the story is really a good one..I like the place changing things which usually happens in the reborn case...there is no grammatical mistakes...I really enjoyed reading this... overall it's a good story....
[ point of view ] : 8 [ Plot ] : 9/10 [ Grammar ] : 10 /10 [ Combination and understanding ] : 8/10 [ Percentage ] : 86%
2021-09-16
1
🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
ID: Chain 0401
Actually, the title is not that suitable for this story. It didn't describe the whole story. Title is very important for a story cause most of the we guess the story from its title. And it was hard to understand the last part. The story has its own charm but it could be better. I got the feelings like a flower didn't blossom fully yet. However I liked this story. Good story.
For me, Plot: 7/10 Grammar: 10/10 Combination and understanding: 7/10
2021-09-14
1
𖤍𖠌ᵛᶜʳ•ᴊᴜɴɪᴏʀᴄʀɪᴛɪᴄ•ᵐᵗᵈᶜ☆♡
The story was great , a fantasy story ended up like that. It was cumulative and had consistency throughout even though being writen by different people. Overall, the story was good
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the story is really a good one..I like the place changing things which usually happens in the reborn case...there is no grammatical mistakes...I really enjoyed reading this... overall it's a good story....
[ point of view ] : 8
[ Plot ] : 9/10
[ Grammar ] : 10 /10
[ Combination and understanding ] : 8/10
[ Percentage ] : 86%
2021-09-16
1
🇵🇸 Valt Aoi MTNp
ID: Chain 0401
Actually, the title is not that suitable for this story. It didn't describe the whole story. Title is very important for a story cause most of the we guess the story from its title. And it was hard to understand the last part. The story has its own charm but it could be better. I got the feelings like a flower didn't blossom fully yet. However I liked this story. Good story.
For me,
Plot: 7/10
Grammar: 10/10
Combination and understanding: 7/10
2021-09-14
1
𖤍𖠌ᵛᶜʳ•ᴊᴜɴɪᴏʀᴄʀɪᴛɪᴄ•ᵐᵗᵈᶜ☆♡
The story was great , a fantasy story ended up like that. It was cumulative and had consistency throughout even though being writen by different people. Overall, the story was good
~ Junior
2021-07-08
0