End.? How can it be end.? I didn't understood what was end in it.? Can someone tell me what's it.? Are you gonna make a season 2 of this novel.?
Overall the novel was great it's just I wasn't able to understand the end...Emotions I the whole story was described so beautifully! And I have to say that you are really a good writer!
~Reader From MTN Community
2021-04-23
1
Someone MDC-P
end??? that was sooo happy.. it felt like a classic novel. Ending the arc on that note.... I soo want a printed book published of this..
*don't take it negatively* there was not a single problem or plot hole I found here... but only that part where they invaded into the headquarters, it felt too easy. could have like added some more or a plot armour.. it felt blank there. apart from that the ending and all was all great.. though I wish the ending would be a bit longer with more charm of yours to detail every emotions that you portrayed in early chapters.
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End.? How can it be end.? I didn't understood what was end in it.? Can someone tell me what's it.? Are you gonna make a season 2 of this novel.?
Overall the novel was great it's just I wasn't able to understand the end...Emotions I the whole story was described so beautifully! And I have to say that you are really a good writer!
~Reader From MTN Community
2021-04-23
1
Someone MDC-P
end??? that was sooo happy.. it felt like a classic novel. Ending the arc on that note.... I soo want a printed book published of this..
*don't take it negatively* there was not a single problem or plot hole I found here... but only that part where they invaded into the headquarters, it felt too easy. could have like added some more or a plot armour.. it felt blank there. apart from that the ending and all was all great.. though I wish the ending would be a bit longer with more charm of yours to detail every emotions that you portrayed in early chapters.
2021-03-17
1