13 October 2005 – The day before General Roar arrived
Location: Hunter’s Village, atop the Asfa Mountain
[Early Morning, Inside Saim and Ahtesham’s Hut]
Saim: Wake up, Ahtee! It's almost breakfast time. Get up and get ready already.
Ahtesham: Come on, big bro! Let me sleep just a little longer.
Saim: This is your routine every day. What will you do if I’m not around someday?
Ahtesham: Hey! Don’t say things like that. If anything happens to you, I’ll die right beside you. I’m not leaving you—just like how Mom and Dad left us.
Saim: Alright, alright. Forget what I said. Just get up.
Ahtesham: Fine, fine. So, what’s for breakfast today?
Saim: Roasted rabbit.
Ahtesham: What? Again? Ughhh!
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[After Breakfast]
Ahtesham: Come on, you lazy punk. We’re late for hunting.
Saim: Oh really? And whose fault is that?
Ahtesham: Now's not the time for arguing. Let’s go!
Ahtesham: I’m gonna reach there first!
Saim: In your dreams!
Sofia: You two are late.
Ahtesham: It’s Saim’s fault!
Sofia: Yeah, yeah. I figured.
Ahtesham: Ow! Why did you punch me?
Sofia: For blaming others, obviously.
Ahtesham: You always take his side…
Sofia: What was that?
Ahtesham: Nothing! Nothing at all!
Saim: Alright, enough. Let’s get going.
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[Near the Village Gate]
Elder Joan: Good morning, children. How are you today? Beautiful weather for a hunt, isn’t it? Are you all ready?
Saim: Yes, Elder. We’re ready.
Ahtesham: I’m going to hunt that bear today for sure!
Sofia: You’ve said that a hundred times. Just stick to rabbits and leave the bear alone.
Ahtesham: Why? Are you in love with the bear or something?
Sofia: Laughs Good one!
Saim: Let’s go before we come back empty-handed.
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[Same Night – Village Feast]
Elder Joan: Saim, the deer you hunted today was very healthy. It'll bring us a good profit.
Saim: Thank you, Elder.
Elder Joan: You all did great today, as always. Let’s pray and enjoy this meal together like one big family. May God keep our village at peace. I pray every night for our unity and prosperity.
Everyone: Ameen.
Elder Joan: Let’s eat.
Saim: Elder, any news from our brothers at the border?
Elder Joan: Nothing yet, son. But have faith. They’ll return soon.
Ahtesham: I want to fight on the front lines too.
Elder Joan: If everyone goes to the front lines, who will protect the village?
Ahtesham: As if the Hoolers care about our little village.
Saim: Watch your mouth, idiot!
Ahtesham: What?
Elder Joan: Laughs You two remind me of your parents. Ahtesham, your time will come. Be patient. Enjoy your youth.
Sofia: Worry about the bear first, then think about the border.
Ahtesham: One day I’ll make you eat those words.
Saim: I believe in you, Ahtesham. You’ll get that bear tomorrow.
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[Next Morning – Chaos Begins]
Gunfire and shouting in the distance
Ahtesham: What’s all that noise, brother?
Saim: Hooler forces—they’ve won the war! Ahtesham, get up and run to the forest now!
Ahtesham: No way! I’m staying to fight beside you!
Saim: Not now! Just do as I say!
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[Center of the Village]
Elder Joan: What do you want from us?
Inspector Shaiq: Your king has fallen. Doant now belongs to us. From now on, you’ll pay us a 20% monthly tax. Obey, and we won’t harm anyone.
Saim: We won’t give you anything. Leave us alone!
Shaiq: Are you threatening me, kid?
Elder Joan: He’s just a child. But you better listen to him.
Shaiq: You old fool. You better listen to me—or I’ll burn this whole village down!
Suddenly, an arrow pierces Shaiq’s chest
Shaiq: What the…?
Ahtesham: Oops… just missed a little.
Saim: Ahtesham! I told you to run!
Ahtesham: I told you—I’m staying. We fight together!
Shaiq: Soldiers! Kill them all!
Elder Joan: Defend the village!
Saim: Idiot! If you’d listened, you’d have a better chance of surviving!
Ahtesham: I’d rather die fighting!
Elder Joan: Protect the women and children!
Elder Joan: Saim, protect your brother! Take him to the cave at the top of the hill—it’s safe there!
Saim: I can’t leave you, Elder!
Elder Joan: It’s an order!
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[5 Minutes Later]
Jameel: They killed the Elder! Don’t let them escape!
Saim: Ahtesham, hide in that cave. Move the rock at the entrance once you’re inside.
Ahtesham: You brought me here just to hide?
Saim: I had no choice. Live—for me, for Elder, for everyone.
Hooler Soldier: There they are!
Saim: Go! Now!
Ahtesham: I won’t leave you!
Saim: Fine! Then follow me. We’ll climb that rock and defend ourselves.
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[Moments Later – Intense Battle]
Ahtesham: Brother… I think this is the end. We’ll meet in the next world.
Saim: I’m sorry, my brother. Please forgive me for this…
Saim pushes Ahtesham off the cliff toward the river below
Saim (thinking): I hope the river saves you. If I survive, I’ll find you. If not… forgive me.
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[Hours Later – Aftermath]
Shaiq: They were tougher than expected. How many men did we lose?
Hooler Soldier: 73, sir.
Shaiq: Damn these hunters…
Hooler Soldier: What about the women and children?
Shaiq: Kill them all. Burn the village.
To Be Continued…
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I hope Ahtesham will servive
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