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SOT: 7 Days: To Live Or To Die
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🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
ID: 0417
Plot: 8.5/10
Grammar: 7/10
Combination and understanding: 8/10
Total percentage: 78%
2021-09-16
1
🎐|Crystal-Line.
Uhm... the story is good, but their are many mistakes. For grammatical errors, I must say writers should focus on articles and tenses more. Starting fro past the changes went on to present, which made it a bit confusing. One more important aspect for writing is giving names to the characters. Like , it isn't clear to me that which lady's talk is going on at certain moments. The other things should be the reasons, if the writer's wrote reasons for fiancé and son's contempt over their death, then that might have been a good back up for readers to like the story.
from my side,
Grammar : 7
Plot : 7.5
Understanding : 8
Total : 75%
2021-07-28
0