Liked the story. Love makes us blind and fool. At the end of the day, we still can't forget our loved one no matter how much they hurt us.
" You don't even need a gun You don't even need a pill If you ever wanna die, Fall in love and you'll get killed..."
For me, Plot: 9/10 Grammar:8/10 Combination and understanding: 9/10 Percentage: 87/100
2021-09-15
2
Ayaan (MTDC: Advisor)
wow I really liked the story! the poetic way of writing of the first writer was a good job. especially how the feeling went changing from one paragraph to another is appreciable. although, the middle writer could have done a better job. the middle part was honestly not impressive to me. the middle part of the story is like the body and main part which shows the plot. uh imagine a person with a large head and large legs but the torso and everything is small 😅 the ending was good and is exactly what readers look forward to. the way the first person started to write, sort of showed the the story is going to be descriptive further on, so the lack of descriptive plot was surprising but NOT very disappointing.
grammar: 9.5 plot: 8 understanding: 9 (it was impressive may be cause there wasn't any story plot but only feelings) way of writing: 9.5 overall: 90%
Comments
вℓσѕѕσм 🍁🍂
such a good story...I really like it...
plot: 8
grammar: 9
understanding: 9
percentage: 86%
2021-09-17
1
🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
ID: 0403
Liked the story. Love makes us blind and fool. At the end of the day, we still can't forget our loved one no matter how much they hurt us.
" You don't even need a gun
You don't even need a pill
If you ever wanna die,
Fall in love and you'll get killed..."
For me,
Plot: 9/10
Grammar:8/10
Combination and understanding: 9/10
Percentage: 87/100
2021-09-15
2
Ayaan (MTDC: Advisor)
wow I really liked the story! the poetic way of writing of the first writer was a good job. especially how the feeling went changing from one paragraph to another is appreciable.
although, the middle writer could have done a better job. the middle part was honestly not impressive to me. the middle part of the story is like the body and main part which shows the plot. uh imagine a person with a large head and large legs but the torso and everything is small 😅
the ending was good and is exactly what readers look forward to.
the way the first person started to write, sort of showed the the story is going to be descriptive further on, so the lack of descriptive plot was surprising but NOT very disappointing.
grammar: 9.5
plot: 8
understanding: 9 (it was impressive may be cause there wasn't any story plot but only feelings)
way of writing: 9.5
overall: 90%
2021-07-25
1