wow am happy that my story ended just the way i would have ended it ... thanks you Arnia zennol and queen of hearts... it was pleasure doing the chain of stories... thank u ❤️
2021-09-20
2
🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
Story was good. ID: 0414
Plot: 8/10 Grammar: 7/10 Combination and understanding: 8/10 Total percentage: 77%
2021-09-16
1
🎐|Crystal-Line.
Ah, the ending was sad. I actually thought it would turn out as a common plot set up..but the last two lines changed it. It was good, but had few grammatical errors, like the names should start from capital letters and usage of capital words with small felt a bit off. But at the end I liked it..👍 From my side, Understanding : 9 Grammar : 7.5 Plot : 8 Total : 81.66%
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Zyra 💜 GLC Editor
wow am happy that my story ended just the way i would have ended it ... thanks you Arnia zennol and queen of hearts... it was pleasure doing the chain of stories... thank u ❤️
2021-09-20
2
🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
Story was good.
ID: 0414
Plot: 8/10
Grammar: 7/10
Combination and understanding: 8/10
Total percentage: 77%
2021-09-16
1
🎐|Crystal-Line.
Ah, the ending was sad. I actually thought it would turn out as a common plot set up..but the last two lines changed it. It was good, but had few grammatical errors, like the names should start from capital letters and usage of capital words with small felt a bit off. But at the end I liked it..👍
From my side,
Understanding : 9
Grammar : 7.5
Plot : 8
Total : 81.66%
2021-07-25
0