can i hug you? Don't worry when it's over, i won't disturbed you anymore 😊
Nicole zyie Montarvo
n-----
Ziely Mie Cañe
hug her tight*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
surprise*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
cant speak*
Ziely Mie Cañe
t-thank you...i promise this is the last hug you will get (tears fall down)
I hope if you find the truth you wont regret it, goodbye nicole.-----Ziely
after she leave nicole she was now heading at the dean office, she heard to the doc and her mother that she cant be live anymore, there no cure and only two weeks to live so she will quit to school
Ziely Mie Cañe
heading at the dean office*
but...she was so unlucky that she meet Laxus and his friend while walking toward her, so she decided to ignore it
Kylee Smight
w-wait Ziely!
Ziely Mie Cañe
stop turn around*
Kylee Smight
where are you heading?
Ziely Mie Cañe
the dean office why?❄
Kylee Smight
oh nothing..oh yeah...its a good thing that you didn't chase laxus now..what happen?
Ziely Mie Cañe
amm nothing it just i got tired of my stupid doing..❄
Ziely Mie Cañe
so...i go now..bye❄
Laxus Fwenzie
'she didn't even look at me...why is it so hurt!?'
Nicole zyie Montarvo
.....
Ziely Mie Cañe
b-before you go...c-can i hug you? Don't worry when it's over, i won't disturbed you anymore😊
Nicole zyie Montarvo
' i cant understand my self..why do i feel like that hug is a last hug that i can get!?'
Nicole zyie Montarvo
'why do i feel hurt when she hug me? why do i feel like she was saying goodbye to me using hug?'
Nicole zyie Montarvo
raggg! i cant understand my self anymore!
Nicole zyie Montarvo
mess her hair*
Nicole zyie Montarvo
who im ganna believe at!?
Nicole zyie Montarvo
my mom or her?
Nicole zyie Montarvo
'actually i really miss her a lot.....but because of what she did haustt i dont know anymore'
Nicole zyie Montarvo
I want to know the truth! I just hope that she saying the truth, i really hope.
Nicole zyie Montarvo
just what is the truth amd a lie?
Author Verga
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