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kate MTN (R)(P)
That's it, I want more, This was my thoughts.
So Let me gather up the facts,
I like the story, it take a lot of twists and turns. I like it. It happened sometimes you unknowingly had some errors like, refering Alice as Him... Just somewhere here and there. And, I want you to use The punctuation properly. It went out sometime.
But overall it's fab. It's a Bob. I wish you a good luck for this good work author. There was no grammar error I found..But sometimes, the characters went off like, we don't know who asked ali to take care of Adam, Why Ace was acting mysterious at the first. What was that snake is...
~reader from MTN Community
2021-03-22
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Someone MDC-P
wow... the plot is good. specially the ending👁️👁️ WIFE!!
The writing was a bit vague and there were grammatical errors here and there. a small correction: either write into he first person perspective or the narrator's perspective... here it's mainly first person perspective, so maintain that. don't mix up with the narrator perspective in between. Keep this in mind while writing next season. Good luck👌
2021-03-22
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AJ
Never thought of this twist. It was really an amazing story i would say. Update more author.... The story is super duper awesome.
~Readers from mtn community 🤗🤗🤗
2021-03-20
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