So, It was good Elizabeth is a little troublesome girl but insipite of that her heart is pure. The boy came and she Helped him . So, yeah it was good But, like till now Romance theme Didn't showed much . Like Little it should show as Romance is a your sub-Genre so it should also be shown. Your Vocabulary, Writing Style and grammar is perfect as writing a novel. Which I really appreciated. I hope you will work more on it. -Readers From MTN Community.
2021-01-08
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Lucas
hm..I still actually didn't understand what exactly the plot is. I mean the girl has a bad luck and now she's adopted by a lady so..I don't know why but I think that the story is progressing little too slow..It feels like you're telling everyday story of the girl but nothing special is actually happening that is to be told...the writing style is nice it's quite expressive and there are no grammatical errors which is good too
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SAN{MTN}
So, It was good Elizabeth is a little troublesome girl but insipite of that her heart is pure. The boy came and she Helped him . So, yeah it was good But, like till now Romance theme Didn't showed much . Like Little it should show as Romance is a your sub-Genre so it should also be shown. Your Vocabulary, Writing Style and grammar is perfect as writing a novel. Which I really appreciated. I hope you will work more on it.
-Readers From MTN Community.
2021-01-08
1
Lucas
hm..I still actually didn't understand what exactly the plot is. I mean the girl has a bad luck and now she's adopted by a lady so..I don't know why but I think that the story is progressing little too slow..It feels like you're telling everyday story of the girl but nothing special is actually happening that is to be told...the writing style is nice it's quite expressive and there are no grammatical errors which is good too
2021-01-08
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