plot: 7/10 Grammar: 8/10 Combination and understanding: 7/10 Total percentage: 73%
2021-09-16
1
🎐|Crystal-Line.
Uhm..It was good, but I expected the ending different. It differs from person to person, but I think the writers should have added something related to the planet she came from, ad that was essence, the climax of the story which brought changes in it. There were grammatical mistakes such as writing singular/plural where the opposite was required and the tenses changed in wrong way. From my side, Grammar : 7 Understanding : 8 Plot : 8 Total : 76.66%
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🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
What about her returning to earth?
ID: 0419
plot: 7/10
Grammar: 8/10
Combination and understanding: 7/10
Total percentage: 73%
2021-09-16
1
🎐|Crystal-Line.
Uhm..It was good, but I expected the ending different. It differs from person to person, but I think the writers should have added something related to the planet she came from, ad that was essence, the climax of the story which brought changes in it. There were grammatical mistakes such as writing singular/plural where the opposite was required and the tenses changed in wrong way.
From my side,
Grammar : 7
Understanding : 8
Plot : 8
Total : 76.66%
2021-07-28
0