My Savage Baby
first day of university
guys I don't know what's happening with mt
it's my first chat story and I'm uploading the first two chapters in screenshot.
it has been 2 days but still my chapters are under review
please bear with me guys. I will try to do something so this won't happen again
till then bear with me. and if any of you have any suggestions , can you please tell me.
you know it's really disappointing for a author to update her first chat story's first two chapters in screenshot so please can you give me some suggestions ?
and I will upload the nest chapter in screenshot also.
also guys don't forget to share the story. and like , comment and subscribe
I will try my best to fix this problem from my side.
oh yeah and please support my story
reached at the University
guys as I said the second chapter didn't pass too
I'm really disappointed to mt
I really didn't think that I will have such experience.
guys please bear with me. I don't know if it will pass or not but if it passes then I wanna tell you this... please bear with for some time more
I will try my best to look into this matter more
and I am sure I will find a way
oh and also if you know any way don't forget to comment down below and tell me
after all I am a new comer author here
as you know it's my first chat story
don't forget to like , comment , share and subscribe.
and I will upload next chapters as soon as this chapter passes.
and also tell me what you think about the story
first impression
I was walking when suddenly a boy came infront of me and I , unable to stop myself bumped into him and fell down
I closed my eyes in fear and waited for the ground to hit my back
but nothing happened so I slowly opened my eyes and found a handsome guy holding me
he was holding me and I was staring at him
d@mn I was lost in his grey eyes. I was getting a dominant yet gentle vibe from him.
I could imagine him in a suit , with a loose tie
it would be a chef's kiss if his shirt's first two buttons were open.
no no Mia what are you thinking. don't be a pervert.
he was looking at me slightly confused
when suddenly someone interrupted us
we all were walking when a girl bumped into me and I held her preventing her from falling
It was sudden so I was a bit shocked but then I gather myself and looked at her properly
lol she was closing her eyes
I chuckled inside of my mind.
then slowly she opened her and looked at me with her big eyes
author Lucifer
sorry I couldn't find a better pic
author Lucifer
back to the story
her eyes were soo deep like ocean. and I was lost in it.
not gonna lie but she was breathtaking beautiful
I was staring at her and to my surprise she was also staring at me
no no... Liam don't be fooled by this. this kind of girl always wants to get attention of millionaire like me
yeah I must pull myself together
Emma Lankins (FL BFF)
Hey Mia are you okay ?
Dave Megan (ML BFF)
Liam carefull
Liam leave Miami and she fell down
Liam Hopkins (ML)
( leave Miami and stand up straight )
Miami Davis (FL)
( fell on the ground ) ugh! what the fu**
Lily Evans (FL BFF)
( came and help her standing up )
Emma Lankins (FL BFF)
( came and hold another hand of Mia )
Robert Lynch (ML BFF)
Hey Liam are you okay ?
Liam Hopkins (ML)
Hmm ❄️❄️
Lily Evans (FL BFF)
Hey excuse me. the one who fell down is Mia and you're asking him if he is okay !! ( furious )
Dave Megan (ML BFF)
oh sorry on behalf of my friend. is she okay ?
Miami Davis (FL)
Hey are you mad ? why did you leave me ? 💢💢 ( to Liam )
Liam Hopkins (ML)
can't you walk with your eyes open on road ? ❄️❄️
Miami Davis (FL)
oh really ?? you're the one who came in between my way. now it's my fault huh ? 💢💢
Liam Hopkins (ML)
listen , I know girls like you very well ok ?? don't think that I would be fooled ❄️❄️💢
Miami Davis (FL)
what did I even do ??
Liam Hopkins (ML)
girls like you can do anything to gain attention from us millionaire. so please don't try to use that trick on me. I have seen many of it ❄️❄️
like that Liam said and walked away with Robert and Dave following him
Emma Lankins (FL BFF)
what the fuvk is wrong with him !!!
Lily Evans (FL BFF)
I think he is mad.
Miami Davis (FL)
*why he said that to me when I didn't even do anything?*
Lily Evans (FL BFF)
Mia are you okay ??
Miami Davis (FL)
yeah I guess I'm okay.
Emma Lankins (FL BFF)
do you need to go to infirmery ?
Miami Davis (FL)
no no I'm okay. don't bother. let's go we are getting late
Lily Evans (FL BFF)
hmm. be careful.
Miami Davis (FL)
*anyway leave it. next time if I see him I will take my revenge*
the three of them went to class
while on the other side...
Robert Lynch (ML BFF)
HEY LIAM WAIT FOR US (shouting)
Liam Hopkins (ML)
Come fast
Dave Megan (ML BFF)
Hey what was wrong with you ? why did you said like that ??
Robert Lynch (ML BFF)
yeah. I was also surprised
Liam Hopkins (ML)
guys we should stay away from this kind of girls. they always try to get attention from rich guys like us.
Robert Lynch (ML BFF)
but...
Dave Megan (ML BFF)
okay okay leave it. I think you shouldn't ruin our mood by talking about that incident.
Dave Megan (ML BFF)
let's go to class otherwise we will be late
the three of them also went to the class
author Lucifer
thanks for reading the story
author Lucifer
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their first impression of each other was not so good. what do you think will happen when they will meet again ?
author Lucifer
well lemme give you guys a spoiler....
author Lucifer
they all are in the same class.
author Lucifer
recommend this story to your friends.
author Lucifer
vote and gift if possible
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and tell me in the comment section what do you think about the story
author Lucifer
also picture used in the story aren't mine. credits to the real owner. just the story line is mine
author Lucifer
bye. see ya later
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