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INTRO
AQUA (author)
I welcome you all to my Chat Story
AQUA (author)
Its my first time publishing any story I have written so I'm kinda nervous
AQUA (author)
But I hope you all like it and give your feedbacks so that I shall improve my skills
AQUA (author)
Anyways I'll stop rambling
AQUA (author)
Here's the synopsis of this story
This story is a fantasy mystical thriller involving cases which are not of human realm alone. There will be evil spirits, ancient myths, and magic.
Yamado Erika was a very promising Profiler. Top of her class it has always been her dream to join the Forces and catch as many evil doers as possible.
But little did she know that her dreams would come crashing.
Now that she lost the opportunity to join the Forces she decides to join a private detective office.
Takashi Kento runs a small quite detective office. His office hidden, customers come in only through recommendations.
Follow the story as Erika collects her shattered dreams and joins brains with Kento and solve mysteries that no one could have imagined to be solved.
AQUA (author)
Character as of now.
AQUA (author)
Yamado Erika
Profiler
Smart
Kind
Soft girl but is badass while solving cases
Ability : Paralysis
AQUA (author)
Takashi Kento.
Private detective
Smart
High self esteem
Perfectionist
Gentleman
Ability : Speed
AQUA (author)
Ayano-chan (FL bestie. In Police Forces. Helps FL in getting internal info)
Ability : Speech
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K (Agent under Kento. Can obtain any sort of info on anyone.)
Ability : Unkown
AQUA (author)
Satoshi Akihiko (ML friend in Police Forces who helps in arrests or other police work)
Ability : Sight
Ep1
Professor
Alright everyone, this ends all my sessions for your batch.
Professor
Remember to review everything for the final selection.
Professor
And don't forget if you fail or miss the selection, you can never apply to join the Forces again.
Professor
I sincerely wish you all the very best.
Professor
Yamado-san, I have very high hopes on you. I hope everyone in class sees her passion and try to have the same enthusiasm.
Yamado Erika (FL)
Thank you Professor😊
Yamado Erika (FL)
I shall do my best.
Others
Thank you Professor
Erika goes to the college entrance to meet her brother who is supposed to pick her up and take her home.
She looks around, but doesn't see him or his car.
No response. The call goes to his voice mail.
Yamado Erika (FL)
Nii-san my classes ended. I'm at the college entrance. Where are you?
She waits for an hour but still no sign of her brother.
No one responds. Again it goes to voice mail.
Yamado Erika (FL)
Mama, is Nii-san home? He said he would pick me up.
Yamado Erika (FL)
I called him and he's not answering. He is not here either.
Yamado Erika (FL)
Anyway it's getting dark, so I'm coming home myself.
She hangs up and starts walking towards the bus stop.
It was already dusk and the street light were on.
She feels cold down here spine as if someone's watching her from the shadows.
Suddenly the light at the farthest end of the road flickers and goes off.
She sees a shadow moving in the dark.
The light comes back on but no one is there.
Creeped out, she turns back and makes a run to the bus stop.
AQUA (author)
Will she make it home safely? Or will something happen?
AQUA (author)
Tune in for next ep. Very soon.😇
Ep 2
Creeped out, she turns back and makes a run to the bus stop.
She arrives just in time for the last bus.
Once inside the bus, she calms herself.
Yamado Erika (FL)
Calm down Erika. It's just your mind and eyes playing tricks.
Yamado Erika (FL)
So being so paranoid.
She arrives home, still a bit shaken from the incident.
The gates were half open and the driveway was a mess with several flower pots turned upside-down.
She immediately dialed 112
Dispatch Officer
112. Whats your emergency?
Yamado Erika (FL)
Hi. I'm calling to report a possible break-in at my house at #123, XYZ area.
Dispatch Officer
May I know your name miss?
Yamado Erika (FL)
Yamado Erika
Dispatch Officer
Ok. Can you please explain the situation to me.
Yamado Erika (FL)
The gates to my house are half open, which is unusual, and there are several flowerpots broken on the driveway.
Dispatch Officer
Alright Ms.Erika, officers are on their way.
Dispatch Officer
Can you see anyone in and around your house?
Yamado Erika (FL)
No. All the curtains on are drawn close.
Dispatch Officer
Are there any lights on?
Dispatch Officer
Have you tried contacting your family?
Yamado Erika (FL)
Yes. The call went to voicemail.
Dispatch Officer
Can you check with your neighbours if your family possibly went out?
Yamado Erika (FL)
The neighbours left for a vacation- hold on, I see some light in the living room.
Dispatch Officer
Ms.Erika I suggest you stay wherever you are. Officers are on their way.
Dispatch Officer
Do you see anyone?
Yamado Erika (FL)
No, the light is very faint. Looks like a candle light.
Yamado Erika (FL)
Can you please ask the officers to come without their siren on?
Dispatch Officer
Yes. They are almost there.
Just then the Dispatch Officers arrive.
Yamado Erika (FL)
They arrived.
Dispatch Officer
Ok, Ms.Erika. They will handle it from here on.
Yamado Erika (FL)
Thank you.
Dispatch Officer
You're welcome.
Erika explains to the officers the situation and the layout of the house.
Armed, the officers step into the driveway.
Suddenly there's a bright glow from the living room.
As the curtains flutter, Erika sees a man in a black cloak.
AQUA (author)
Who is the man? Where is her family?
AQUA (author)
Tune in to the next ep. Very soon.
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