You Show The Real Me
Introduction 1
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Hey there
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First of all Thank you for reading my story
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This is my first time writing a story
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So I hope you like it
The Beautiful FL
Name: Evelyn Jones
The young Miss of the Jones
Age:17
Status:In love with Edward (FC)
Occupation: Finance Student but wants to study Art
Personality: Kind, Caring, Cheerful, Childish and Love
Likes: Designing, Edward, Following Edward, Painting, Sketching and having fun with Siblings
Dislike: Sluts, Two faced People, Cheaters, anyone who hurts her loved ones and Betrayal
P.S: FC= First love/Crush
FL's Dad
Name: Mike Jones
Master of the Jones
Age: 42
Status: Married (to FL's mom)
Occupation: Chairman of the Jones
Personality: Arrogant,Strict, loves his family but hates Evelyn a bit and easily misunderstands Evelyn and is partial towards his children, also think that Evelyn is a Spoiled Brat
Likes: His Family, Company and his Reputation
Dislikes: Evelyn's childish behaviour, People who can damage his Reputation(People=Evelyn)
FL's Mom
Name: Erica Jones
Madam of the Jones
Age: 40
Status: Married (to FL's Dad)
Occupation: House Wife, was the Assistant of Mike (FL's dad)
Personality: Arrogant, Sweet, loving but can be selfish and is partial towards her children, also thinks that Evelyn is a Spoiled Brat
Likes: Her family and spending time with them but not very much with Evelyn (FL) thinks that she is a fool who knows nothing and her Reputation
Dislikes: Liars, Sluts, Cheaters, Two faced people and Evelyn
FL's Elder Sister
Name: Amy Smith Jones
First Miss of the Jones
Daughter-in-law of the Smith
Age: 20
Status: Currently Engaged but soon to be married (to FL's Brother-in-law)
Occupation: Housewife, Dentist
Personality: Arrogant, Kind, Caring and loving but is very selfish
Likes: Her husband, Her Son and Her family
Dislikes: Evelyn's childish behaviour and at times hates Evelyn as well, rest same as FL mom
FL's Elder Brother
Name: Jack Jones
First Master of the Jones
Age: 24
Status: Married (to FL's Sister-in-law)
Occupation: CEO of the Jones
Personality: Arrogant, Cold to strangers and Evelyn, Childish in front of his wife and Kind and Caring to this rest of the family
Likes: His wife, his family and his Reputation
Dislikes: Evelyn annoying him, rest same as FL's mom
FL's Elder Sister-in-law
Name: Olivia Bell Jones
Only Heir of the
Elder daughter-in-law of the Jones
Age: 22
Status: Married (to FL's Brother(
Occupation: Final year student in Business Management
Personality: Kind, Caring and Loving
Likes: Her Husband, both the Jones and the Bell family and Evelyn
Dislikes: Anyone talking bad or hurting Evelyn, rest same as FL
FL's Younger Brother
Name: Jake Jones
Young Master of the Jones
Age: 15
Status: Single but has many admires
Occupation: High school student
Personality: Cheerful, Kind but easily angered
Likes: Video Games, Fighting and Family
Dislikes: Same as FL's elder brother
FL's Younger Sister
Name: Daisy Jones
Youngest Miss of the Jones
Age: 14
Status: Single
Occupation: Student
Personality: The Actual Spoiled Brat, thinks that she is a Princess, Always make trouble for Evelyn and blame Evelyn for her doings and is very Arrogant
Likes: Her family, making trouble for Evelyn and seeing Evelyn getting scolded for her own mistakes
Dislikes: Evelyn and rest same as FL's brothers
P.S: Daisy makes a lot of trouble but put the blame on Evelyn
Once Daisy ruined Mike's Million dollar project but thankfully they had a back up
And when Mike came back home And asked who ruined his project, Daisy immediately put the blame on Evelyn since that day Daisy blamed Evelyn for everything she did which allso caused her family to hate Evelyn even more
But the main reason why the Jones parents hate Evelyn will be revealed soon
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Hope you all like thee introduction
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Introduction 2
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Your one and only Author here
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Let's start with the second introduction...
FL's First Love aka FC
Name: Edward Smith
Second Master of the Smith
Age: 20
Status: Single
Occupation: CEO of Smith and Business Management Student
Personality: Cold, Never Relax and Arrogant
Likes: Spending time with his family especially his younger sister
Dislikes: Evelyn, Evelyn following him around, Sluts, Two faced people, Cheaters and Betrayal
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I am writing FC instead of First love because it's too long
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Sooo FC->First Love/Crush
Evelyn Jones (FL)
He looks handsome😍😍
Evelyn Jones (FL)
doesn't he
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God Noo!!!
Evelyn Jones (FL)
Come on you don't mean that
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As a matter of fact I do
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**in mind: This girl is surely head over heels for him and the annoying fact is that he is not even that handsome**
Evelyn Jones (FL)
Author why are you not saying anything???
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Nothing anyways
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on to the introduction....
FC's Mom
Name: Amelia Smith
Madam of the Smith
Age: 40
Status: Married (to FC's Dad)
Occupation: Retired Actress
Personality: Kind, Caring , Loving to everyone except Evelyn and is very Cruel and Cunning
Likes:Her younger son the most, Her family and the Jones (except Evelyn)
Dislikes: Evelyn, Thinks that Evelyn is a Gold digger and a Slut, Sluts and Betrayal
P.S: Don't mind the kid behind her
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She will be one of the main cause of Evelyn's Pain
FC's Dad
Name: Aaron Smith
Age: 42
Status: Married to FC's Mom
Occupation: Chairman of the Smith
Personality: Kind, loving, caring but Cold when he is angry
Likes: Evelyn knows that she is none of the things said by Amelia and the family
Dislikes: Amelia and everyone talking bad about Evelyn but can't do anything, Sluts, Cheaters and Betrayal
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Aaron loves Evelyn like his own daughter and wishes that she is his daughter-in-law
FC's Elder Brother
Name: Harry Smith
First Master of the Smith
Age: 22
Status: Engaged but soon to be married (to FL's sister)
Occupation: CEO of H.S Company
Personality: Kind, Caring, Loving, Childish in front of Any
Likes:Amy, His son, Family and Evelyn like his own sister
Dislikes: Anyone talking bad about Evelyn, Sluts, Cheaters and Betrayal
FC's Younger Sister
Name: May Smith
Young and only Miss of the Smith
Age: 14
Status: Single
Occupation: Student
Personality: Kind, Caring, Loving but is very Cunning and Cruel and us very Arrogant as well
Likes: Same as FC's Mom
Dislikes: Same as FC's Mom
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Well in short everyone except Aaron(FC's Dad) and Harry(FC's Brother) hates Evelyn and wants her gone
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This is it for now
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If you all like This kind of story where the FL is hated by her family then goes abroad and finds a family that loves her and she becomes a strong person
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Then is highly recommend you to read:
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It's too late to Love After She is Gone
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This is a great story
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you will absolutely love it
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Thank to the Author of That story I got inspired to write
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Okay then
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Bye my Lovely Readers
Chapter 1
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I am soo happy 😁today Because this is the First Chapter
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Let's continue with the Story
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P.S: **= thinking in mind
❄️= Talking coldly
The Smith and the Jones are seated in the Living room
Amelia Smith(FC's Mom)
I am so happy that we are finally going to be a family 😍
Erica Jones(FL's Mom)
Me too Ame
Erica Jones(FL's Mom)
But Amy and Harry now that you are engaged, there is no need to meet secretly
Erica Jones(FL's Mom)
You two understand?🤨
Amy Jones Smith(FL's Sister)
Yes mom
Harry Smith(FL's Brother-in-law)
Yes aunt
Erica Jones(FL's Mom)
Awwww there is no need to call me aunt
Erica Jones(FL's Mom)
We are going to be a family so call me mom
Mike Jones(FL's Dad)
and me dad
Mike Jones(FL's Dad)
and like Erica said no sneaking around
Evelyn Jones (FL)
But dad I think sis and brother Harry likes to sneak around
Evelyn Jones (FL)
I bet they want to do it again
Mike Jones(FL's Dad)
SHUT UP EVELYN
Evelyn Jones (FL)
B-but Dad I-
Mike Jones(FL's Dad)
I said SHUT UP
Evelyn Jones (FL)
Yes Dad😞
Mike Jones(FL's Dad)
Go to your room
Evelyn Jones (FL)
but dad What did-
Erica Jones(FL's Mom)
EVELYN didn't you hear what your dad said
Erica Jones(FL's Mom)
Go to your Room
Harry Smith(FL's Brother-in-law)
Mom there is no need for that
Amelia Smith(FC's Mom)
Harry keep quiet
Harry Smith(FL's Brother-in-law)
Mom what Evelyn said is true
Harry Smith(FL's Brother-in-law)
I would really like to sneak around to meet Amy again
Amelia Smith(FC's Mom)
Neither way
Amelia Smith(FC's Mom)
Evelyn go to your room
Amelia Smith(FC's Mom)
No one wants you here
Aaron Smith(FC's Dad)
Enough Amelia
Amy Jones Smith(FL's Sister)
Evelyn why can't you just go and leave us in Peace
Evelyn Jones (FL)
I-I sorry
Evelyn Jones (FL)
I will leave now
Erica Jones(FL's Mom)
Hmmm
Erica Jones(FL's Mom)
Amy, why don't you show the new greenhouse to Harry and everyone else
Amelia Smith(FC's Mom)
Yes Yes
Amelia Smith(FC's Mom)
Harry,May go with Amy
Note: Edward is in a call so he is not in the living room
Harry, Amy, May, Daisy, Jake, Jack and Olivia went to the see the new greenhouse
But they didn't know that Evelyn was hiding behind the door
Amelia Smith(FC's Mom)
OMG!! Erica how can you even bear her
Erica Jones(FL's Mom)
Honestly I don't know, But she surely is a Brat
Erica Jones(FL's Mom)
Sometimes I wished that I could have gotten rid of her when I had a chance
Amelia Smith(FC's Mom)
You don't need to say that again
Aaron Smith(FC's Dad)
Anyways when should we arrange the Engagement
Aaron Smith(FC's Dad)
**I hope one day you will regret saying that Sister Erica**
Amelia Smith(FC's Mom)
Oh my I almost forgot about it, Thank you Honey for reminding me
Amelia Smith(FC's Mom)
Now that Brat is gone, we can peaceful start the preparation
Hearing all this Evelyn got shocked and started running to her room while crying
Edward Smith(FL's FC)
Yes do it like that❄️📲
Edward Smith(FL's FC)
Is there anything else?❄️📲
Edward Smith(FL's FC)
Now I have to go back
Edward Smith(FL's FC)
I don't want to meet that Brat
Edward Smith(FL's FC)
What should I do 😫😫
Edward was going the way through which Evelyn was coming from
Evelyn didn't see Edward because of her teary eyes
Hence they bummed into each other
Edward Smith(FL's FC)
Hey!!! Watch you-
Edward saw a crying Evelyn in his arms, he didn't know why his heart was hurting seeing her like this.Before he could ask her anything, Evelyn ran towards her room
Edward Smith(FL's FC)
What happened to her?
Edward Smith(FL's FC)
**Wait why do I care? Whatever I should get going mom must be waiting for me**
Edward reached the Living room
At the Same time Harry, Amy, May, Daisy, Jake, Jack and Olivia came back as well
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That's it for now
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Hope you Enjoyed
Evelyn Jones (FL)
Yep hope you enjoyed
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