hello this comment is only for author author you are lacking in writing skills am sorry to say this story is horrible cause this doesn't even make sense and for your kind information I never hated any story except this and there are many reasons for one sane person who love stories to hate this story for example grammar mistakes, there are many sences that doesn't make any sense in real world nor story world , and when they had 5 years leap how did her children became 9 years old? because before the leap her children weren't there and even if she got pregnant at that time her children will be 4-5 years old after leap 😑😑😑 is your mathematics weak ? cause you don't even know simple calculation 😑😑😑😑 7 year old kid can do that calculation 😑😑 and which grandparents and mother teach their childs to revenge for them ?😐😐😐 and if you said why did I even read this story I'll tell you because I never leave any complete story in the meddle 😐😐😑😑
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Tanaaz Khan
really very nice story 😊
2023-02-21
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goblin's_bride👰👰
hello this comment is only for author
author you are lacking in writing skills am sorry to say this story is horrible cause this doesn't even make sense and for your kind information I never hated any story except this and there are many reasons for one sane person who love stories to hate this story for example grammar mistakes, there are many sences that doesn't make any sense in real world nor story world , and when they had 5 years leap how did her children became 9 years old? because before the leap her children weren't there and even if she got pregnant at that time her children will be 4-5 years old after leap 😑😑😑 is your mathematics weak ? cause you don't even know simple calculation 😑😑😑😑 7 year old kid can do that calculation 😑😑 and which grandparents and mother teach their childs to revenge for them ?😐😐😐
and if you said why did I even read this story I'll tell you because I never leave any complete story in the meddle 😐😐😑😑
2021-12-27
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yhan yhan
soooo goooood
2021-10-30
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