Rebirth
Introduce #1
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Hi guys this is my first story that I made on my own so don't mind if it's bad
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so first let's introduce the characters
name : noah
age : 28
married : Mandy
personality : smart,for now he hates one of his kids because he wasn't born with a power
power : ?????
states : ceo of the most powerful company in the world
likes : ???
name : Mandy
age : 27
married : Noah
personality : b*tch,gold digger, hates one of her kids too
power : can move not very heavy things
name : Luka
age : 6
personality : smart,kinda cold, being hated by his family his dad didn't hit him but just avoid him his mom hitted him twice but not much noah doesn't know about it and he didn't tell him because he thought he wouldn't care
power : none
name : abel
age : 6
personality: brat from being spoiled hates his brother, can be sweet some time but it's rare
power : kinda weak electricity
introduce #2
name : Marcus
age : 26
personality : cold at work but sweet with Luka
married : single
power : can control all the elements
job : work as Noah assistant and bodyguard
likes : Noah
doesn't like : how he treats luka
place : lives with them
system
can give powers as long as he wants just choose one person to REBORN
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so this is the characters for now but of course their will be more in the next chapters but that's it for now.
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so let's say that Noah has died after being BETRAYED
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he hated Luka for being powerless
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and he keeps his identity secret he bought a company and it's the ranking 2 in the world
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so he have 1,2 ranking company in the world
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he wanted to give the second company to the person he trust and like he thought of Mandy but at the same time he didn't want to...
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so that's it support for the first chapter
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to make me make it faster
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and I will try to post ATLEAST
2_3 times a week..sooo
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and please write comments and support
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hope you will enjoy it I will do my best
Chapter 1{I PROMISE}
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and I forgot to tell that Marcus is the only one Who knows about Noah's company
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and What happened was that he was tied by his wife and son (abel) and then they killed marcus and Luka infront of him and marcus's last words were
I LOVE YOU
system
Iam the system and you are the choosen one
Noah
choosen one???for What
system
for REBORN or RIBERTH
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yes and the most you will fix your mistakes the most powerful you will get
Noah
"see that he is in his room"
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yes he and his wife lives in separated rooms
Noah
I actually came back to life
Luka
Mom said to wake you up
Noah
Thank you luka you can go *smile*
Luka
that was......uhhh something??
system
(Iam in your mind host)
Noah
(oh so you are the system right)
Noah
(mmmhh cool I guess??!)
Noah
now let's fix some mistakes from my past life..
Noah
I promise that I will treat you good Luka...
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and that's it I know it's short but......you know what bye
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