Hello guys, this is my first time writing a novel.
Actually I am not a writer, I just wanted to try writing a novel.
I never thought of writing a novel before but here I am.
I have read a lot of novels and sometimes I thought about some other plots that I would have liked, and so my novel is inspired from many other novels I have read.
As a reader I would expect a regularity in updates and crazy updates time to time. I assure you that I will try my best.
I hope that you all will support me and give me lots of love.
As this is my first time writing, I may commit a lot of mistakes but I will try to correct it simultaneously.
Please write your veiws about my storyline and what all you would like me to do and also tell me about my mistakes so that I can improve my writing in the comments section.
Thank you.
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The genre of my story is Romance.
You will read here how a cold, domineering, ruthless mafia gang leader will fall in love at first sight with a beautiful, strong and kind young woman.
I am going to introduce the characters of my story to you now:
1. Zac Davis
His heart is as cold as ice. He has never loved anyone. His parents died in a car accident when he was only 5. Being depressed from his parents death he had lost all hopes. He trained hard day and night to become what he is now.
In front of everyone he is a cold, handsome and super rich bachelor. He is the CEO and the founder of the RAYNAT Technologies ( An acronym for the names of his parents- Raymond and Natalie.) A man who is loved by all women and to whom all men look up to.
A few people know what face is hidden behind that mask.
He is 25 years old, 6'1 tall, muscular body, fit and attractive.
But he fell in love!!!
In love with a girl who already has a boyfriend.
He wants her, only her.
Will he be able to receive the love he is longing for or will he be left heart broken.
So this is how the male lead looks like.
Is he handsome? Do you like him?
2. Jennifer Aniston
She is very beautiful, hot and cute, yes all at the same time.
She is 22 years old, 5'9 tall.
( She is shorter than our male lead because I love a couple with the man being taller than the girl, they look so good together.)
Her mother died when she was 4 years old due to an illness, since then her father has treated her like a princess so she never feels sad. She has been pampered and has been loved a lot by everyone.
She was the beauty of her school and got a lot of confessions but she was cold to everyone except Noah, who she then fell in love with.
But what will happen if she is separated from Noah because of Zac?
Will she hate him forever or will she fall in love with him?
This is how our female lead looks like.
What do you think about her?
3. Noah Roy
Well he is a playboy and comes from a rich family.
He was attracted by Jennifer ( 😔 Not my fault if she is so attractive. ) and was also after her money (Yup, our FL comes from a rich family. )
But who knew that the naive girl who was just a source of fun for him will fall head over heels for him.
He cheated on her the whole time they were dating- 2 years and was not a single bit ashamed.
He is 23 years old, 5'10 tall and handsome (obviously less than our ML).
4. Sameul Aniston
He is the father of our FL. After the death of his wife, he has provided, Jennifer, the love of both.
He loves her a lot and can never see her hurt. Although he never liked Noah he had no choice as Jennifer loved him very much and he just wanted to see her happy.
He is the CEO of the Aniston Group, which is very big and famous for its work in various fields.
He pampers Jennifer a lot and would do anything to make her happy.
5. Lisa Ford
She is an old woman who loved Jennifer like her own daughter. She works for the Aniston household.
She knows that Zac loves Jennifer as he often contacts her when he wants to know what she is doing or sometimes just to listen to her voice (Aww, so sweet.)
6. Angela Mia
We have to have a love rival, right.
She is just another greedy girl who wants Zac so badly that she would take every measures possible to be with him.
She looks so evil, right guys?
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These are the major characters for now, there will be more as the story develops and I will introduce them when required.
I hope that you like the characters and my story.
Thank you.
In Zac's office
"Boss, the wedding has started." said Jimmy, the personal assistant of Zac, who also is a hacker and works for his gang - The Black Scorpion.
Zac lifted his head from the computer screen and looked at Jimmy with a smirk and said " Then come on, let's go. I need to give my sweetheart a wedding gift. " He stood up from his chair and further asked," Is everything prepared?"
"Yes sir." replied Jimmy.
"Good, then let's go. " Zac ordered.
They sat in the car and the driver drove the car, with Jimmy in the passenger seat and Zac at the backseat, to the wedding destination.
"I'm coming, my sweetheart, wait for me." thought Zac.
Meanwhile, in the bride's room
Jennifer's POV
Today is the happiest day of my life. Finally, I will be able to spend my life with the person I love so much.
How much have I waited for this day to come.
I look at myself in the mirror once again. I can't help but look at mirror again and again to see if I look good. Will he like me in this gown. He said before that he wanted to see me in a wedding gown.
Everything should be perfect, after all today is the day I will marry the love of my life, the only man - Noah Roy.
"Hey hey, who is this beautiful girl huh?"
Here comes my BFF, Sarah Jones.
I'm sure that she is more excited than me on my wedding day.
"Wow!! Jenny, you look so gorgeous girl. The most beautiful bride ever. I can't believe that my baby is getting married before me."
We both laugh and I say " Yup, even I can't believe. It still feels like a dream."
"Oh come on, stop getting all emotional. You know I am not good at consoling people. You should be happy today."
I know I should and I am surely very happy, it feels magical. My eyes are filled with tears of happiness and I am getting scolded for ruining my makeup.
"Oh my dear child, you look so beautiful." Aunt Lisa said. I could see some unshed tears in her eyes. After all her daughter was going away.
"Aunt Lisa, thank you so much."
I am going to miss Aunt Lisa a lot. She is just like my mother. She always takes care of me. Although she doesn't like Noah, she still came here to give us blessings.
I don't understand why everyone dislikes Noah.
My dad, Aunt Lisa and Sarah, they all say that he isn't that good. But I love him and I will only marry him.
We hug each other for along time only to break away when I realize that my father is here.
" My princess is getting married today. Oh you've become so old already. " he says while pulling me into a warm hug.
"Hey dad, I am not that old" I say while pouting which makes him smile.
"Yes yes you are not. You are still my baby girl."
"That's more like it."
"Princess, I am going to miss you. Do you really have to marry him?"
"Dad, what are you saying. I'll come to meet you all a lot, okay. Don't be sad or you'll make me cry and I'll get scolded again for ruining my makeup. "
" Who dares to scold my princess? No one will. Come on let's go, it's time."
I nod and give my hand to him.
I feel so nervous and excited. We walk on the aisle and my eyes search for Noah. A smile plasters on my face as I spot Noah, who looks so handsome and charming in the suit. He smiles at me and takes my hand from my dad and helps me up.
" You better behave yourselves or I won't hesitate to kill you." my father says to Noah. I could see anger in his eyes. He is always like this with Noah.
"Dad, stop it please. It is my wedding day. " I try to calm him down. He turns around and takes his seat.
I look up to Noah who smiles gently and says, "You look so gorgeous baby." I smile and blush.
" You look very handsome."
We smile at each other and stare at each other lovingly.
The priest begins.
"Do you take Ms.Jennifer Aniston as your lawful wife, to have and to hold, from this day forward, for better or for worse, for richer or for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and cherish until death do you part?"
"I do" replies Noah, his eyes fixed on me.
"Do you take Mr. Noah Roy as your lawful husband, to have and to hold, from this day forward, for better or for worse, for richer or for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and cherish until death do you part?"
"I...."
Zac's POV
We reach at the wedding hall and Mr. Samuel greets me with a genuine smile. Her dad also knows that I love Jennifer and he hates Noah, which makes it easy for me to get rid of him.
"How are you Mr. Samuel?"
" Oh I am alright but how are you?"
How am I. How would I be feeling when attending the wedding of my sweetheart?
Sad, no not at all. I am feeling happy, very happy, for today will be the last day they will stand so close to each other. Just endure a little, a little more and then she can be yours.
"I'm good. And I have to tell you that I have prepared a grand gift for you as well as your daughter. "
He sighs and replies, " I know, but she will be really hurt. I can't see her cry like that."
" I'm sorry Mr. Samuel, but I have no choice. "
He nods and leads me to my seat and leaves to entertain other guests.
I see my sweetheart walking down the aisle, I swear to God, she looked so beautiful. My heart felt light as I saw her smiling face. My eyes were fixed at her but her eyes were fixed on that bastard Noah.
They both were looking at each other.
Someone who doesn't know Noah well would believe that he loves her but I know that it was just an act.
My blood was boiling seeing them together.
Control okay, Zac, just control yourself. She will be all yours in just a little time.
My sweetheart was about to say those two words 'I do' but I won't let her say that.
I signal my men to execute the plan.
I know you will be sad, my sweetheart, but you need to know that the person whom you love so much doesn't even deserve one bit of it.
I don't want you to be hurt, but if for protecting you I have to hurt you, I will.
After all you should belong to me.
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This is her wedding dress.
Her shoes.
And this is her hairstyle.
This is what Noah is wearing.
This is what Zac is wearing.
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So guys this is the first chapter.
Please do tell me about your views as they matter a lot.
If there is any question you wish to ask me, please do.
Thank you.
Jennifer's POV
"I.."
'Noah I love you so much.'
'I love you too babe.'
'Liar, you love that Jennifer bitch, I know.'
'No babe, you know me well don't you. She is just our money tree. I am just using her, she is so stupid and naive. Who knew that she would fall crazily in love with me'
My eyes were filled with tears, I glanced at Noah and I could see that he was flustered.
Tears started flowing, my heartbeat increased and I could not find any words.
I mustered up all my courage and asked, "No..Noah i-is this ....true? Tell me, pl-please tell me. Please!!!"
"Jenny baby, you know I love you right."
" Then what is this huh? "
"This is very old video, okay. Someone is deliberately doing this to break us apart. Trust me, I love you, more than my life. Please trust me Jenny."
He was crying. This was the first time I have ever seen him cry.
It is true that many people wanted to break us apart.
I trust him, I love him.
" You promise me right. You only love me?"
"Yes baby, only you."
"I trust you. I love you Noah."
"Jennifer!!!" , my dad shouted.
I knew he was angry as he called me by my full name.
"Dad, please. He said he loves me. I trust him. Please dad." I cried, not caring about my makeup, I wanted to trust him, I love him so much that I can't bear to be away from him.
" No, never. You are never going to marry him. Are you mad. I don't care if you refuse to face the situation but I care about you. This bloody bastard cheated on you, can't you s-" I cut my dad before he says anything else about Noah.
" No!! I beg you dad, please don't say this. I love him and only him. Please!!"
I shout with all my might. My dad sighed sadly, shook his head in disappointment and turned around, facing his back towards me.
I'm sorry dad, but Noah is my life.
I turned towards the priest and told him to continue.
He looked at me in disbelief and I glared at him.
He coughed and began saying, " Do y-"
Bang!!
Zac's POV
The video of that bastard Noah with another woman started playing. My heart was aching seeing my sweetheart cry so badly for him. How can there exist such a heartless man like him to be not affected by those tears.
I have to say that he can be a really talented actor. How easily he made her believe him blindly.
'I trust you. I love you Noah.'
What!?!? Is she seriously trusting him? How can she be so naive?
'I love him and only him.'
These word hit me hard. I felt pain in my heart. I know she loves him but why?
Why did she fall in love with him?
I understood that she was not going to stop unless she marries him. She was stubborn and so was I.
I signal my men once again and they nod.
I am sorry sweetheart, this will hurt a lot but you left me with no choice.
Bang!!
I felt happy as I saw that bastard's body fall down. He would have been dead already as the bullet was shot between his eyebrows.
"No, no, no. Noah!!!" She was crying so badly. I wanted to comfort her and tell her that he deserves it. I wanted to hold her in my arms for once.
She was on her knees shaking his dead, lifeless body, begging him to wake up.
" Dad, do something. He can't die. Who did this? Who!!? Wake up Noah, please !!" she shouted while crying heavily.
Most of the guests had left, only few close relatives were present. She kept on shouting and crying.
I couldn't watch it anymore, I told Mr. Samuel to take her home, forcefully if she does not agree. I told Lisa to call me as soon as they reach home.
She was taken away, forced by her father, as she was not agreeing to leave his side. After she was gone I ordered my men to take care of body. Killing was no new to me as I am a leader of a mafia gang.
I sat in my car and sighed before telling my driver to drive home.
As I reached my home, I received Lisa's call.
"How is she?" I asked even though I already knew the answer.
'She has been crying and shouting all the way. She is not listening to anyone. She has locked herself in her room and is not letting anybody in.'
" What!!? Open up the damn door! She might do something stupid. "
' We are doing it. It's opened.'
" Is she alright? She didn't do anything to herself right?"
'No, she is alright.'
"Ok. Go inside and keep the phone on speaker."
'Princess, Jenny, speak something please. Talk to your dad, please.'
'No, I don't want to talk to anyone. Leave me alone.'
'Please!!! He deserved to d-'
'No!! He didn't. What had he done wrong? Why don't you all understand? I love him. He is the love of my life. Why do all of you hate him?'
'Jenny pl-'
' No, you all leave me alone. Please, please!!'
I cut the phone. I didn't want to hear anything else. I was tired of listening her saying 'I love you' which was not meant for me.
I was angry, jealous, sad.
I threw away the phone in my hands and went to take a cold shower.
I really needed to calm down.
After coming out of the shower I felt more refreshed and calm.
I changed in my sweatshirt and pants.
*Ring* My phone rang and I saw the caller id. It was Mr. Samuel and I knew this is about my sweetheart.
"Hello, Mr. Samuel."
' I am worried Zac, I am really worried about my princess. I can't see her in that condition. It is breaking my heart.'
" I am sorry Mr. Samuel. You know better than anyone else that it was the only option."
' I do know this but I can't watch her in this way'
I had already known Mr. Samuel for a long time and he is a strong man. He loves his daughter a lot. It's obvious that he wouldn't want to ever see her in that condition.
" Mr. Samuel, if you allow me, I would want to bring her with me. "
' She won't agree.'
" Please, please convince her. I want to heal her. I know that she is heartbroken but please."
He sighs and replies, ' Okay, I will try my best. I only hope for her to be happy. Please don't hurt her.'
" You know that I will never. I love her more than anything or anyone. I promise you that I will always."
' I hope that she is able to your love. I can't believe that my daughter can be so stupid. Don't worry, I will convince her.'
" Thank you for trusting me, I will never break it."
' Thank you for loving my daughter so much. She is very lucky to be loved by you.'
I hope she feels the same.
We say our goodbyes and I cut the phone.
"Butler Lee, prepare everything properly. The Young Miss of the house will be here from tomorrow!!"
I was very excited. She is going to be here, with me.
The house will be complete with her by my side.
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